Editing Rakuin no Monshou:The Little Fugitive

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They talked idly. Not having to worry about his identity being known made Orba more talkative but it wasn’t only because of the pleasure of exchanging words. The girl felt strangely out of place.
 
They talked idly. Not having to worry about his identity being known made Orba more talkative but it wasn’t only because of the pleasure of exchanging words. The girl felt strangely out of place.
   
''She's too well educated.''.
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''She has too much culture''.
   
 
Obviously, most of the people who lived in a place like this had a hard time making it from day to day. He didn’t think they had the money to spare to buy books. Moreover, her mother wore drab and dirty clothes whereas Alicia’s were clean and beautiful and were made of fine cotton with embroidery.
 
Obviously, most of the people who lived in a place like this had a hard time making it from day to day. He didn’t think they had the money to spare to buy books. Moreover, her mother wore drab and dirty clothes whereas Alicia’s were clean and beautiful and were made of fine cotton with embroidery.
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“Is your mother always strict?”
 
“Is your mother always strict?”
   
“Usually. But after we came here she might have gotten scarier than before.”
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“Usually. But after we came here she might have become scarier than before.”
   
 
“And your father?”
 
“And your father?”

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