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“Well then, tell me. Even though I listen to light music to try to understand women, it hasn't worked at all. Since I'm interested in Zadou, I feel like I've got to do my best.”
 
“Well then, tell me. Even though I listen to light music to try to understand women, it hasn't worked at all. Since I'm interested in Zadou, I feel like I've got to do my best.”
   
“I see. It deals with the ancient silk road, and how goods would be......”
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“I see. It deals with the ancient silk road, and how good would be......”
   
 
“Zzzz.”
 
“Zzzz.”
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Jin looked at Yuuya, with his head lying prostrate on the counter, in surprise. At that moment, Alf came over to the place where they were, roughly setting down their cups of water.
 
Jin looked at Yuuya, with his head lying prostrate on the counter, in surprise. At that moment, Alf came over to the place where they were, roughly setting down their cups of water.
   
“Look here, if you're going to sit, then place your orders already! Else the shop's routine is going to be interrupted.”
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“Look here, if you're going to sit, then place your orders already! Else the shops routine is going to be interrupted.”
   
 
Looking surprised, Jin turned his gaze up to look at Alf.
 
Looking surprised, Jin turned his gaze up to look at Alf.
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Yuuya was bouncing around in his laughter. Jin simply put his elbows on the table, crossed his fingers, and though about how disappointing it was.
 
Yuuya was bouncing around in his laughter. Jin simply put his elbows on the table, crossed his fingers, and though about how disappointing it was.
   
“I see...no matter how many Middle Eastern people there are, they don't know after all. If it's a Japanese person, there's no way anybody would know anything about a wicked pedestal.”
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“I see...no matter how many Middle Easter people there are, they don't know after all. If it's a Japanese person, there's no way anybody would know anything about a wicked pedestal.”
   
 
“U, uhm...that there was a magic lamp in Japan, who did you hear that from?”
 
“U, uhm...that there was a magic lamp in Japan, who did you hear that from?”
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“Delicious?”
 
“Delicious?”
   
Wondering what she was talking about suddenly, Jin lifted his eyebrows in puzzlement. Giving a short start, Alf proceeded to shake her head.
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Wondering what she was talking about suddenly, Jin lifted his eyebrow in puzzlement. Giving a short start, Alf proceeded to shake her head.
   
 
“Ah, no. I just misspoke.”
 
“Ah, no. I just misspoke.”
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For me as well, because I don't have the extra funds, I'm causing you a lot of trouble, which I'm sorry for. It's fine if you're mad at us. With all that said, currently in regards to the progress of finding Solomon's Treasure,
 
For me as well, because I don't have the extra funds, I'm causing you a lot of trouble, which I'm sorry for. It's fine if you're mad at us. With all that said, currently in regards to the progress of finding Solomon's Treasure,
   
At that point the letter began turning into a romance play, so Jin took it, put it back in its envelope, and put that in his shirt pocket. Suiting his own convenience... The contents of the letter just made him angry.
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At that point the letter began turning into a romance play, so Jin took it, put it back in it's envelope, and put that in his shirt pocket. Suiting his own convenience, the contents of the letter just made his stomach stand on end.
   
 
“That's right, you cause me nothing but trouble. You think I wanna hear your excuses?”
 
“That's right, you cause me nothing but trouble. You think I wanna hear your excuses?”
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A voice could be heard from the phone's speaker. With a soft girls voice that sounded quite grown up, the speaker still seemed to be quite young.
 
A voice could be heard from the phone's speaker. With a soft girls voice that sounded quite grown up, the speaker still seemed to be quite young.
   
“Ah, I apologize. Then please give me the usual deluxe pizza. Ah, and the place of delivery is different than usual. Harusha Academy's Male Dormitory, do you know of it?”
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“Ah, I apologize. Then please give me the usual deluxe pizza. Ah, and the place of delivery is different that usual. Harusha Academy's Male Dormitory, do you know of it?”
   
 
“[Tachibana....is that it?]”
 
“[Tachibana....is that it?]”
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“Ah, I get it. You'll fry the egg using the iron pot.”
 
“Ah, I get it. You'll fry the egg using the iron pot.”
   
Jin's eyes were sparkling. With a similar happy appearance, Sierra took Jin's hands.
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Jin's eyes were sparking. With a similar happy appearance, Sierra took Jin's hands.
   
 
“I know I know! I might just be a genius!”
 
“I know I know! I might just be a genius!”
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didn't know why this was pleasant, and so they waited a bit, standing upright like a pole.
 
didn't know why this was pleasant, and so they waited a bit, standing upright like a pole.
   
Just then, Jin noticed the sound of dripping water, and looked around.
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Just then, Jin noticed the sound sound of dripping water, and looked around.
   
 
“What's that sound?”
 
“What's that sound?”

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