Editing Owari no Chronicle:Volume9 Chapter 33

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Amid the lingering light of the attacks, the small black dragons’ optical camouflage concept deactivated. They could no longer afford to use any output on that.
 
Amid the lingering light of the attacks, the small black dragons’ optical camouflage concept deactivated. They could no longer afford to use any output on that.
   
They sank down against the attacks from the north and thus from their right and they prepared themselves to fight.
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They sank down against the attacks form the north and thus from their right and they prepared themselves to fight.
   
 
An instant later, they had taken the stance to fire their secondary cannons and swipe with their claws.
 
An instant later, they had taken the stance to fire their secondary cannons and swipe with their claws.
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The two small dragons pursuing from above the terrace did not turn around.
 
The two small dragons pursuing from above the terrace did not turn around.
   
In only an instant, black light wrapped around the secondary cannons at the base of their front legs. They moved to either side of the pillar in the center of the terrace and they tilted away from each other to view what lay below.
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In only an instant, black light wrapped around the secondary cannons at the base of their front legs. The moved to either side of the pillar in the center of the terrace and they tilted away from each other to view what lay below.
   
 
They intended to attack the blue and white dragon the instant it left the terrace.
 
They intended to attack the blue and white dragon the instant it left the terrace.

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