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Several minutes later. As Lux once again said so while walking his way back on the deserted street,
 
Several minutes later. As Lux once again said so while walking his way back on the deserted street,
   
“Don't worry about it. I can do the joining recommendation in the next month after 5 more days after all. From tomorrow after school, we will begin with the coordination training at once.”
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“Don't worry about it. I can do the joining recommendation in the next month after 5 more days later after all. From tomorrow after school, we will begin with the coordination training at once.”
   
 
Lisha replied so with a smile on her whole face.
 
Lisha replied so with a smile on her whole face.
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“Can you make many machines like that?”
 
“Can you make many machines like that?”
   
“Even if I make it, it will be useless now though. it is 50% stronger than a general-purpose Machine Dragon, but the burden of stamina aside, the operation difficulty is on the same level as that of an average Divine Drag-Ride. Even the Sword Devices' dual wielding can't be used by anyone other than me. Do you want to try it?”
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“Even if I make it, it will be useless now though. it is 50% stronger than a general-purpose Machine Dragon, but the burden of stamina aside, the operation difficulty isn't on the same level as that of an average Divine Drag-Ride. Even the Sword Devices' dual wielding can't be used by anyone other than me. Do you want to try it?”
   
 
“No, thank you...”
 
“No, thank you...”
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Lux shivered to the coldness of the voice which came back.
 
Lux shivered to the coldness of the voice which came back.
   
With neither anger, nor sorrow nor even apathy. A hollow voice which lost all colors.
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With neither anger, sorrow nor even apathy. A hollow voice which lost all colors.
   
 
For just several seconds, the surrounding atmosphere froze.
 
For just several seconds, the surrounding atmosphere froze.
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But, Lux was not able to return an answer to it.
 
But, Lux was not able to return an answer to it.
   
“My father, Count Atismata who raised a coup d’état had died without sitting on the New Kingdom's throne because of an injury during that time. But, his fame remains and my aunt, Queen Raffi succeeded the country. And I, as a memento of the late great man, got the status of Princess of the New Kingdom. I'm merely that much of a human.”
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“My father, Count Atismata who raised a coup d’état has died without sitting on the New Kingdom's throne because of an injury at that time. But, his fame remains and my aunt, Queen Raffi succeeded the country. And I, as a memento of the late great man, got the status of Princess of the New Kingdom. I'm merely that much of a human.”
   
 
“That's not...”
 
“That's not...”
   
“But, the citizens are thankful and extolled the idol who is me. It's interesting, isn't it? It's a laughable story. The Old Empire had thoroughly laid out a tyrannical rule after all. As a substitute, they forced me to be a splendid person of character like a Princess. If I don't do it, they will urge me. They will say incomprehensible things like 'you have that responsibility, don't run away, carry out your mission'.”
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“But, the citizens are thankful and extolled the idol who is me. It's interesting, isn't it? It's a laughable story. The Old Empire had thoroughly laid out a tyrannical rule after all. As a substitute, they force me to be a splendid person of character like a Princess. If I don't do it, they will urge me. They will say incomprehensible things like 'you have that responsibility, don't run away, carry out your mission'.”
   
 
“............”
 
“............”
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But, just a world without unreasonable suffering––
 
But, just a world without unreasonable suffering––
   
The wishes which Lux were harboring were all crushed on that day five years ago.
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The wishes which Lux was harboring were all crushed on that day five years ago.
   
 
“Do you remember the Old Empire's brand applied on my belly?”
 
“Do you remember the Old Empire's brand applied on my belly?”
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As tension ran to Lux's expression, Lisha continued in a calm tone.
 
As tension ran to Lux's expression, Lisha continued in a calm tone.
   
“Actually, my father was probably a great man. In order to bring down that Empire, my father should have concentrated all his efforts to plan the coup d'état. He couldn't possibly ruin everything because of one life which was his daughter's. It had been only about two months that I had been put under house arrest, but I was abandoned, and was no longer the Earl's daughter or anything. My mother died from illness, but since I had a little sister, in the dawn when the coup d'état succeeded, that child should have become the Princess of the new royal family. Instead of me.”
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“Actually, my father was probably a great man. In order to bring down that Empire, my father should have concentrated all his efforts to plan the coup d'état. He couldn't possibly ruin everything because of one life which is his daughter's. It had been only about two months that I had been put under house arrest, but I was abandoned, and was no longer the Earl's daughter or anything. My mother died from illness, but since I had a little sister, in the dawn when the coup d'état succeeded, that child should have become the Princess of the new royal family. Instead of me.”
   
 
“............”
 
“............”
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“Well... I––”
 
“Well... I––”
   
The coup d’état five years ago.
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Coup d’état five years ago.
   
 
A scene a few days earlier than it was revived in his memory.
 
A scene a few days earlier than it was revived in his memory.
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As she suddenly returned to the talk, Lux kept quiet.
 
As she suddenly returned to the talk, Lux kept quiet.
   
“This is because Drag-Knights are everything in this era. The investigation of the ruins, the turf war for resources with other countries, peace and sovereignty. Drag-Rides are involved in all of these. In a sense, it's good for the country that I become strong.”
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“This is because Drag-Knights are all in this era. The investigation of the ruins, the turf war for resources with other countries, peace and sovereignty. Drag-Rides are involved in all of these. In a sense, it's good for the country that I become strong.”
   
 
“............”
 
“............”
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“My father was the hero who saved the people of this country. But, now I'm no one. So, I want to know it after becoming the strongest Drag-Knight. For that, I need your power. I will have you play an active role as my right hand in the "Knight Squadron". You have no objection, right? Chore Prince.”
 
“My father was the hero who saved the people of this country. But, now I'm no one. So, I want to know it after becoming the strongest Drag-Knight. For that, I need your power. I will have you play an active role as my right hand in the "Knight Squadron". You have no objection, right? Chore Prince.”
   
“Objection...? Haven't you already decided?”
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“Objection...? haven't you already decided?”
   
 
“An able woman is also quick in decisions.”
 
“An able woman is also quick in decisions.”
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The first crisis is the rebel army of the Old Empire troops that has been hiding after the coup d'état.
 
The first crisis is the rebel army of the Old Empire troops that has been hiding after the coup d'état.
   
The second crisis is the existence of the Abyss which occasionally appeared from the ruins.
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The second crisis is the existence of Abyss which occasionally appears from the ruins.
   
 
And the third crisis is the turf war with other countries regarding the research activity of the ruins themselves
 
And the third crisis is the turf war with other countries regarding the research activity of the ruins themselves
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However, they just haven't showed up these several years.
 
However, they just haven't showed up these several years.
   
“Next is–– the problem of the Abyss.”
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“Next is––, the problem of Abyss.”
   
The mysterious beasts which frequently appeared from the ruins themselves or from their surroundings.
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The mysterious beasts which frequently appear from the ruins themselves or from their surroundings.
   
While knowing that various treasures were excavated from the ruins including the Drag-Rides, it was mainly because of the Abyss that the research of each nation did not readily progress.
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While knowing that various treasures were excavated from the ruins including the Drag-Rides, it was mainly because of the Abyss that the research of each nation did not readily progress.
   
 
As a result of having greedily forced an investigation of ruins, there were also precedents where nearby villages, towns and small nations themselves were destroyed in only one night by the Abyss which appeared.
 
As a result of having greedily forced an investigation of ruins, there were also precedents where nearby villages, towns and small nations themselves were destroyed in only one night by the Abyss which appeared.
   
All that was known was that as long as you destroyed the core inside of the Abyss' body, you could kill them.
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All what was known was that as long as you destroyed the core inside the Abyss' body, you could kill them.
   
 
But, on top of the fact that it was accompanied with many dangers, one stood no chance against them with military power other than Drag-Rides.
 
But, on top of the fact that it was accompanied with many dangers, one stood no chance against them with military power other than Drag-Rides.
   
Therefore, ancient weapons and resources were dug illegally by thieves; damaging the ruins, and moreover so that the Abyss did not end up being summoned, the ruins discovered in the country were designated off-limits and strictly controlled.
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Therefore, ancient weapons and resources were dug illegally by thieves; damaging the ruins, and moreover so that Abyss did not end up being summoned, the ruins discovered in the country were designated off-limits and strictly controlled.
   
“And–– thirdly is the turf war with other countries.”
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“And––, thirdly is the turf war with other countries.”
   
 
Every corner of the world was dotted with ruins and the countries who managed their lands were basically investigating them.
 
Every corner of the world was dotted with ruins and the countries who managed their lands were basically investigating them.
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Along the border, there were also ruins of places that were vague; whether it was the territory of which country including the sea area of distant places.
 
Along the border, there were also ruins of places that were vague; whether it was the territory of which country including the sea area of distant places.
   
Therefore, one agreement was made and a mock battle of Drag-Knights in order to gain what should (could) be called "the ruins investigation rights", was to be held in each country once every several months.
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Therefore, one agreement was made and a mock battle of Drag-Knights in order to gain what should (could) be called "the ruins investigation right", was to be held in each country once every several months.
   
 
It was said that in one of them, there was also a tournament among fellows officer cadets.
 
It was said that in one of them, there was also a tournament among fellows officer cadets.
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“Then, until then...”
 
“Then, until then...”
   
“Yes, by the confrontation battle which will begin two months later, I shall have gathered the strongest unit. For that purpose, I expressly made you join the academy, and tried to make you join the "Knight Squadron", but––”
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“Yes, by the confrontation battle which will begin two months later, I shall have gather the strongest unit. For that purpose, I expressly made you get in the academy, and tried to make you join the "Knight Squadron", but––”
   
 
Lisha got sulky.
 
Lisha got sulky.
   
“No, um... I understand your feelings and I'm glad that you're expecting a lot from me, but I'm only good at defense––”
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“No, um... I understand your feelings and I'm glad that you're expecting a lot from me, but I'm good only at defense––”
   
“Let's practice on attack!”
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“Let's practice the attack!”
   
 
He was sternly pointed at with a finger and scolded.
 
He was sternly pointed at with a finger and scolded.
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“............”
 
“............”
   
Lux went to the drawing room of the academy with the same pace as when he was walking with Lisha.
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Lux went to the drawing room of the academy with the same pace as when he was walking with lisha.
   
 
Originally, he was temporarily allowed to sleep in Philphie's room, but he wanted to stay at the drawing room only today without notice.
 
Originally, he was temporarily allowed to sleep in Philphie's room, but he wanted to stay at the drawing room only today without notice.
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“I––. I'm hopeless...”
 
“I––. I'm hopeless...”
   
It was with light self-loathing that he had lain down on the sofa.
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It was lightly self-loathing that he had lain down on the sofa.
   
 
Though on the spur of the moment, he was regretting having said those words to Lisha.
 
Though on the spur of the moment, he was regretting having said those words to Lisha.
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What Lux had obtained five years ago was the title of Prince and several privileges.
 
What Lux had obtained five years ago was the title of Prince and several privileges.
   
He was wondering whether even the young him could not do something as a prince of a great Empire which lasted several hundred years.
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He was thinking whether even the young him could not do something as a prince of a great Empire which lasted several hundred years.
   
 
And, the day of fate.
 
And, the day of fate.
   
As the result of the fact that he himself personally moved–– the ideal which Lux painted as a Prince was smashed up.
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As the result of the fact that he himself personally moved––, the ideal which Lux painted as a Prince was smashed up.
   
 
Therefore, right.
 
Therefore, right.
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Why couldn't I understand the feelings of Lisha who couldn't behave like a Princess?
 
Why couldn't I understand the feelings of Lisha who couldn't behave like a Princess?
   
In the good point of having lost his position as Prince, this time he acted like a citizen and flattered the Princess.
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In the good point of having lost his position of Prince, this time he acted like a citizen and flattered the Princess.
   
 
He could not forgive such a side of himself.
 
He could not forgive such a side of himself.

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