Editing Rakuin no Monshou:The Little Fugitive

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Dach shouted “Fall back” and leaped backwards himself. The glitter of steel struck from all directions. As yet more strokes rained down, he returned them with his own sword.
 
Dach shouted “Fall back” and leaped backwards himself. The glitter of steel struck from all directions. As yet more strokes rained down, he returned them with his own sword.
   
They had been caught in an ambush.
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The had been caught in an ambush.
   
 
As the only one to instantly realise as much, Dach shoved into his men while spurring them into action.
 
As the only one to instantly realise as much, Dach shoved into his men while spurring them into action.

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