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“Aika! A,-Are you alright?”
 
“Aika! A,-Are you alright?”
   
“Just now......she tripped when there was nothing to trip on...”
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“Just now......there was nothing that would make someone fall...”
   
 
Yuuya muttered with stiff eyes. Aika picked herself up, and turned to face Jin.
 
Yuuya muttered with stiff eyes. Aika picked herself up, and turned to face Jin.
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Yuuya walked off first, as Aika latched herself onto Jin's shoulder.
 
Yuuya walked off first, as Aika latched herself onto Jin's shoulder.
   
“It's just as he was saying, Onii-chan. Sierra-sama is beautiful and kind, so all us middle school girls want to be like her.”
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“That guy weaves when he speaks, Onii-chan. Sierra-sama, who's such a beautiful and kind person, even if we're in middle school, and even if we're younger, we all still want to be like her.”
   
“......I simply can't imagine that we're talking about the same person.”
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“......I didn't think you would think of her the same way the others do.”
   
 
Thinking about how Sierra had appeared from the lamp yesterday, Jin crossed his arms.
 
Thinking about how Sierra had appeared from the lamp yesterday, Jin crossed his arms.
   
(It couldn't be that there's a different person with the exact same first and last name, right......?)
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(There's no way that person is different from who we're talking about now is there......?)
   
 
“She brought me back yesterday. In reality Sierra-sama, even though she is a beautiful person with a lot of money, she's really kind, and I'm becoming more and more of a fan of hers.”
 
“She brought me back yesterday. In reality Sierra-sama, even though she is a beautiful person with a lot of money, she's really kind, and I'm becoming more and more of a fan of hers.”
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Aika brought her flushed face up to look at Jin. It was a sight for the gods......but because of how it looked to have Aika plastered to his arm, he was growing more nervous as he furrowed his eyebrows.
 
Aika brought her flushed face up to look at Jin. It was a sight for the gods......but because of how it looked to have Aika plastered to his arm, he was growing more nervous as he furrowed his eyebrows.
   
“Ah, nah......it's better if you don't cook. Back when you were in elementary school, you'd cut your fingers and get all kinds of wounds, remember? Even now, it seems like you've been getting an occasional scrape.”
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“Ah, nah......it's fine if you don't make it. Back when I was in elementary school, I cut my finger, and you don't want to get any new cuts. Even like just now, coming here you got hurt.”
   
“I'm fine now. After entering the school, the reason I haven't been able to search for you until now is because I've been on kitchen duty at the dorm the whole time......even though I've gotten hurt, I've been getting better and better.”
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“Geez it's fine. Because ever since entering the school till now while searching for you, I've always been on cooking duty at the dorm but......even though I got hurt, I got better and better.”
   
 
“Hmm. I thought it would be impossible for you to live as a boarding student, but it seems you're doing okay.”
 
“Hmm. I thought it would be impossible for you to live as a boarding student, but it seems you're doing okay.”

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