Editing Rakuin no Monshou:Volume1 Prologue

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She closed her eyelids firmly, repeating her denial, frantically trying to resist the emotions that were welling up inside from whatever was eating at her mind.
 
She closed her eyelids firmly, repeating her denial, frantically trying to resist the emotions that were welling up inside from whatever was eating at her mind.
   
''He has become so small.''
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''He’s become so small.''
   
 
She thought, as she laid her face into his thin, helpless hand.
 
She thought, as she laid her face into his thin, helpless hand.

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