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"Think about it. Up until now, you've been practicing confessions during club activities, right? Compared to that time when your tongue slipped and said, 「I'm going to confehsuyu!」, you've already improved a lot. |
"Think about it. Up until now, you've been practicing confessions during club activities, right? Compared to that time when your tongue slipped and said, 「I'm going to confehsuyu!」, you've already improved a lot. |
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When I finished speaking, Chiwa's face turned an even brighter red. |
When I finished speaking, Chiwa's face turned an even brighter red. |
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"Just then! That was just the speakers in my stomach!" |
"Just then! That was just the speakers in my stomach!" |
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<!--Speaker as in horns, loudspeakers. IDK what this is supposed to be though--> |
<!--Speaker as in horns, loudspeakers. IDK what this is supposed to be though--> |
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− | <!--Pretty sure this is fine, it's just referring to a musical device that increases amplitude--> |
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"…you…" |
"…you…" |