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"Anyway, just take that ring to a pawnshop and trade it for some money, after that just start being thrifty."
 
"Anyway, just take that ring to a pawnshop and trade it for some money, after that just start being thrifty."
   
"PAWNSHOP! THRIFTY!"
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"PAWNSHOP! SAVING!"
   
 
Raising her head, Sierra had screamed in a high pitched voice.
 
Raising her head, Sierra had screamed in a high pitched voice.
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"Hmpf. The studying of commoners is insufficient."
 
"Hmpf. The studying of commoners is insufficient."
   
"Apart from your daughter, for an adult to have that kind of tone, it really annoys me."
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"Apart from you daughter, for an adult to have that kind of tone, it really annoys me."
   
 
"Did you learn how in the eighth century the silk road was used to transport articles of clothing and such? In the past, Japan and Persia traded as well. Back and forth from Persia along the silk road, the Magic Lamp finally made it here to Japan."
 
"Did you learn how in the eighth century the silk road was used to transport articles of clothing and such? In the past, Japan and Persia traded as well. Back and forth from Persia along the silk road, the Magic Lamp finally made it here to Japan."
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"Oi, don't disregard what I have to say! Why aren't you listening to people? You can't be here, because this is a dormitory!"
 
"Oi, don't disregard what I have to say! Why aren't you listening to people? You can't be here, because this is a dormitory!"
   
"You're still young. Just blow off the rules the adults have!"
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"You're young still. Just blow off the rules the adults have!"
   
 
"Saying stuff with an expression like that, if you don't want to get chased, don't say things like that."
 
"Saying stuff with an expression like that, if you don't want to get chased, don't say things like that."

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