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Chiemi wiped off her tears and smiled to cover up her sad face. She held on tightly to Nobauki by the sleeves of his uniform, as if telling him she was ready to go. <!-- Big liberal changes here -->
 
Chiemi wiped off her tears and smiled to cover up her sad face. She held on tightly to Nobauki by the sleeves of his uniform, as if telling him she was ready to go. <!-- Big liberal changes here -->
   
On their way home, the two did not talk. They were scared that if they did, they might talk about Hideki and Satomi.<!-- Original text: [Just thinking of them stimulates their tear glands] What the hell, how damn literal was this translation? M.K.--> Just thinking about them made them tear up, so they stopped talking so they would forget about the King's Game. Chiemi held tightly to Nobuai's sleeves the entire way for emotional support. They still didn't talk after they had entered Nobuaki's room. All they could do, they thought, was snuggle up to each other and heal their injured hearts with their body warmth.
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On their way home, the two did not talk. They were scared that if they did, they might talk Hideki and Satomi.<!-- Original text: [Just thinking of them stimulates their tear glands] What the hell, how damn literal was this translation? M.K.--> Just thinking about them made them tear up, so they stopped talking so they would forget about the King's Game. Chiemi held tightly to Nobuai's sleeves the entire way for emotional support. They still didn't talk after they had entered Nobuaki's room. All they could do, they thought, was snuggle up to each other and heal their injured hearts with their body warmth.
   
 
Suddenly, after some time, their phones rang together.
 
Suddenly, after some time, their phones rang together.

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