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“I wasn’t replying to you!!”
 
“I wasn’t replying to you!!”
   
Harakawa relaxed his shoulders.
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Harakawa relaxed shoulders.
   
 
…''So it’s only a pointless visit.
 
…''So it’s only a pointless visit.
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The scent had come from the west of the island that it had landed on that night and that was located next to the ocean it always slept in.
 
The scent had come from the west of the island that it had landed on that night and that was located next to the ocean it always slept in.
   
Once its evolution had settled in, it knew it had to visit that place.
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One its evolution had settled in, it knew it had to visit that place.
   
 
It more or less knew what the scent was. It was the scent of the world it had been born in and it was the scent of whatever had once destroyed it and put it to sleep.
 
It more or less knew what the scent was. It was the scent of the world it had been born in and it was the scent of whatever had once destroyed it and put it to sleep.

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