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"This book, what is it?"
 
"This book, what is it?"
   
"It's a magic tome which has been handed down in our family for generations. It seems you are a magic maid."
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"It's a magic tome which has been handed down in our family for generations. It seems you are a maid of magic."
   
 
The front cover of the book had the design of an arabesque of the Arabian Wind, while the inside was blank. Turning the pages, Sierra knit her eyes in confusion.
 
The front cover of the book had the design of an arabesque of the Arabian Wind, while the inside was blank. Turning the pages, Sierra knit her eyes in confusion.
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"Father, I can't even believe you'd want me to work for this rude commoner!"
 
"Father, I can't even believe you'd want me to work for this rude commoner!"
   
"You have become a magic maid have you not?"
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"You have become a Magic Maid have you not?"
   
"I don't want to be some kind of maid who uses magic for any length of time! Let's go home!"
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"I have no reason to be some kind of magic maid for any length of time! Let's go home!"
   
 
With her feet making loud stomping noises, Sierra began to leave the room. But, Sierra's father grabbed her by the nape of her neck, pulling her back to her place.
 
With her feet making loud stomping noises, Sierra began to leave the room. But, Sierra's father grabbed her by the nape of her neck, pulling her back to her place.

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