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The green grass that lined the banks gently swayed in the wind. On the road above, a high-class convertible sparkled in the light as it drove past.
 
The green grass that lined the banks gently swayed in the wind. On the road above, a high-class convertible sparkled in the light as it drove past.
   
Sitting in the back seat of the convertible, wearing the high school uniform of Harusha Private Academy, was Zadou Sierra of class 1-B. While her long silky hair fluttered in the spring breeze, the way she sat with her delicate hands placed gently upon her knees as if she were made of glass was very modest, as if she were a girl kept in isolation. Her large eyes partially concealed by long lashes, her expression was daydreamish with a peaceful smile gracing her lips.
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Sitting in the back seat of the convertible, wearing the high school uniform of Harusha Private Academy, was Zadou Sierra of class 1-B. While her long silky hair fluttered in the spring breeze, the way she sat with her delicate hands placed gently upon her knees as if she were made of glass was very modest, as if she were a girl kept in isolation.  Her large eyes partially concealed by long lashes, her expression was daydreamish with a peaceful smile gracing her lips.
   
 
The driver was wearing a black jacket with a hat pulled low over his eyes. Next to Sierra, a middle school girl sat with a tense facial expression.
 
The driver was wearing a black jacket with a hat pulled low over his eyes. Next to Sierra, a middle school girl sat with a tense facial expression.
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"It's because a commoner doesn't have one in his house, that's why you don't know it's real name."
 
"It's because a commoner doesn't have one in his house, that's why you don't know it's real name."
   
"Quit with the commoner thing! Even I know that the word for the ladle you use with shredded ice is called a 'kanrojyakushi'.
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"Quit with the commoner thing! Even I know that the word for the laddle you use with shredded ice is called a 'kanrojyakushi'.
   
 
"Shredded ice you say? Ah, how distasteful. The upper class term is a frappe."
 
"Shredded ice you say? Ah, how distasteful. The upper class term is a frappe."
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"Ah! It's on!"
 
"Ah! It's on!"
   
Sierra reflexively clapped her hands together. Even Jin felt a sense of relief. Just then, without taking even a moment to relax, Sierra's father pushed her in front of Jin.
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Sierra reflexively clapped her hands together. Even Jin felt a sense of relief. Just then, without taking even a moment ro relax, Sierra's father pushed her in front of Jin.
   
 
"Now, Sierra! Don't hesitate! Before your Master's satisfaction fades, measure the satisfaction gauge!"
 
"Now, Sierra! Don't hesitate! Before your Master's satisfaction fades, measure the satisfaction gauge!"

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