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Shouta held up his fist and slammed it into Daisuke, smashing his face into the wall and causing his nose to spurt out blood. Shouta wanted to punch him once again, but was stopped by Nobuaki. |
Shouta held up his fist and slammed it into Daisuke, smashing his face into the wall and causing his nose to spurt out blood. Shouta wanted to punch him once again, but was stopped by Nobuaki. |
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− | "Stop |
+ | "Stop! Stop fighting! Even if it was Daisuke's fault, you've gone too far!" |
Nobuaki got hold of Shouta and forced him to let go of Daisuke. |
Nobuaki got hold of Shouta and forced him to let go of Daisuke. |
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*[10/23 Friday 8:21 |
*[10/23 Friday 8:21 |
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+ | *From: The King |
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+ | *Subject: The King's Game |
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+ | *Body: This is the King's Game in which everyone in your class is participating. The King's command is absolute and must be done within 24 hours. ※ You can not withdraw from the game. |
**Command 5: Student Number 17 Tasaki Daisuke — Tasaki Daisuke will have to hang himself. |
**Command 5: Student Number 17 Tasaki Daisuke — Tasaki Daisuke will have to hang himself. |
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*END] |
*END] |
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"Yeah! The most important thing now is to think of a way to solve Daisuke's problem." |
"Yeah! The most important thing now is to think of a way to solve Daisuke's problem." |
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− | Chiemi and Naoya hurried to Nobuaki to stop him, trying to |
+ | Chiemi and Naoya hurried to Nobuaki to stop him, trying to relax him. |
"Chiemi, tell the teacher when he arrives that I'll be coming back to the classroom a bit late. I'm off to find Daisuke." |
"Chiemi, tell the teacher when he arrives that I'll be coming back to the classroom a bit late. I'm off to find Daisuke." |
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"I want to stay here for a bit longer." |
"I want to stay here for a bit longer." |
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− | "Then I'll stay as well! We'll |
+ | "Then I'll stay as well! We'll get back later and get scolded by the teacher together." |
Nobuaki stretched his hand towards Daisuke; and at this moment, |
Nobuaki stretched his hand towards Daisuke; and at this moment, |
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At the classroom's door, Nobuaki knew already the lesson has started. He nervously opened the door. |
At the classroom's door, Nobuaki knew already the lesson has started. He nervously opened the door. |
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− | "Hey! You two! Where did you go? |
+ | "Hey! You two! Where did you go? Class had started a long time ago." |
Nobuaki apologized and headed into the classroom. |
Nobuaki apologized and headed into the classroom. |
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*[10/23 Friday 09:23 |
*[10/23 Friday 09:23 |
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+ | *From: Honda Chiemi |
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+ | *Subject: Thank you for your hard work <!-- お疲れ様--> |
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+ | *Body: It's great that you brought Daisuke back, even though you got scolded. Oh and by the way, do you really have hemorrhoids? |
*END] |
*END] |
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"Sorry. I'm late!" |
"Sorry. I'm late!" |
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− | "Don't worry! We have someone else |
+ | "Don't worry! We have someone else to help us<!-- is this fine for English? I know this is a move in Pokemon-->."<!-- It's alright, although there are better ways to write what you meant. MK--> |
Naoya , who was hiding behind Nobuaki, poked his head out. <!--What? I thought Naoya was a shy loli for a sec--> |
Naoya , who was hiding behind Nobuaki, poked his head out. <!--What? I thought Naoya was a shy loli for a sec--> |
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*[10/23 Fridy 23:55 |
*[10/23 Fridy 23:55 |
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+ | *From: The King |
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+ | *Subject: The King's Game |
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+ | *Body: 5 Minutes Left |
*End] |
*End] |
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*[10/23 Friday 23:58 |
*[10/23 Friday 23:58 |
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− | * |
+ | *From: The King |
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+ | *Subject: The King's Game |
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+ | *Body: 60 Seconds Left |
*END] |
*END] |
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*[10/23 Friday 23:59 |
*[10/23 Friday 23:59 |
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− | * |
+ | *From: The King |
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+ | *Subject: The King's Game |
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+ | *Body: Because the King's command was not carried out, the following person would be hung by the neck as a punishment: Student Number 17 Tasaki Daisuke |
*END] |
*END] |
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Looking up to the bed, Nobuaki found Daisuke was not on it. He turned on the lamp and looked around. |
Looking up to the bed, Nobuaki found Daisuke was not on it. He turned on the lamp and looked around. |
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− | What he saw was Daisuke hung dead on the other side of the room. |
+ | What he saw was Daisuke hung dead on the other side of the room. |
His face showed an expression of extreme pain. His neck had numerous scratching scars and his arms were long impotent and dangling loosely beside his body. |
His face showed an expression of extreme pain. His neck had numerous scratching scars and his arms were long impotent and dangling loosely beside his body. |