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“And you won’t even admit it!? How was any of that not filthy? How are you not a pedo!? Honestly, I’m promoting you from genuine to super genuine! I hope you become a white dwarf and shrink away!”
 
“And you won’t even admit it!? How was any of that not filthy? How are you not a pedo!? Honestly, I’m promoting you from genuine to super genuine! I hope you become a white dwarf and shrink away!”
   
“Not that it matters, but can’t I explode and become a black hole instead?”
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“Not that it matters, but can’t I explode and become black hole instead?”
   
 
“Do you have any idea how much trouble that would cause the neighbors? And are you trying to become the center of a galaxy or something? What would your galaxy be called? The Genuine Galaxy? …Yay! I said it, I said it!”
 
“Do you have any idea how much trouble that would cause the neighbors? And are you trying to become the center of a galaxy or something? What would your galaxy be called? The Genuine Galaxy? …Yay! I said it, I said it!”
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“That concept weapon absorbs its target’s attack and makes it its own.”
 
“That concept weapon absorbs its target’s attack and makes it its own.”
   
“Yes,” replied the smiling girl. “First, I stored one of Typhon’s blasts and used that to destroy one fighter after being thrown here.”
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“Yes,” replied the smiling girl. “First, I stored one of Typhon’s blasts and used that to destroy one fighter after being throw here.”
   
 
She took a breath.
 
She took a breath.
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The wind carried the giant lid into the night sky and something was revealed below.
 
The wind carried the giant lid into the night sky and something was revealed below.
   
“Track Facility Mechanism ‘Moirai’! Begin deployment!”
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“Track Facility Mechanism ‘Moirai’! Being deployment!”
   
 
A giant spindle machine rose from the car.
 
A giant spindle machine rose from the car.
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They flew.
 
They flew.
   
As if throwing their entire bodies forward, the automatons became one with their speed and desired to advance.
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As if throwing their entire bodies forward, the automatons become one with their speed and desired to advance.
   
 
Shadowy trees raced by on either side and a river reflected the moon below.
 
Shadowy trees raced by on either side and a river reflected the moon below.

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