Editing Owari no Chronicle:Volume1 Prologue

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A single shattering sound could be heard. It was followed by the sound of shards spraying out into the air.
 
A single shattering sound could be heard. It was followed by the sound of shards spraying out into the air.
   
Three silver arcs shot out the window as if trying to scratch at those glimmers scattering through the air.
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Three silver arcs shot out the window as if trying scratch at those glimmers scattering through the air.
   
 
They were claws.
 
They were claws.
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The girl reflexively picked the cat up once more. She then looked up and glared at the giant.
 
The girl reflexively picked the cat up once more. She then looked up and glared at the giant.
   
In the next instant, some power exploded out of the giant’s right arm toward her.
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In the next instant, some power exploded out of the giant’s right arm and toward her.
   
 
She first saw flames. In the following instant, white smoke raced through the air.
 
She first saw flames. In the following instant, white smoke raced through the air.
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This feminine figure’s long hair and long skirt were fluttering in the wind.
 
This feminine figure’s long hair and long skirt were fluttering in the wind.
   
She held a giant staff-like object in her right hand and held her left hand out toward the terrace.
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She held a giant staff-like object in her right hand and held her left hand out toward the terrace
   
 
In front of her outstretched hand, smoke swirled above the terrace and a chunk of its floor had been gouged out.
 
In front of her outstretched hand, smoke swirled above the terrace and a chunk of its floor had been gouged out.

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