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An innocent, pure smile like a child.
 
An innocent, pure smile like a child.
   
“How... why...?”
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“How..., why...?”
   
 
Within a hazy consciousness and putting strength in his legs which were likely to collapse at any moment, Lux asked.
 
Within a hazy consciousness and putting strength in his legs which were likely to collapse at any moment, Lux asked.
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Immediately after, he strongly coughed and finally vomited a clot of blood.
 
Immediately after, he strongly coughed and finally vomited a clot of blood.
   
“Kukukuku. As expected of you, little brother. To be able to use that Drag-Ride until you vomit blood–– I want even this gutless emperor to follow your example in the netherworld.”
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“Kukukuku. As expected of you, little brother. To be able to use that Drag-Ride until you vomit blood––, I want even this gutless emperor to follow your example in the netherworld.”
   
 
Saying so, the man kicked the face of the motionless emperor.
 
Saying so, the man kicked the face of the motionless emperor.
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To Lux's voice which got blurred, the man cocked his head in puzzlement.
 
To Lux's voice which got blurred, the man cocked his head in puzzlement.
   
“The Drag-Knights, of the, army, as well, as His Majesty the Emperor, everyone... This is, from the plan––”
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“The Drag-Knights, of the, army, as well, as His Majesty the Emperor, everyone,... This is, from the plan––”
   
 
“Ku, hahahaha! Hahahaha! Hahahaha! Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!”
 
“Ku, hahahaha! Hahahaha! Hahahaha! Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!”
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And after suddenly opening his eyes wide, he glared at Lux.
 
And after suddenly opening his eyes wide, he glared at Lux.
   
“I was saved the trouble thanks to you. I never thought that you would be going so far. Thanks to you, this easily advanced farther than what I planned. If you were done in without being able to properly defeat the army, I would have had no choice but to call the Abyss using the "flute".”
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“I was saved the trouble thanks to you. I never thought that you would be going so far. Thanks to you, this easily advanced farther than what I planned. If you were done without being able to properly defeat the army, I would have had no choice but to call the Abyss using the "flute".”
   
 
Taking out a golden flute never seen before from his breast pocket, the man laughed.
 
Taking out a golden flute never seen before from his breast pocket, the man laughed.
   
“If I called a large quantity of Abyss, it would be easy to destroy this country, but the cleaning up afterwards would be troublesome. You saved me the trouble. Goddamn Prince.”
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“If I called a large quantity of Abyss, it would be easy to destroy this country, but the cleaning up afterwards would be troublesome. You save me the trouble. Goddamn Prince.”
   
 
“Kahah...!”
 
“Kahah...!”
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The ideal end to which Lux believed in was nowhere.
 
The ideal end to which Lux believed in was nowhere.
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===Part 10===
 
===Part 10===
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Lux woke up on the sofa of the drawing room.
 
Lux woke up on the sofa of the drawing room.
   
Before he knew it, a blanket was put on his body.
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Before he knew, a blanket was put on his body.
   
On the other side of the window with the curtains opened, one could see the eastern sky which had become white.
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On the other side of the window with the curtains opened, one could see the eastern sky which has became white.
   
 
It was dawn.
 
It was dawn.
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“Besides, it's also vexing when you scream as if you've seen a ghost.”
 
“Besides, it's also vexing when you scream as if you've seen a ghost.”
   
“Ah, s-sorry... Um, the reason why I screamed is because I had a dream, so––”
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“Ah, s-sorry... Um, The reason why I screamed is because I had a dream, so––”
   
 
“You're quite honest. I'm joking, so don't worry.”
 
“You're quite honest. I'm joking, so don't worry.”
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She was usually a girl with a grown-up, cool impression, but that smile was lovely for a girl her age.
 
She was usually a girl with a grown-up, cool impression, but that smile was lovely for a girl her age.
   
“U-Um... why is Krulcifer-san here?”
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“U-Um..., why is Krulcifer-san here?”
   
 
As Lux asked so regarding their encounter in an unexpected place,
 
As Lux asked so regarding their encounter in an unexpected place,
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She suddenly returned to a serious look and said so.
 
She suddenly returned to a serious look and said so.
   
“As for the reason why I came here. Occasionally, I slip out of the dormitory to pass time. It just so happened that today it was in this drawing room that I came to. And then, you were sleeping here. That's all.”
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“As for the reason why I came here. Occasionally, I slipped out of the dormitory to pass time. It just so happens that today it was in this drawing room that I came to. And then, you were sleeping here. That's all.”
   
 
Saying so, Krulcifer with her good posture sitting on the sofa as such, softly turned her gaze to the window.
 
Saying so, Krulcifer with her good posture sitting on the sofa as such, softly turned her gaze to the window.
   
Her profile was so lovely, like a painting, such that Lux could not help being fascinated.
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Her profile was so lovely, like a painting, such that Lux could not help being fascinated (by it?).
   
 
“Do you think that it's a lie?”
 
“Do you think that it's a lie?”
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“No. After all, I occasionally want to do so, too. It's also so when I'm alone, just look up at the starry sky and do odd jobs.”
 
“No. After all, I occasionally want to do so, too. It's also so when I'm alone, just look up at the starry sky and do odd jobs.”
   
“You're quite the romanticist. Is what I would like to say, but... you're careless. If I was an assassin who had a grudge towards the Empire, you would have been killed long ago.”
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“You're quite the romanticist. Is what I would like to say, but..., you're careless. If I was an assassin who has a grudge toward the Empire, you would have been killed long ago.”
   
 
“Oh, haha...”
 
“Oh, haha...”
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“Speaking of which, Krulcifer-san can also use a Divine Drag-Ride, right?”
 
“Speaking of which, Krulcifer-san can also use a Divine Drag-Ride, right?”
   
“If I only hold onto it and don’t use it, it will be a useless possession. After all, I can't fight here and I have no interest in that anyway.”
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“If I only hold onto it and doesn’t use it, it will be a useless possession. After all, I can't fight here and I have no interest in that anyway.”
   
 
Saying so, Krulcifer dropped her gaze to the Sword Device hung at her waist.
 
Saying so, Krulcifer dropped her gaze to the Sword Device hung at her waist.
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“What do you mean by having no interest?”
 
“What do you mean by having no interest?”
   
“It means that I don't want to fight. Long ago, I tried hard and fought for someone precious to me––. And I got my hands on the Divine Drag-Ride <Fafnir>. But, at a certain time, I had lost all reasons to fight.”
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“It means that I don't want to fight. Long ago, I tried hard and fought for someone precious to me––. And I got my hands on the Divine Drag-Ride <Fafnir>. But, at a certain time, I have lost all reasons to fight.”
   
 
“By that...”
 
“By that...”
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The pain of having lost something important.
 
The pain of having lost something important.
   
It was because he thought that it was not a good thing to ask about out of curiosity.
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It was because he thought that it was not a good thing to ask out of curiosity.
   
 
“There is only one truth which remains in me. One of the keys to figure it is the "Black Hero". So I –– chase after it.”
 
“There is only one truth which remains in me. One of the keys to figure it is the "Black Hero". So I –– chase after it.”
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“Hey, I want to ask you something.”
 
“Hey, I want to ask you something.”
   
<nowiki>*</nowiki>thump*, the moment he heard that, Lux's breath stopped.
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*thumb*, the moment he heard that, Lux's breath stopped.
   
 
Those eyes.
 
Those eyes.
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That black Machine Dragon––
 
That black Machine Dragon––
   
<nowiki>*</nowiki>gooonnng*
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*gooonnng*
   
 
Suddenly, from the clock tower of the first block, they heard a big bell.
 
Suddenly, from the clock tower of the first block, they heard a big bell.

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