Editing Owari no Chronicle:Volume9 Chapter 35

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Even so, his armor was torn away in several places all over his body.
 
Even so, his armor was torn away in several places all over his body.
   
Several of his swords of light broke, but each time they did, they were pulled out and produced a tremendous cut.
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Several of his swords of light broke, but each time they did, they were pulled out and produce a tremendous cut.
   
 
Metallic sounds sliced through the black forest made of black pillars. His speed never dropped as the few dozen seconds seemed to stretch on infinitely.
 
Metallic sounds sliced through the black forest made of black pillars. His speed never dropped as the few dozen seconds seemed to stretch on infinitely.
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He had destroyed his people.
 
He had destroyed his people.
   
Even if it had been to keep them from suffering and even if he had been ordered to do so, he had still destroyed the world he was meant to protect.
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Even if it had been to keep them from suffering and even if it he had been ordered to do so, he had still destroyed the world he was meant to protect.
   
 
He had trapped himself in the shell of “malfunctioning” and believed in the justification of his actions.
 
He had trapped himself in the shell of “malfunctioning” and believed in the justification of his actions.

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