Editing Owari no Chronicle:Volume1 Prologue
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A single shattering sound could be heard. It was followed by the sound of shards spraying out into the air. |
A single shattering sound could be heard. It was followed by the sound of shards spraying out into the air. |
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− | Three silver arcs shot out the window as if trying |
+ | Three silver arcs shot out the window as if trying scratch at those glimmers scattering through the air. |
They were claws. |
They were claws. |
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The girl reflexively picked the cat up once more. She then looked up and glared at the giant. |
The girl reflexively picked the cat up once more. She then looked up and glared at the giant. |
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− | In the next instant, some power exploded out of the giant’s right arm toward her. |
+ | In the next instant, some power exploded out of the giant’s right arm and toward her. |
She first saw flames. In the following instant, white smoke raced through the air. |
She first saw flames. In the following instant, white smoke raced through the air. |
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This feminine figure’s long hair and long skirt were fluttering in the wind. |
This feminine figure’s long hair and long skirt were fluttering in the wind. |
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− | She held a giant staff-like object in her right hand and held her left hand out toward the terrace |
+ | She held a giant staff-like object in her right hand and held her left hand out toward the terrace |
In front of her outstretched hand, smoke swirled above the terrace and a chunk of its floor had been gouged out. |
In front of her outstretched hand, smoke swirled above the terrace and a chunk of its floor had been gouged out. |