Editing Owari no Chronicle:Volume9 Chapter 33

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By the time that was over, the boy in command gave a shout and a powerful attack came from the sky.
 
By the time that was over, the boy in command gave a shout and a powerful attack came from the sky.
   
It took the form of several dragons and a few giants.
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It took the form of a several dragons a few giants.
   
 
There were two giants: a black one and a red one. The black one wielded a sword in both arms while the red one had no shoulders and instead raised six swords. The dragons descending around them were all blue.
 
There were two giants: a black one and a red one. The black one wielded a sword in both arms while the red one had no shoulders and instead raised six swords. The dragons descending around them were all blue.
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They all quietly nodded and Sayama continued with his back to that motion and sound.
 
They all quietly nodded and Sayama continued with his back to that motion and sound.
   
“We have seen the past and solved the mysteries of the present. And now a girl who represents our world is making her way between a human who has forgotton he is human and a machine that has forgotton himself.” He took a breath. “So what is it we should do? Protect her? Cry for the dragon who cared for his people enough to become a villain? Or simply watch over this battle? What do you say!?”
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“We have seen the past and solved the mysteries of the present. And now a girl who represents our world is making her way between a human who has forget he is human and a machine that has forget himself.” He took a breath. “So what is it we should do? Protect her? Cry for the dragon who cared for his people enough to become a villain? Or simply watch over this battle? What do you say!?”
   
 
He turned around and all of the white, blue, and others gave their answers.
 
He turned around and all of the white, blue, and others gave their answers.

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