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''I can't understand''....Yuri shook her head softly.
 
''I can't understand''....Yuri shook her head softly.
   
No matter what Leni says, in this world there is always someone stronger. She, who had been in Zarmine had seen with her very own eyes those with impossible strength. Still vivid in her memory was the image of the long, silver-haired King.
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No matter what Leni says, in this world there is always someone stronger. She, who had been in Zarmine had seen with her own very eyes those with impossible strength. Still vivid in her memory was the image of the long, silver-haired King.
   
 
An uncountable number of criminals lined up at the execution grounds, and King Leygur who stood before them all.
 
An uncountable number of criminals lined up at the execution grounds, and King Leygur who stood before them all.
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"Dunno."
 
"Dunno."
   
Leni tilted his head sideways. He didn't have any bad intentions, but his face which said 'How should I know,' only served to make Yuri even more upset.
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Leni tilted his head sideways. He didn't have any bad intentions, but his face which said 'How should I know,' only served to make upset Yuri even more.
   
 
"According to the General, Chris is his companion, and what's more, a Pegasus, so it would be rude to tie her up. But, I wonder if a Pegasus really exists."
 
"According to the General, Chris is his companion, and what's more, a Pegasus, so it would be rude to tie her up. But, I wonder if a Pegasus really exists."
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Yuri completely ignored the comment.
 
Yuri completely ignored the comment.
 
 
   
 
At that moment, in the highest part of the castle, Rain was resting on the bed in his room. There was nothing special about the inside of his bedroom, and for the room belonging to the lord of the castle, it was quite modest. the bed was just average, nothing like the great four-posters with an awning the nobles favored so much.
 
At that moment, in the highest part of the castle, Rain was resting on the bed in his room. There was nothing special about the inside of his bedroom, and for the room belonging to the lord of the castle, it was quite modest. the bed was just average, nothing like the great four-posters with an awning the nobles favored so much.
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"That time, I can't even begin to describe how much you looked after me."
 
"That time, I can't even begin to describe how much you looked after me."
   
What a good-natured guy.
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What a good-natured. guy.
   
 
Thanks to that, it puts me through a lot of trouble.
 
Thanks to that, it puts me through a lot of trouble.
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If he hadn't interrupted, this abuse seemed like it would continue for a while.
 
If he hadn't interrupted, this abuse seemed like it would continue for a while.
   
"I'm in the middle of contemplating on extremely important issues right now! I've no time to play with you! If you're going to come to me, make it when there is a matter of utter importance, or when you're wearing lace underwear!"
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"I'm in the middle of contemplating on extremely important issues right now! I've no time to play with you! If your going to come to me, make it when there is a matter of utter importance, or when you're wearing lace underwear!"
   
 
"What'd you say――don't go to sleep!"
 
"What'd you say――don't go to sleep!"
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Ready to fall back onto the sheets, Rain instead lifted his head and got up reluctantly.
 
Ready to fall back onto the sheets, Rain instead lifted his head and got up reluctantly.
   
He sat on the side of his bed, and looked at Yuri, standing aggressively.
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He sat on the side of his bed, and looked Yuri, standing aggressively.
   
 
"Okay, so what is it. By the way, I knew from your presence, but what were you doing eavesdropping outside someone's room."
 
"Okay, so what is it. By the way, I knew from your presence, but what were you doing eavesdropping outside someone's room."
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Yuri took a deep breath, blinking her light green eyes. With an unreadable expression, she looked back at Rain. He thought he could detect her pulse.
 
Yuri took a deep breath, blinking her light green eyes. With an unreadable expression, she looked back at Rain. He thought he could detect her pulse.
   
"You're doing this for a living, even though you don't want to, right? This country is hard on its commoners after all. But if the reward is good enough, there's no reason for you to be on the enemies' side, right?"
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"You're doing this for a living, even though you don't want to, right? This country is hard on its commoners after all. But if the reward is good enough, there's no reason for you to be on the enemies side, right?"
   
 
"That's......I suppose so. It's not like I feel good about it all."
 
"That's......I suppose so. It's not like I feel good about it all."
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"I only just turned thirteen."
 
"I only just turned thirteen."
   
"I see, I see. It must be fate that we've met here. Let's get along, right, little one?"
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"I see, I see. It must be fate that we've met here. Let's get along, right little one?"
   
 
"Yes. Uhm...I agree."
 
"Yes. Uhm...I agree."
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"What do you mean, 'you can eat with your pictures'...?"
 
"What do you mean, 'you can eat with your pictures'...?"
   
"It means you can make a living. More importantly, have we met somewhere before? I don't think I could forget a face like yours though...?"
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"It means you can make a living. More importantly, have we met somewhere before? I don' think I could forget a face like yours though...?"
   
 
"Today is the first time we have met, Rain."
 
"Today is the first time we have met, Rain."
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It was how she really felt.
 
It was how she really felt.
   
She knew how her father only saw her as a tool for his convenience. When she is a little older she will become wife to a prince of some other country, just a tool.
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She knew how her father only saw her as a tool for his convenience. When she is a little older she would become wife to a prince of some other country, just a tool.
   
 
Nothing more. That was the reason she couldn't do as she pleased.
 
Nothing more. That was the reason she couldn't do as she pleased.
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Shelfa looked at the coin admiringly. It wasn't as though magic had completely disappeared, but the current state couldn't even be compared with the that of the past.
 
Shelfa looked at the coin admiringly. It wasn't as though magic had completely disappeared, but the current state couldn't even be compared with the that of the past.
   
It was very rare to come across any weapons imbued with semi-permanent magic, and even if there was one its price would be astronomical.
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It was very rare to come across any weapons imbued with semi-permanent magic, and even if there was one it's price would be astronomical.
   
 
"When I was traveling to the north of the continent, I found this in some ancient ruins.......It's true! I only have two but, I'll give this one to you."
 
"When I was traveling to the north of the continent, I found this in some ancient ruins.......It's true! I only have two but, I'll give this one to you."
   
Putting great emphasis behind his words, Rain brought his hands around Shelfa's thin neck, and attached the necklace for her.
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Putting great emphasis behind his words, Rain brought his hands around Shelfa's thin neck, and attaching the necklace for her.
   
 
Finishing, Rain rested both his hands on her shoulders and peered into her eyes.
 
Finishing, Rain rested both his hands on her shoulders and peered into her eyes.
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"I'll be leaving soon, little one. I will definitely keep my promise."
 
"I'll be leaving soon, little one. I will definitely keep my promise."
   
"Those last words were unnecessary. After all, I trust in you, Rain. Today, five years from now, I will be waiting here for you."
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"Those last words were unnecessary. After all, I trust in you, Rain. Today five years from now, I will be waiting here for you."
   
 
Forcing herself to smile, Shelfa looked up at Rain.
 
Forcing herself to smile, Shelfa looked up at Rain.

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