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The school building was covered in nearly olive-colored tiles and it stood twenty-three stories tall.
 
The school building was covered in nearly olive-colored tiles and it stood twenty-three stories tall.
   
The university’s winter break had begun at this time of year, so not many people left even at six in the evening.
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The university’s winter break was had begun at this time of year, so not many people left even at six in the evening.
   
 
But he spoke regardless. He spoke into the cellphone held to his left ear.
 
But he spoke regardless. He spoke into the cellphone held to his left ear.
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To lighten his load, he threw out the contents of his backpack.
 
To lighten his load, he threw out the contents of his backpack.
   
…''Ahh, and there were some rare DVDs and games in there.
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…''Ahh, and here were some rare DVDs and games in there.
   
 
He cried as he ran and tossed the items backwards.
 
He cried as he ran and tossed the items backwards.
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Hiba did not know.
 
Hiba did not know.
   
All he knew was that Hajji had not once done anything remotely unfair during their battle. He had done a few things like that during the attack on UCAT, yet he had done no such thing during this battle that he absolutely had to win.
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All he knew was that Hajji had not once done anything remotely unfair during their battle. He had one a few things like that during the attack on UCAT, yet he had done no such thing during this battle that he absolutely had to win.
   
 
That meant he was not willing to win at all costs.
 
That meant he was not willing to win at all costs.

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