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"It's almost time for the morning assembly..."
 
"It's almost time for the morning assembly..."
   
After a short while the teacher came into the classroom, bringing along with him a heavy atmosphere. In the end, Hideki and Satomi didn't show up. The students returned to their seats one by one. When they were seated, the teacher spoke in a serious manner, "I have some bad news. Toyoda Hideki and Ishii Satomi passed away last night. Their guardians notified the school this morning."
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After a short while the teacher came in the classroom, bringing along with him a strange atmosphere. At the end, Hideki and Satomi didn't show up. The students returned to their seats one by one. When they were done, the teacher spoke in a serious tone, "I have some bad news. Toyoda Hideki and Ishii Satomi passed away last night. Their guardians notified the school this morning."
   
His words stirred up a commotion in the classroom. Nobuaki stood up and asked, "Sir, about the death of Hideki and Satomi... Were they hung?"
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His words stirred up a commotion in the classroom. Nobuaki stood up from his seat and asked, "Sir, about the death of Hideki and Satomi... Were they hanged?"
   
 
For an instant the teacher's breath was taken away.
 
For an instant the teacher's breath was taken away.
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"Err..."
 
"Err..."
   
"Their parents suspected that their children were being bullied in school, but we teachers have assured them that there was no bullying whatsoever."
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"Their parents suspect their children were bullied in school, but we teachers have assured them that there was no bullying whatsoever."
   
"Hideki isn't someone who would commit suicide because he's being bullied! He isn't!" Nobuaki roared. Chiemi, on the other hand, covered her face with her hands and sobbed.
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"Hideki isn't someone that would suicide because he's bullied! He isn't!" Nobuaki roared promptly. Chiemi, on the other hand, covered her face with her hands and cried.
   
 
"Yeah! There was also no one bullying Satomi..."
 
"Yeah! There was also no one bullying Satomi..."
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The teacher tried to calm the students down, "I thought so too, so please don't blame yourselves!"
 
The teacher tried to calm the students down, "I thought so too, so please don't blame yourselves!"
   
Some in the classroom cried painfully; some lowered their heads; and others were restless and you could see the uneasiness on their faces. At this chaotic moment, someone shouted, "Does this have something to do with the King's command yesterday?"
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Some in the classroom cried painfully; some others lowered their heads; some others were restless and you could see the uneasiness on their faces. At this blank moment, someone shouted, "Does this have something to do with the command of the King's Game yesterday?"
   
 
The classroom filled with whispering sounds once again.
 
The classroom filled with whispering sounds once again.
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"What is that? What's the King's Game about?" asked their teacher. He obviously knew nothing about the King's Game.
 
"What is that? What's the King's Game about?" asked their teacher. He obviously knew nothing about the King's Game.
   
Nobuaki told the teacher about the events that had transpired.
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Nobuaki explained to the teacher the things that happened every day in the class.
   
That everyone in the class would receive a message at midnight. That the message would contain a command for a few members of the class. That Hideki and Satomi did not follow their command, so they had received punishment.
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Everyone in the class would receive a message at midnight. The message will contain a command for a few classmates in the class. Hideki and Satomi did not follow the command, so they had received punishments. Nobuaki reported to the teacher his thoughts.
   
"How can anything like this happen! Why would you even believe in such a stupid message? I know it's hard for you to believe this, but please don't get too involved in these matters. Just continue to focus on your studies. The morning assembly for today ends here." Wanting to quickly drop the subject, their teacher ended the assembly.
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"How can anything like that happen on earth! Would you even believe in such a stupid message? I know it's hard for you to believe this, but please don't get too involved in these matters. Just continue to focus on your studies. The morning assembly for today ends here." Wanting to quickly drop the subject, their teacher ended the assembly.
   
 
"Wait, Sir! How can we focus our studies during something like this!?" A student called to the teacher, but he had already left.
 
"Wait, Sir! How can we focus our studies during something like this!?" A student called to the teacher, but he had already left.

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