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A white steam that covered all sight.
 
A white steam that covered all sight.
   
On the other side of the steam, there was a wall and a marble pillar that was visible due to being lit by a lamp.
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On the other side of the steam, there was a wall and a marble pillar that was visible due to being lit by lamps.
   
 
And the feeling of warm water that wet his cotton trousers.
 
And the feeling of warm water that wet his cotton trousers.
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Well, it wouldn’t be weird for her to be angry.
 
Well, it wouldn’t be weird for her to be angry.
   
That’s because— he could see her.
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That’s because—, he could see her.
   
 
Inside the spacious bathroom, the towel that was wrapped around her body fell and her fresh looking naked body became visible.
 
Inside the spacious bathroom, the towel that was wrapped around her body fell and her fresh looking naked body became visible.
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“…………”
 
“…………”
   
His fate might be decided with his next words.
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His fate might be decided with his next word.
   
 
Lux started to choose his words carefully with his panicked head.
 
Lux started to choose his words carefully with his panicked head.
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“Kyaaaaaaaah!?”
 
“Kyaaaaaaaah!?”
   
At the same time, there were many screams coming from the girls inside of the whole bathroom.
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At the same time, there were many screams coming from the girls of the whole bathroom.
   
 
The naked girls started to throw anything they could find at Lux with all their might.
 
The naked girls started to throw anything they could find at Lux with all their might.
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The cross-shaped fortress town made from the blocks of five towns, “Crossfield”.
 
The cross-shaped fortress town made from the blocks of five towns, “Crossfield”.
   
In the first district, which was located at the centre of such place, there were two shadows that were sprinting.
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At the first district which was located at the centre of such place, there were two shadows that were sprinting.
   
 
One of the shadows that was running ahead was a cat with tiger stripes and it had a small bag within its mouth.
 
One of the shadows that was running ahead was a cat with tiger stripes and it had a small bag within its mouth.
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The girl from the liquor store who gladly allowed Lux who didn’t have a place to sleep to stay over last night.
 
The girl from the liquor store who gladly allowed Lux who didn’t have a place to sleep to stay over last night.
   
When he saw her again, the small bag that she was carrying had been taken by a nearby cat all of a sudden.
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When he saw her again, the small bag that she was carrying had been taken by a cat nearby all of a sudden.
   
 
“Ahaha……you know you don’t have to force yourself?”
 
“Ahaha……you know you don’t have to force yourself?”
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“—Alright! I’ve finally arrived!”
 
“—Alright! I’ve finally arrived!”
   
There was basically no place left to go, so Lux closed the distance between him and the cat slowly.
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There was basically no place left to go, so Lux closes the distance between him and the cat slowly.
   
 
He then became resolved and went for the cat.
 
He then became resolved and went for the cat.
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“……No, this kind of selfishness isn’t right.”
 
“……No, this kind of selfishness isn’t right.”
   
No matter how large a debt Lux had been burdened with by this country, he should simply be happy that he was able to become a help for someone.
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No matter how much huge debt Lux had been burdened by this country, he should simply be happy that he was able to become a help for someone.
   
 
“Now then. If I don’t get back soon—”
 
“Now then. If I don’t get back soon—”
   
It had completely become dusk all of a sudden, so the surroundings had become dark.
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It has completely become dusk all of a sudden, so the surrounding has become dark.
   
 
(Not being able to see the surroundings once I become too focused on things is my bad habit.)
 
(Not being able to see the surroundings once I become too focused on things is my bad habit.)
   
As Lux reflected on his own actions, he was about to jump of the roof, but—
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As Lux reflected on his own action, he was about to jump of the roof, but—
   
   
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“Uwaaaaaah!?”
 
“Uwaaaaaah!?”
   
Lux fell along with the sensation of losing his sense of weight.
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Lux fell along with the sensation of losing the sense of his weight.
   
   
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(This is— hot water?)
 
(This is— hot water?)
   
When he looked, his body from his hips downward was covered by hot water.
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When he looked, his body from his hips and below was covered by hot water.
   
On the other side of the white steam, he was able to see an expensive looking marble pillar and wall due to the faint lamp that made the surroundings look orange.
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At the other side of the white steam, he was able to see an expensive looking marble pillar and wall due to the faint lamp that made the surroundings look orange.
   
 
“Don’t tell me this place is—”
 
“Don’t tell me this place is—”
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“How long are you planning to ride on top of me, you fooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool!”
 
“How long are you planning to ride on top of me, you fooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool!”
   
—And Lux’s consciousness connected to the present.
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—And Lux’s conscious connects to the present.
   
 
“Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!”
 
“Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!”
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“I-I’m sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorry!”
 
“I-I’m sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorry!”
   
Bath tub, chair, soap. Various things were thrown, and Lux retreated towards the washing place.
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Bath tub, chair, soap. Various things were thrown out, and Lux retreated towards the washing place.
   
 
(What do I do? To think that I would fall into the women’s bath of the large public bath…!?)
 
(What do I do? To think that I would fall into the women’s bath of the large public bath…!?)
   
Starting to despair so, Lux confirmed that there was still a girl’s pochette, which got a little wet with hot water, in his hand.
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Starting to despair so, Lux confirmed that there was a girl’s pochette, which got a little wet with hot water, in his hand.
   
 
“I-I’m sorry. I-I fell here because the roof broke; I just wanted to get this back––”
 
“I-I’m sorry. I-I fell here because the roof broke; I just wanted to get this back––”
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As he desperately tried to explain, Lux noticed.
 
As he desperately tried to explain, Lux noticed.
   
(Damn! Any kind of excuse won’t work!?)
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(Damn! Any kind of excuses won’t work!?)
   
 
“How to put it, um, sorry!”
 
“How to put it, um, sorry!”
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A red carpet of high quality was spread out on the floor.
 
A red carpet of high quality was spread out on the floor.
   
There was a large dining room like a party hall, as well as a playroom and countless guest rooms.
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There were a large dining room like a party hall, a playroom and countless guest rooms.
   
 
Refined paintings and furnishings were put here and there.
 
Refined paintings and furnishings were put here and there.
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“Wai…!? How did it become something this big!?”
 
“Wai…!? How did it become something this big!?”
   
No… since he was chased as he ran away, if he wanted to prove his innocence, he should just behave himself, but –– he instinctively ran away.
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No…, since he was chased as he ran away, if he wanted to prove his innocence, he should just behave himself, but –– he instinctively ran away.
   
 
Like wanting to chase when someone runs away, wanting to run away when being chased may also be the instinct of a creature.
 
Like wanting to chase when someone runs away, wanting to run away when being chased may also be the instinct of a creature.
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“I-It's already hopeless! I’ll just go through with it––”
 
“I-It's already hopeless! I’ll just go through with it––”
   
For now, he had to run away until the uproar settled down.
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For now, he had to run away on until the uproar settled down.
   
 
When he arrived at the entrance of this big building while thinking so,
 
When he arrived at the entrance of this big building while thinking so,
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Three girls armed with swords were standing there.
 
Three girls armed with swords were standing there.
   
“Royal Military Academy Regulations, Article 18.”
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“Royal Military Academy regulations, article 18.”
   
 
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However, only the uniform and the sword belt which they wore were alike.
 
However, only the uniform and the sword belt which they wore were alike.
   
“Regardless of whether inside or outside of the academy, it is forbidden to draw out a sword device without the permission of a superior officer. However, only in the case of flagrant delict’s confirmation or when danger befalls oneself is one allowed to draw sword and use a Drag-Ride.”
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“Regardless of within and outside of the academy, it is forbidden to draw out a sword device without the permission of a superior officer. However, only in case of flagrant delict’s confirmation or when danger befalls oneself is one allowed to draw sword and use a Drag-Ride.”
   
 
With a well-projected voice in the large entrance, the blue-haired girl smiled.
 
With a well-projected voice in the large entrance, the blue-haired girl smiled.
   
Lux who heard it forgot to even give an explanation to the girls and was driven into confusion.
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Lux who heard it forgot even to give an explanation to the girls and was driven in confusion.
   
 
''…Eh!?''
 
''…Eh!?''
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''Why did these names come out from such girls––?''
 
''Why did these names come out from such girls––?''
   
“Hmph. For a pervert, you are the one with the best looks so far. You’re good looking enough to even be added as a candidate for my marriage meeting.”
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“Hmph. For a pervert, you are the first with the best look so far. You’re good looking enough to be even added as a candidate for my marriage meeting.”
   
“Um, sorry. Just a moment ago, what did you––?”
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“Um, sorry. A while ago, what did you––?”
   
 
To the dazzlingly beautiful blue-haired girl who seemed to have the leader status, Lux asked.
 
To the dazzlingly beautiful blue-haired girl who seemed to have the leader status, Lux asked.
   
“But, it’s regrettable. There has been no pervert who had crept into this women’s dormitory and succeeded in escaping after being found by us –– the Triad.”
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“But, it’s regrettable. There is no pervert who creeps in this women’s dormitory and succeeded in escaping when being found by the us –– the Triad.”
   
 
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“OK!”
 
“OK!”
   
“Yes, my lord. But, just in case, please be careful. Sharis.”
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“Yes, my lord. But, just in case please be careful. Sharis.”
   
 
The blue-haired girl called Sharis and the two girls who were standing still on both her sides.
 
The blue-haired girl called Sharis and the two girls who were standing still on both her sides.
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“––Come forth, Wing Dragon of the crest which is the symbol of power. Fly in accordance with my sword, <Wyvern>!”
 
“––Come forth, Wing Dragon of the crest which is the symbol of power. Fly in accordance with my sword, <Wyvern>!”
   
At the same time, the space at the tip of the sword which Sharis swung shook and warped.
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At the same time, the space of the sword tip which Sharis swung shook and warped.
   
 
What gathered there at high speed were grains (particles?) of light.
 
What gathered there at high speed were grains (particles?) of light.
   
Countless pale lights tinged with undulations formed one single entity.
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Countless pale lights tinged with undulation formed one single entity.
   
 
“…!?”
 
“…!?”
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What appeared was a mechanical dragon twice as big as a human.
 
What appeared was a mechanical dragon twice as big as a human.
   
A streamlined form where metals with an acute angle were connected and lay innumerably on top of one another.<!-- 鋭角な金属が連結され-->
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A streamlined form where metals with an acute angle were connected lay innumerably on top of one another.<!-- 鋭角な金属が連結され-->
   
 
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Drag-Rides.
 
Drag-Rides.
   
They were ancient weapons which were summoned by drawing sword devices used as a pair. Mechanical armors, which copied legendary dragons, worn on one’s body and with which one acquired the war potential of a thousand soldiers.
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They were ancient weapons which were summoned by drawing sword devices used as a pair, mechanical armors, which copied legendary dragons, worn on one’s body and with which one acquired the war potential of thousand soldiers.
   
 
Seven Ruins were discovered in the world.
 
Seven Ruins were discovered in the world.
   
Those weapons which were excavated from there possessed power enough to overturn the concept of war, which had been cultivated over several hundreds of years from in the past, in an instant.
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Those weapons which were excavated from there possessed power enough to overturn the war concept, which had been cultivated several hundreds of years in the past, in an instant.
   
 
Humans who wore those Drag-Rides and could master them were called Drag-Knights.
 
Humans who wore those Drag-Rides and could master them were called Drag-Knights.
   
But, Drag-Rides were scarce and very expensive and only knights of the Kingdom and some influential people could basically possess them.
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But, Drag-Rides were scarce and very expensive and only knights of the Kingdom and some influential persons could basically possess them.
   
 
''Why do these girls possess them––''
 
''Why do these girls possess them––''
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Sharis muttered, during the opportunity when Lux was dumbfounded.
 
Sharis muttered, during the opportunity when Lux was dumbfounded.
   
The blue streamlined machine opened from within, and was unfolded into innumerable parts.
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The blue streamlined machine opened from within, and was unfolded to innumerable parts.
   
 
The parts went towards Sharis’ both arms, both legs, trunk and head, connected at high speed –– it was equipped.
 
The parts went towards Sharis’ both arms, both legs, trunk and head, connected at high speed –– it was equipped.
   
The Drag-Ride covered its master’s body with non-stop movements and changed into an armor.
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The Drag-Ride covered its master’s body with non-stopped movements and changed into armor.
   
 
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“Oh my, did you creep in here without even knowing where this is? But, it’s useless even if you are befuddled, Pervert-kun. Give up and make a Dogeza<ref>http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dogeza </ref> there. If you do so, I can get it over with about ten whiplashes.”
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“Oh my, did you creep in here without even knowing where it is? But, it’s useless even if you are befuddled, Pervert-kun. Give up and make a Dogeza<ref>http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dogeza </ref> there. If you do so, I can get it over with about ten whiplashes.”
   
 
“Uh-huh. Peeping is a crime.”
 
“Uh-huh. Peeping is a crime.”
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''Isn’t this a very dangerous situation?''
 
''Isn’t this a very dangerous situation?''
   
Within a building like this –– no, in the first place, it wasn’t equipment to use against a flesh-and-blood opponent!
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Within a building like this –– no, in the first place, it wasn’t an equipment to use against a flesh-and-blood opponent!
   
 
“Haa!”
 
“Haa!”
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Sharis who wore <Wyvern> on her body kicked the floor and flew.
 
Sharis who wore <Wyvern> on her body kicked the floor and flew.
   
From the armor of both wings on the legs and back, she sprayed out wind wearing light.
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From the armor of both wings of legs and back, she sprayed wind wearing light.
   
 
With a single leap from the edge of the entrance of the building, she attacked Lux who was in the open ceiling of the second floor.
 
With a single leap from the edge of the entrance of the building, she attacked Lux who was in the open ceiling of the second floor.
   
She greatly swung the arm covered with metal armor and suddenly struck with it as she used it like a sword.
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She greatly swung the arm covered with metal armor and suddenly struck it as she used it like a sword.
   
 
“Uwaaaaaaaah!?”
 
“Uwaaaaaaaah!?”
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“Oops! Did I hold back the speed too much?”
 
“Oops! Did I hold back the speed too much?”
   
“No! You used too much power! I’d have died though!?”
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“No! You use too much power! I’d have died though!?”
   
 
While putting a riposte to the surprised Sharis, Lux went down the stairs as he rolled over.
 
While putting a riposte to the surprised Sharis, Lux went down the stairs as he rolled over.
   
Then, the Drag-Ride for land battles which was at the entrance up to now. Tillfarr who equipped a jade green Drag-Ride –– <Wyrm> immediately blocked his way.
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Then, the Drag-Ride for land battle which was at the entrance up to now. Tillfarr who equipped a jade green Drag-Ride –– <Wyrm> immediately blocked his way.
   
 
“Hyaffuuuuh. Uh oh, test, test<ref>says often when one makes a test of sound of a mike</ref>. Notification to Pervert-san there. As of now, your crime is light.”
 
“Hyaffuuuuh. Uh oh, test, test<ref>says often when one makes a test of sound of a mike</ref>. Notification to Pervert-san there. As of now, your crime is light.”
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That’s why Sharis’ flight general purpose Drag-Knight <Wyvern> was still good, but it was dangerous here.
 
That’s why Sharis’ flight general purpose Drag-Knight <Wyvern> was still good, but it was dangerous here.
   
The limbs covered with thick armors possessed a high mobility due to multiple variables frames and could let out power likely to explode at any time as well.
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The limbs covered with thick armors possessed a high mobility due to multiple variables frames and could let power likely to explode at any time swell.
   
After all, the land battle general-purpose Drag-Ride <Wyrm> was a Drag-Ride with properties most suitable for close range combat.
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After all, the land battle general-purpose Drag-Ride <Wyrm> was a Drag-Ride with property most suitable for close range combat.
   
 
“Well, anything is fine, so behave yourself. If you struggle strangely, it’ll be rather dangerous.”
 
“Well, anything is fine, so behave yourself. If you struggle strangely, it’ll be rather dangerous.”
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Together with the armor worn on her body, she made a side fall down centering on the handrail of the stairs and landed.<!-- 階段の手すりを軸に側転し-->
 
Together with the armor worn on her body, she made a side fall down centering on the handrail of the stairs and landed.<!-- 階段の手すりを軸に側転し-->
   
A Drag-Ride was not just a mere heavy and hard armor.
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A Drag-Ride was not just a merely heavy and hard armor.
   
The kinematic performance of the installation part was also greatly strengthened by the energy brought forth from the Force Core which was the Drag-Ride’s power
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The kinematic performance of the installation part was also greatly strengthened by the energy brought from the Force Core which was the Drag-Ride’s power
   
 
“Haaah!”
 
“Haaah!”
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“Kuh…!?”
 
“Kuh…!?”
   
<nowiki>*</nowiki>BANG*! With a crushing sound, the wooden floor was smashed and dust soared. There was a light shout and movement, but the power was very great.
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<nowiki>*</nowiki>BANG*! With a crushing sound, the wooden floor was smashed and dust soared. There were a light shout and movement, but the power was very great.
   
 
While Lux shuddered at the performance of a Drag-Ride which he felt with his own body––.
 
While Lux shuddered at the performance of a Drag-Ride which he felt with his own body––.
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Tillfarr wearing <Wyrm> looked at the floor where her fist was driven in.
 
Tillfarr wearing <Wyrm> looked at the floor where her fist was driven in.
   
He had disappeared.
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Its disappeared.
   
 
The figure of Lux, in front of whom she displayed her power just now, and who should be surprised.
 
The figure of Lux, in front of whom she displayed her power just now, and who should be surprised.
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“Hmm? What is it, Sharis?”
 
“Hmm? What is it, Sharis?”
   
“Silver hair and a black collar. No… don’t tell me that boy is––”
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“Silver hair and black collar. No…, don’t tell me that boy is––”
   
 
With a serious tone, she just coughed so.
 
With a serious tone, she just coughed so.

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