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It was a sticky sweat. It felt like his movement had twisted his body and forced out the moisture.
 
It was a sticky sweat. It felt like his movement had twisted his body and forced out the moisture.
   
His arms trembled from the shoulder down and he could not gather strength in his fingers. His back was stiff and he had to tense his abs to make sure he did not collapse backwards like a clockwork doll.
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His arms trembled from the shoulder down and he could not gather strength in his fingers. His back was stiff and he had tense his abs to make sure he did not collapse backwards like a clockwork doll.
   
 
The joints of his back were all as stiff as if they were connected by a nail and he had to force his muscles to move properly if he wanted to bend so much as a finger.
 
The joints of his back were all as stiff as if they were connected by a nail and he had to force his muscles to move properly if he wanted to bend so much as a finger.

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