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On top of that, Oubary also knew the crown prince Gil Mephius’ personality well. He would be headed for a glorious first campaign – after all, that prince wouldn’t be able to accomplish anything by himself. He planned to take away his full authority.
 
On top of that, Oubary also knew the crown prince Gil Mephius’ personality well. He would be headed for a glorious first campaign – after all, that prince wouldn’t be able to accomplish anything by himself. He planned to take away his full authority.
   
“Ahh, but…” he joked, drinking wine together with his subordinates before leaving the capital. “I will have to make it look like it’s all the prince’s doing. It’ll be troublesome in the future, if I get under his skin.”
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“Ahh, but…” he joked, drinking wine together with his subordinate before leaving the capital. “I will have to make it look like it’s all the prince’s doing. It’ll be troublesome in the future, if I get under his skin.”
   
   
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“Wait. Everyone, please—” Vileena brought herself forward even more.
 
“Wait. Everyone, please—” Vileena brought herself forward even more.
   
It was as if she still hadn’t realised the indifferent, fed-up mood that hung in the air, when,
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It was as if she still had not understood, the indifferent, fed-up mood that hung in the air, when,
   
 
“Let’s have the princess accompany us,” he said.
 
“Let’s have the princess accompany us,” he said.

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