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“That –”
 
“That –”
   
“Eei, enough, enough!” Nabarl shouted out as his emotions finally crossed the line. "Just how far is this stupidity going to go? If no one else will do it, I will. I will destroy with my own hands the fool who claims that our illustrious Majesty’s words are mistaken.”
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“Eei, enough, enough!” Nabarl shouted out as his emotions finally crossed the line. Just how far is this stupidity going to go? If no one else will do it, I will. I will destroy with my own hands the fool who claims that our illustrious Majesty’s words are mistaken.”
   
 
His hand went to the sword at his waist that he was about to draw in a single movement.
 
His hand went to the sword at his waist that he was about to draw in a single movement.
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“What?”
 
“What?”
   
“Take a close look with your own eyes at who you were about to point a sword at.”
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“Take a close look with your own eyes at who you were about to point a sword towards.”
   
 
Nabarl removed his gaze from the swords and turned it instead towards the man standing before him. The glimmering River Yunos shot countless darts of light into his eyes. Bordered by that gleam, the man’s face at first appeared as a dark shadow that he could not clearly make out.
 
Nabarl removed his gaze from the swords and turned it instead towards the man standing before him. The glimmering River Yunos shot countless darts of light into his eyes. Bordered by that gleam, the man’s face at first appeared as a dark shadow that he could not clearly make out.

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