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"Welcome to my humble abode, princess."
 
"Welcome to my humble abode, princess."
   
"Hey! That's rude!<!--失礼します--> I've been here a lot of times already. There's no need to do this anymore."
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"Hey! Thats rude!<!--失礼します--> I've been here a lot of times already. There's no need to do this anymore."
   
 
"Hey, Chiemi, long time no see! Are you coming to play today?" Nobuaki's mum asked.
 
"Hey, Chiemi, long time no see! Are you coming to play today?" Nobuaki's mum asked.
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"Do you want me to bring your dinner to Nobuaki's room?"
 
"Do you want me to bring your dinner to Nobuaki's room?"
   
"Eh? Wouldn't that be too troublesome?"
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"Huh! Wouldn't that be too troublesome?"
   
 
Having heard what Nobuaki's mum had said, Chiemi rubbed her hands joyfully.
 
Having heard what Nobuaki's mum had said, Chiemi rubbed her hands joyfully.
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*END]
 
*END]
   
"Is this for real?"
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"Is this for real..."
   
 
Nobuaki's eyes met Chiemi's again.
 
Nobuaki's eyes met Chiemi's again.
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"Yeah! I agree."
 
"Yeah! I agree."
   
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The next day, the two of them arrived at school a bit earlier than usual. When they arrived at the classroom, Hideki was already sitting on the teacher's desk as if waiting for his classmates' arrival.
 
The next day, the two of them arrived at school a bit earlier than usual. When they arrived at the classroom, Hideki was already sitting on the teacher's desk as if waiting for his classmates' arrival.
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Seeing him in such high spirits, Nobuaki was startled.
 
Seeing him in such high spirits, Nobuaki was startled.
   
"Isn't this too going too far? The King's Game already scared Yuuko to tears yesterday."
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"Isn't this too going too far? The King's game already scared Yuuko to tears yesterday."
   
 
"What!? Yesterday was a nightmare for me! But tonight I'll sleep well."
 
"What!? Yesterday was a nightmare for me! But tonight I'll sleep well."
   
Listening to his exhilarated tone, Nobuaki could not help but feel a bit sad and sighed.
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Listening to his exhilarated tone, Nobuaki, who could not help but feel sad, sighed.
   
 
"Say, when will the King's Game end?"
 
"Say, when will the King's Game end?"
   
"When the King stops sending messages!"
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"Until the King stops sending messages!"
   
"Are you nuts? Just stop playing. I thought that it was funny at first, but, when I saw Yuuko yesterday..."
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"Are you nuts? Stop playing. I thought that it was funny at first, but, when I saw Yuuko yesterday..."
   
 
"Who cares!"
 
"Who cares!"
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"What...do you...want?"
 
"What...do you...want?"
   
"Hey! Did you run off to play Pachinko<ref>Pachinko (パチンコ?) is a mechanical game originating in Japan and is used as both a form of recreational arcade game and much more frequently as a gambling device, filling a Japanese gambling niche comparable to that of the slot machine in Western gaming.</ref>? I can hear the sounds of shuffling tiles<ref>Tiles are dealt in Mahjong. Mahjong is a game that originated in China, commonly played by four players (with some three-player variations found in Korea and Japan).</ref>. Highschoolers shouldn't go play Pachinko, you idiot! I'm hanging up!"
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"Hey! Did you run off to play Pachinko<ref>Pachinko (パチンコ?) is a mechanical game originating in Japan and is used as both a form of recreational arcade game and much more frequently as a gambling device, filling a Japanese gambling niche comparable to that of the slot machine in Western gaming.</ref>? I can hear the sounds of shuffling tiles<ref>Tiles are dealt in Mahjong. Mahjong is a game that originated in China, commonly played by four players (with some three-player variations found in Korea and Japan).</ref>. Highschoolers shouldn't go play Pachinko! You idiot! I'm hanging up!"
   
 
Nobuaki turned off his phone and threw it on top of his blanket. Because he didn't receive the [obedience confirmed] message, he wanted to ask Hideki whether he had followed the command or not. He could not imagine that Hideki had already gone nuts and ignored it completely. Forget it—he thought—I don't care anymore.
 
Nobuaki turned off his phone and threw it on top of his blanket. Because he didn't receive the [obedience confirmed] message, he wanted to ask Hideki whether he had followed the command or not. He could not imagine that Hideki had already gone nuts and ignored it completely. Forget it—he thought—I don't care anymore.
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*END]
 
*END]
   
"What's going on? What's this message about?! The punishment for Hideki and Satomi is to be 'hung by the neck'? What does this mean?"
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"What's going on? What's this message about?! The punishment of Hideki and Satomi is to be 'hung by the neck'? What does this mean?"
   
 
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