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"Ehh. Beautiful flowers can grow from plants on high mountains."
 
"Ehh. Beautiful flowers can grow from plants on high mountains."
   
Jin's gaze was directed at his book, so he only responded in a simple manner. Yuuya lifted his eyebrows like the <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/katakana katakana]</span> character 'ハ', and took his headphones off of his ears, resting them around his neck.
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Jin's gaze was directed at his book, so he only responded in a simple manner. Yuuya lifted his eyebrow like the <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/katakana katakana]</span> character 'ハ', and took his headphones off from his ears, resting it on his neck.
   
 
"Flower on a high cliff, you don't even get it! We're talking about Zadou Sierra here."
 
"Flower on a high cliff, you don't even get it! We're talking about Zadou Sierra here."
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"Stop yelling so loud! In this dorm, the rules are that no girls or pets are allowed. If they find you, I'll get evicted."
 
"Stop yelling so loud! In this dorm, the rules are that no girls or pets are allowed. If they find you, I'll get evicted."
   
"I...don't compare me to an animal! I didn't realize until just now, but I've had enough of your impoliteness!"
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"Myse...don't compare myself to an animal! I didn't realize until just now, but I've had enough of your impoliteness!"
   
 
"I said your voice is too loud!"
 
"I said your voice is too loud!"
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Sierra grabbed onto Jin, terrified. He gave a painful grimace.
 
Sierra grabbed onto Jin, terrified. He gave a painful grimace.
   
The violet smoke began to take on the form of a human. A man wrapped in a red silk gown, holding a brandy glass in one hand, was spinning upwards. Wearing a ring on one finger, a necklace, and an earring, Jin's eyes reflected all the sparkling jewelry.
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The violet smoke began to take on the form of a human. A man wrapped in a red silk gown, holding a brandy glass in one hand, was spinning upwards. Wearing a ring on one finger, a necklace, and an earring, Jin's eyes reflected all the sparking jewelry.
   
 
"Wh......what's with this flashy old guy?"
 
"Wh......what's with this flashy old guy?"
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"Nooo! S......So I'll have to become this commoners companion!?"
 
"Nooo! S......So I'll have to become this commoners companion!?"
   
Sierra underwent a violent shock, collapsing onto the floor. Jin turned his astonished gaze towards the jangling jewelry of the father.
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Sierra underwent a violent shock, collapsing onto the flooring. Jin turned his astonished gaze towards the jangling jewelry of the father.
   
 
"It's not really a problem. But the fact that your father's jewelry hasn't disappeared, must mean that, the conjured items won't just disappear, right?"
 
"It's not really a problem. But the fact that your father's jewelry hasn't disappeared, must mean that, the conjured items won't just disappear, right?"
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"Commoner! From today on you will be my Master! I'm going to level up, and return back to being a regular idol!"
 
"Commoner! From today on you will be my Master! I'm going to level up, and return back to being a regular idol!"
   
"D-Don't go deciding things on your own! I keep saying girls aren't allowed in here, even so, who would want someone as selfish as you......!"
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"D-Don't go deciding things on your own! I keep saying girls aren't allowed in here, even so, who would want
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someone as selfish as you......!"
   
 
"Now, tell me your wish! Spit it out!"
 
"Now, tell me your wish! Spit it out!"
   
Ignoring Jin's objection, Sierra grabbed both of his shoulders, and pushed him over the top of the mountain of books. Long hair went over Jin's face, tickling him. It was extremely painful with his back pushed into the books.
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Ignoring Jin's objection, Sierra grabbed both of his shoulders, and pushed him over the top of the mountain of
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books. Long hair went over Jin's face, tickling him. It was extremely painful with his back pushed into the books.
   
 
"Th-That's not the attitude you should have towards your Master!"
 
"Th-That's not the attitude you should have towards your Master!"
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"......Can't get out of it so...ChiChinPui......pui......"
 
"......Can't get out of it so...ChiChinPui......pui......"
   
As expected of throwing away his dignity, Jin's last word was very small. Sierra's father then took his hand, and placed it on top of Sierra's head, making rubbing motions.
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As expected of throwing away his dignity, Jin's last word was very small. Sierra's father then took his hand, and
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placed it on top of Sierra's head, making rubbing motions.
   
 
"......Eh."
 
"......Eh."
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"T......to this commoner, I have to......"
 
"T......to this commoner, I have to......"
   
"Look here, if you keep up with that depressing face, your Master's satisfaction level is going to go down even further. Practice saying, 'Did you call me, Master?'."
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"Look here, if you keep up with that depressing face, your Masters satisfaction level is going to go down even
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further. Practice saying, 'Did you call me, Master?'."
   
 
Like a musical conductor, Sierra's father raised his finger with a wave. Jin then unexpectedly yelled.
 
Like a musical conductor, Sierra's father raised his finger with a wave. Jin then unexpectedly yelled.
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"Ca......call out, you say......"
 
"Ca......call out, you say......"
   
Sierra's face was flushed deep red, as she had one hand closed into a fist on her chest, while shaking. Sierra's father laughed, nodding in satisfaction.
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Sierra's face was flushed deep red, as she had one hand closed into a fist on her chest, while shaking. Sierra's
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father laughed, nodding in satisfaction.
   
 
"Good, one more time. Next say, 'Master'!"
 
"Good, one more time. Next say, 'Master'!"
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"Ahh geeez! Why do I have to say something like this!"
 
"Ahh geeez! Why do I have to say something like this!"
   
Steadily, something sounded against the wall. In shock, Jin turned his face. It had come from the wall of the next room over.
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Steadily, something sounded against the wall. In shock, Jin turned his face. It had come from the wall of the next
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room over.
   
 
"Hey, Araki, it's Yutada. You're too loud!"
 
"Hey, Araki, it's Yutada. You're too loud!"

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