Editing Owari no Chronicle:Volume5 Prologue
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The sky, the air, and the shadows created by the moonlight were all dark blue and they all seemed to blend into each other. |
The sky, the air, and the shadows created by the moonlight were all dark blue and they all seemed to blend into each other. |
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− | And below all that dark blue, forested mountains and valleys were visible. |
+ | And below all that dark blue, a forested mountains and valleys were visible. |
The area was filled with the murmuring of the rivers flowing through the valleys and the sounds of forest insects. |
The area was filled with the murmuring of the rivers flowing through the valleys and the sounds of forest insects. |
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It almost seemed to collapse backwards until its head was pointed down toward the black giant. |
It almost seemed to collapse backwards until its head was pointed down toward the black giant. |
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− | Immediately afterwards, |
+ | Immediately afterwards, he white giant flapped its wings. |
It charged down toward the other giant and toward the ground. |
It charged down toward the other giant and toward the ground. |