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The gaze stopped and waited as she smiled and ran over.
 
The gaze stopped and waited as she smiled and ran over.
   
“Shahrnavaz, should the future queen really be out here? Hm?”
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“Shahrnaz, should the future queen really be out here? Hm?”
   
 
“What about you, brother? Why doesn’t 9th-Gear’s general have anyone accompanying him?”
 
“What about you, brother? Why doesn’t 9th-Gear’s general have anyone accompanying him?”
   
“That’s fine. That’s fine, Shahrnavaz. I have the power to move an army. If I don’t do my best to hide that fact in everyday life, the politicians will get scared. Isn’t that right?”
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“That’s fine. That’s fine, Shahrnaz. I have the power to move an army. If I don’t do my best to hide that fact in everyday life, the politicians will get scared. Isn’t that right?”
   
 
“But the people in the palace are complaining about that. They say the current general is unreliable.”
 
“But the people in the palace are complaining about that. They say the current general is unreliable.”
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“I’m not so sure.”
 
“I’m not so sure.”
   
“Shahrnavaz, you are supposed to say ‘of course he is’. Or do you want to be burned at the stake? Hm?”
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“Shahrnaz, you are supposed to say ‘of course he is’. Or do you want to be burned at the stake? Hm?”
   
Shahrnavaz smiled bitterly at that.
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Shahrnaz smiled bitterly at that.
   
 
She then slowly looked behind the owner of the gaze.
 
She then slowly looked behind the owner of the gaze.
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“That is enough. If we no longer need to worry about water, 9th can develop even further.”
 
“That is enough. If we no longer need to worry about water, 9th can develop even further.”
   
“Yes,” agreed Shahrnavaz. “He looked at what 9th-Gear did in the past and predicted that the remnants of the other Gears would continue to attack this world even after those other Gears were destroyed. For example, what happens if 5th’s mechanical dragons regain their memories? Right now, he is working to stop the palace from attacking 10th using an underground force in 10th. He says we should attack Low-Gear first.”
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“Yes,” agreed Shahrnaz. “He looked at what 9th-Gear did in the past and predicted that the remnants of the other Gears would continue to attack this world even after those other Gears were destroyed. For example, what happens if 5th’s mechanical dragons regain their memories? Right now, he is working to stop the palace from attacking 10th using an underground force in 10th. He says we should attack Low-Gear first.”
   
 
“He wants to rid them of their defiant spirit with a crushing defeat and to solve the mystery of Low-Gear, doesn’t he?”
 
“He wants to rid them of their defiant spirit with a crushing defeat and to solve the mystery of Low-Gear, doesn’t he?”
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“Great possibility and great destruction?” he repeated.
 
“Great possibility and great destruction?” he repeated.
   
Shahrnavaz nodded and looked him in the eye.
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Shahrnaz nodded and looked him in the eye.
   
 
“I do not know what he meant, but he also said Zahhak would help gather everything in the name of righteousness. And he said he needs your help.”
 
“I do not know what he meant, but he also said Zahhak would help gather everything in the name of righteousness. And he said he needs your help.”
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“Hm.”
 
“Hm.”
   
The owner of the gaze clearly did not understand, so Shahrnavaz smiled. She took a step back, leaned forward, and looked up at her thinking brother.
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The owner of the gaze clearly did not understand, so Shahrnaz smiled. She took a step back, leaned forward, and looked up at her thinking brother.
   
 
“Well, once you and Sarv return from Low-Gear, Zahhak’s brain should be complete. Then the palace won’t be able to complain. …Sarv’s been having a tough time. He said going to Low-Gear and searching for that ‘possibility and destruction’ would let him avoid speaking with the palace.”
 
“Well, once you and Sarv return from Low-Gear, Zahhak’s brain should be complete. Then the palace won’t be able to complain. …Sarv’s been having a tough time. He said going to Low-Gear and searching for that ‘possibility and destruction’ would let him avoid speaking with the palace.”
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“I see. Then I need to bring him back safely. Yes. …For that and for your official marriage.”
 
“I see. Then I need to bring him back safely. Yes. …For that and for your official marriage.”
   
“Oh, my,” said Shahrnavaz with a smile.
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“Oh, my,” said Shahrnaz with a smile.
   
 
She turned back toward the gaze but then looked to the city.
 
She turned back toward the gaze but then looked to the city.

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