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Eventually they commenced their escape, leaving the princess in place.
 
Eventually they commenced their escape, leaving the princess in place.
   
The Mephian soldiers raised cries of war and chased after them, but it was a narrow cave after all. One Garberan soldier came to a halt and started rapidly firing at them, making them lose their joint effort as they had to take cover here and there. Providing cover for his allies thus, when his bullets inevitably ran out, he removed a knife from his pocket, jabbed it into his own neck, and finished himself off.
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The Mephian soldiers raised cries of war and chased after them, but it was a narrow cave after all. One Garberan soldier stopped into a halt and started rapidly firing at them, making them lose their joint effort as they had to take cover here and there. Providing cover for his allies this, when his bullets inevitably ran out, he removed a knife from his pocket, jabbed it into his own neck, and finished himself off.
   
 
Orba hadn’t witnessed these details to the very end. The rest was an issue between Mephius and Garbera, where he himself was unrelated. Aside from that, the safety of the people he knew weighed on his mind and he followed the road all the way back through the cave.
 
Orba hadn’t witnessed these details to the very end. The rest was an issue between Mephius and Garbera, where he himself was unrelated. Aside from that, the safety of the people he knew weighed on his mind and he followed the road all the way back through the cave.
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''Straight after such a commotion…''
 
''Straight after such a commotion…''
   
Instead of being panicked, she was analysing things calmly. Until some time ago, he’d only seen this girl as a puppet, but it was only after she was injured and knocked about, that it roused his flesh and blood, and Orba actually felt that she was a person with the same beliefs as he had.
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Instead of being panicked, she was analysing things calmly. Until some time ago, he’d only seen this girl as a puppet, but it was only after she was injured and knocked about, that it roused his flesh and blood, and Orba actually felt that she was a person with the same beliefs as he.
   
 
“Besides,” the foreign princess suddenly cast down her eyes and gnashed her teeth. “They were probably our Garbera’s— General Ryucown’s subordinates.”
 
“Besides,” the foreign princess suddenly cast down her eyes and gnashed her teeth. “They were probably our Garbera’s— General Ryucown’s subordinates.”
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That evening, Orba was in a single room inside the cliffs. It was the same room he’d spent his time in yesterday, as it was made appropriate for the Imperial Family to stay in.
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That evening, Orba was in a single room inside the cliffs. It was the same room he’d spent his time yesterday, as it was made appropriate for the Imperial Family to stay in.
   
While he didn’t grasp the full story behind the situation, they had judged it too dangerous to go back to a city in Mephian territory with only themselves for now. With their military power currently forming a line of defence in the valley, they were waiting for reinforcements to arrive from the city.
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While he didn’t grasp the full story behind the situation, they had judged it too dangerous to go back to a city in Mephian territory with only them for now. With their military power currently forming a line of defence in the valley, they were waiting for reinforcements to arrive from the city.
   
 
Of course, several people from Garbera, including Vileena, and the delegation from Ende were being confined in the valley as well. At any rate, the atmosphere had gotten complicated.
 
Of course, several people from Garbera, including Vileena, and the delegation from Ende were being confined in the valley as well. At any rate, the atmosphere had gotten complicated.
   
The moment the Mephian soldiers, who had chased the enemy down the hidden passage, had slipped out to the valley on the other side, they’d witnessed a dragonstone ship flying up into the air. It was a high-speed cruiser that could carry about ten people, and it had probably been waiting on the other side of the cliffs until just a while earlier. So they might have been planning to take Vileena?
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The moment the Mephian soldiers, who had chased the enemy down the hidden passage, had slipped out to the valley on the other side, they’d witnessed a dragonstone ship flying up to the air. It was a high-speed cruiser that could carry about ten people, and they had probably been waiting on the other side of the cliffs until just a while earlier. So they might have been planning to take Vileena?
   
 
Vileena had said these were ‘Ryucown’s actions’.
 
Vileena had said these were ‘Ryucown’s actions’.
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“Gil-sama? Gil-sama!”
 
“Gil-sama? Gil-sama!”
   
He was a little late to react to the voice calling out to him. The page, Dinn, had just placed several wine bottles and three glasses on the table. It was these items that told Orba everything.
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He was a little late to react to the voice calling out to him. The page, Dinn, just placed several wine bottles and three glasses on the table. It was these items that told Orba everything.
   
 
“You’re still a little late in noticing, aren’t you?”
 
“You’re still a little late in noticing, aren’t you?”
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The still twelve, thirteen-year-old boy answered, puffing up with a noble’s pride.
 
The still twelve, thirteen-year-old boy answered, puffing up with a noble’s pride.
   
“Get used to it, huh?” Orba said, as he noticed the full-scale window that reached from the floor to the ceiling.
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“Get used to it, huh?” Orba said, as he notice the full-scale window that reached from the floor to the ceiling.
   
 
Because the curtains were drawn, he couldn’t look out over the valley. While the balcony was packed with soldiers on guard, because the balcony itself protruded directly from the cliff, he didn’t have to worry that they could hear their conversation.
 
Because the curtains were drawn, he couldn’t look out over the valley. While the balcony was packed with soldiers on guard, because the balcony itself protruded directly from the cliff, he didn’t have to worry that they could hear their conversation.
   
That was when he remembered, and Orba smiled, thinking back. When Tarkas had been accused by Fedom, he’d offered some timely help, and afterwards, Tarkas had bowed over to him in gratitude many times over. He would never forget that hapless, tear-filled face for the rest of his life.
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That’s when he remembered, and Orba smiled, thinking back. When Tarkas had been accused by Fedom, he’d offered some timely help, and afterwards, Tarkas had bowed over to him in gratitude many times over. He would never forget that hapless, tear-filled face for the rest of his life.
   
 
“Seeing the number of glasses, who are the guests coming over?”
 
“Seeing the number of glasses, who are the guests coming over?”

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