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“That would be splendid.”
 
“That would be splendid.”
   
Orba, no less irritated, still felt the traces from his quarrel with Vileena.
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Orba, not losing out in being irritated , still felt the traces from his quarrel with Vileena.
   
 
“Now stop talking. We don’t know who could be listening.”
 
“Now stop talking. We don’t know who could be listening.”
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“Yes, what is it, your highness?”
 
“Yes, what is it, your highness?”
   
“Theresia, how old are you now?”
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“Theresia, how old did you become?”
   
 
“Well… when you reach the latter half of your forties, you eventually stop counting. Then it’s normal to look forward to continue on at that age forever.”
 
“Well… when you reach the latter half of your forties, you eventually stop counting. Then it’s normal to look forward to continue on at that age forever.”

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