Editing Ore, Twintail ni Narimasu:Volume 1 Chapter 4

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“Red...”
 
“Red...”
   
“Twintails can only be twintails once they have the head that holds them up...”
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“Twintails can only be twintails when they have the head that holds them up...”
   
 
With Twoearle in the middle between us, three lined up together―
 
With Twoearle in the middle between us, three lined up together―
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Now more than ever, we were the true Twintails.
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Now more than ever, we became the true Twintails.
   
 
“Aah, what a gallant and dashing young girl... the drool won’t stop... uwehehehe”
 
“Aah, what a gallant and dashing young girl... the drool won’t stop... uwehehehe”
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“I trust you. I leave it to you, Aika.”
 
“I trust you. I leave it to you, Aika.”
   
“That’s my line. After all this buildup, if we lose they’re going to laugh at us on the net.”
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“That’s my line. After all this setup, if we lose they’re going to laugh at us on the net.”
   
 
“I don’t want that. I guess I better not lose, then.”
 
“I don’t want that. I guess I better not lose, then.”

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