Editing Owari no Chronicle:Volume1 Prologue

Jump to navigation Jump to search

Warning: You are not logged in. Your IP address will be publicly visible if you make any edits. If you log in or create an account, your edits will be attributed to your username, along with other benefits.

The edit can be undone. Please check the comparison below to verify that this is what you want to do, and then save the changes below to finish undoing the edit.

Latest revision Your text
Line 21: Line 21:
 
The second storey of the north entrance was made into a large terrace with the words “Tachikawa Station North Entrance” displayed in blue.
 
The second storey of the north entrance was made into a large terrace with the words “Tachikawa Station North Entrance” displayed in blue.
   
The clock on the opposite building reads 10 PM. The station building’s workers had left for the night, but the last train was still a long way off.
+
The clock on the opposite building read 10 PM. The station building’s workers had left for the night, but the last train was still a long way off.
   
 
However, no one could be seen in the station, on the station terrace, or on the traffic circle in front of the station.
 
However, no one could be seen in the station, on the station terrace, or on the traffic circle in front of the station.
   
Below a row of green-leaved trees along near the traffic circle was a line of cars. However, not one of these cars was moving. No buses were running either. The train tracks stretching away from the station had no trains running on them.
+
Below a row of green-leaved trees along near the traffic circle was a line of cars. However, not one of these cars was moving. No busses were running either. The train tracks stretching away from the station had no trains running on them.
   
 
The entire area was deserted.
 
The entire area was deserted.
   
A single noise could be heard in that still world.
+
A single noise could be heard in that unmoving world.
   
 
It came from above.
 
It came from above.

Please note that all contributions to Baka-Tsuki are considered to be released under the TLG Translation Common Agreement v.0.4.1 (see Baka-Tsuki:Copyrights for details). If you do not want your writing to be edited mercilessly and redistributed at will, then do not submit it here.
You are also promising us that you wrote this yourself, or copied it from a public domain or similar free resource. Do not submit copyrighted work without permission!

To protect the wiki against automated edit spam, we kindly ask you to solve the following CAPTCHA:

Cancel Editing help (opens in new window)