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“I understand.”
 
“I understand.”
   
Unaccustomed to this manner of address, Orba called out once more to Aeson, about to leave with the compensation money in his hands. “Sir?” he responded, turning around to find a gun pointed at him. Aeson turned stiff.
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Unaccustomed to being addressed this way, Orba called out once more to Aeson, about to leave with the compensation money in his hands. “Sir?” he responded, turning around to find a gun pointed at him. Aeson turned stiff.
   
“I’ll say this one more time, just to be clear. Not a word to ''anyone''.”
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“I’ll say this one more time, just to be clear. Not a word to anyone.”
   
 
“Y-Yes, sir.”
 
“Y-Yes, sir.”
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“No, it’s the opposite. I would rather not meet some strange faces. I shall ascertain Zaat’s situation—”
 
“No, it’s the opposite. I would rather not meet some strange faces. I shall ascertain Zaat’s situation—”
   
He stood up from the seat and walked away from the room, barring any more of the speech from being heard.
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He stood up from the seat and walked away from the room, preventing any more of the speech from being heard.
   
 
Orba played back the conversation he heard from Aeson once more in his head.
 
Orba played back the conversation he heard from Aeson once more in his head.
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Oubary and Noue were scheming something outrageous during this festival. And to add, it was something big enough to shake the very core of the Mephius’ foundation—no doubt about it.
 
Oubary and Noue were scheming something outrageous during this festival. And to add, it was something big enough to shake the very core of the Mephius’ foundation—no doubt about it.
   
''Oubary is selling out his country, and Noue who should be promoting peace, is bringing trouble to Mephius.''
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''Oubary is selling out his country, and Noue who should be promoting peace, seems to be bringing trouble to Mephius.''
   
 
He did not know what their common goal was. At the current phase, he could not even offer a guess. But two points were made clear in the conversation. The first was,
 
He did not know what their common goal was. At the current phase, he could not even offer a guess. But two points were made clear in the conversation. The first was,
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The names of these two people, at first glance, appeared to have no connection; but, it was clearly evident that these two were caught up in some plan that was, even now, steadily making way.
 
The names of these two people, at first glance, appeared to have no connection; but, it was clearly evident that these two were caught up in some plan that was, even now, steadily making way.
   
If it was something that would only simply bring troubles to Mephius, Orba might have even smiled upon it. He hated Mephius. If it meant burning the nobles in flames and causing them suffering agony, he would jump at the chance, even if by himself. However, if Oubary had to do with this, then that was a different matter. He would never go along with that bastard’s wishes even once.
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If it was something that would only simply bring troubles to Mephius, Orba might have even found it interesting. He hated Mephius. If it meant burning the nobles in flames and causing them suffering agony, he would jump at the chance, even if by himself. However, if Oubary had to do with this, then that was a different matter. He would never go along with that bastard’s wishes even once.
   
 
''And also…''
 
''And also…''
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Dressed in clothing fit for a gladiator, Orba headed towards the Moonlight Palace alone.
 
Dressed in clothing fit for a gladiator, Orba headed towards the Moonlight Palace alone.
   
The Moonlight Palace—its original name was ‘The Palace of Moonlight facing the Dragon’s Left Wing’. It neared the Imperial Dragon Eye Shrine, contained one of the most magnificent gardens found in Mephius, and was more than often used to host large parties.
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The Moonlight Palace—its original name was ‘The Palace of Moonlight facing the Dragon’s Left Wing’. It was close to the Imperial Dragon Eye Shrine, contained one of the most magnificent gardens found in Mephius, and was more than often used to host large parties.
   
The guard at the gate saw Orba’s mask and bowed. He wasn’t a man with much of a prominent character, but in accordance to the rules, performed an inspection for weapons and then granted permission for Orba to enter.
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The guard at the gate saw Orba’s mask and bowed. He wasn’t a man with much of a prominent character, but in accordance to the rules, performed an inspection for weapons after which he granted permission for him to enter.
   
 
No sooner than he had entered the garden, all the men and women called out to him. The name and appearance of the gladiator said to have defeated Ryucown had become well-known. The nobles, as guests of the party hosted in this mansion that came second to their own, welcomed him.
 
No sooner than he had entered the garden, all the men and women called out to him. The name and appearance of the gladiator said to have defeated Ryucown had become well-known. The nobles, as guests of the party hosted in this mansion that came second to their own, welcomed him.

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