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''Damn.''
 
''Damn.''
   
Orba realised that this time, he had definitely messed up and been rude. Unbefitting of her lovely appearance and dainty frame, once this princess had decided that the other person was an “enemy”, she would press them without any mercy. That would be the case even if her own life was being threatened with a sword or a gun.
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Orba realised that this time, he had definitely messed up and been rude. Unbefitting of her lovely appearance and small stature, once this princess had decided that the other person was an “enemy”, she would press them without any mercy. That would be the case even if her own life was being threatened with a sword or a gun.
   
 
Orba felt exactly as though he had been caught in an enemy trap.
 
Orba felt exactly as though he had been caught in an enemy trap.
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However,
 
However,
   
''According to the chamberlain, Gil had a good relationship with his other step-sister, Ineli Mephius, but practically no one has ever seen him talk with Flora''.
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''According to the chamberlain, Gil had a good relationship with his other step-sister Ineli Mephius but practically no one has ever seen him talk with Flora''.
   
 
Orba had been taught beforehand about what kind of relationship Gil had with the people who were socially close to him. Basically, that was so that he could play his part without raising any doubts – without there being any suspicion that Gil had been replaced by a sword slave.
 
Orba had been taught beforehand about what kind of relationship Gil had with the people who were socially close to him. Basically, that was so that he could play his part without raising any doubts – without there being any suspicion that Gil had been replaced by a sword slave.
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The Mephian army had robbed Orba of his family and of everyone he knew from the village he had been born and raised in. One of his reasons for spending each day as the prince’s body-double was to get revenge on those with power.
 
The Mephian army had robbed Orba of his family and of everyone he knew from the village he had been born and raised in. One of his reasons for spending each day as the prince’s body-double was to get revenge on those with power.
   
''A kitten has disappeared? So she wants me to do something because the girl’s not eating?''
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''A kitten has disappeared? So she wants me to do something because she’s not eating?''
   
 
Completely ridiculous. If she didn’t want to eat, then don’t serve her food. Her stomach would get empty soon enough and then she wouldn’t go on about where-oh-where her kitten was.
 
Completely ridiculous. If she didn’t want to eat, then don’t serve her food. Her stomach would get empty soon enough and then she wouldn’t go on about where-oh-where her kitten was.

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