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“Moke―!!”
 
“Moke―!!”
   
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“Mokee13:23, 15 February 2015 (CST)13:23, 15 February 2015 (CST)13:23, 15 February 2015 (CST)~~!!”
“Mokee~~~~~~~!!”
 
   
 
Though she knocked them down and knocked them down they came boiling up. Although Souji’s nightmare of an endless battle was now becoming a reality, TailBlue didn’t shrink from it at all but kept cutting straight ahead and throwing them away.
 
Though she knocked them down and knocked them down they came boiling up. Although Souji’s nightmare of an endless battle was now becoming a reality, TailBlue didn’t shrink from it at all but kept cutting straight ahead and throwing them away.
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But although she had known that twintails were the only things Souji loved, she hadn’t put her hair in twintails even once. Not hadn’t, but couldn’t. Now that she had parted with her Twintail Element, she didn’t have the single easiest way to appeal to the man she had fallen in love with anymore. All she could do was attack him with seduction. ...Perhaps that was overthinking it.
 
But although she had known that twintails were the only things Souji loved, she hadn’t put her hair in twintails even once. Not hadn’t, but couldn’t. Now that she had parted with her Twintail Element, she didn’t have the single easiest way to appeal to the man she had fallen in love with anymore. All she could do was attack him with seduction. ...Perhaps that was overthinking it.
   
Come to think of it, she said the script she polished over and over again was broken the moment it started, Aika thought with a bitter smile.
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Come to think of it, she said that the script she polished over and over again was broken the moment it started, Aika remembered with a bitter laugh.
   
 
The pain that ran through her chest when she saw Souji talking so happily about the student council president. Maybe that was what Twoearle was always feeling.
 
The pain that ran through her chest when she saw Souji talking so happily about the student council president. Maybe that was what Twoearle was always feeling.
   
She understood that the feelings of her rival were real, but... no, unexpectedly, she felt cheerful.
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She understood that the feelings of her rival were real, but... no, unexpectedly, she felt happy.
   
 
“We’ve got the same troubles, don’t we, Twoearle.”
 
“We’ve got the same troubles, don’t we, Twoearle.”
   
Aika said it in a low voice like a whisper, and then right afterward took a deep breath as hard as she could.
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Aika said just those few words in a low voice like a whisper, and then right afterward took a deep breath as hard as she could.
   
 
“...Though I can say it with all my heart cause Souji’s not here...! You perverts!!”
 
“...Though I can say it with all my heart cause Souji’s not here...! You perverts!!”
   
Her swaying twintails as she fought were as lovely as mermaids swimming in an Emerald sea.
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Her swaying twintails as she fought were as sweet as mermaids swimming in an Emerald sea.
   
“Stop trying to steal it from me so casually, okay! I’ve gone through a lot for this hair!!”
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“Don’t try and grab it away so easily, all right! I’ve gone through a lot for this hair!!”
   
 
The spear thrusts like bursting splashes of water created on earth a sea of stars.
 
The spear thrusts like bursting splashes of water created on earth a sea of stars.
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Take responsibility... for being the one who gave me this Elemera―――
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Take responsibility for this... for being the one who gave me this Elemera―――
   
   
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