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The girl looked up to the sky.
 
The girl looked up to the sky.
   
As if being absorbed, the girl looked up to the deep, dark sky as though she was enchanted by it.
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As if being absorbed, the girl looked at the deep, dark sky as though she was enchanted by it.
   
 
However, the lower region of the sky was red.
 
However, the lower region of the sky was red.
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The powerful country that controlled one fifth of the world. The castle of the Acadia Empire was burning.
 
The powerful country that controlled one fifth of the world. The castle of the Acadia Empire was burning.
   
A castle made from thick rock that was built up high, as if trying to cut itself off from the outside world.
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A castle made from thick rock was built up high, as if trying to cut itself from the outside world.
   
The girl simply looked up to the sky while being surrounded by sparks that fell down to the courtyard.
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The girl simply looked up the sky while being surrounded by sparks that fell down the courtyard.
   
   
 
There were Dragons dancing in the sky.
 
There were Dragons dancing in the sky.
   
The battle of the Drag-Knights with their lives on the line where they wore dark grey ancient weapons over their bodies.
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The battle of the Drag-Knights with their lives on the line where they wore a dark grey ancient weapon over their body.
   
Hundreds of Dragons danced in the sky that was lit by flames as they howled, had their wings torn off, and fell.
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Hundreds of Dragons danced in the sky that was lit by the flames as they howled, had their wings torn off, and fell.
   
   
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He suddenly put his hand on his forehead and laughed as if he was mad.
 
He suddenly put his hand on his forehead and laughed as if he was mad.
   
Despite that, the girl did not show any response.
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Despite that, the girl didn’t show any response.
   
“This is boring…… I’m not going to kill you, idiot. What would I benefit from killing someone amusing like you?”
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“This is boring…… I’m not going to kill you, idiot. What benefit will i get from killing someone amusing like you?”
   
As the man said that, he took off the other sword that was hanging on his hip along with its sheath and threw towards the girl.
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As the man said that, he took off the other sword that was hanging on his hip along with its sheath and threw at towards the girl.
   
On the sheath that sunk down on the grass while it made a heavy sound, there were beautiful ornaments carved into it.
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On the sheath that sunk down on the grass while it made a heavy sound, it had beautiful ornaments carved into it.
   
“I’ll give that to you. The “power” that will change fate—that sword device, that is. So flee while taking that with you. This castle will go down very soon, lady.”
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“I’ll give that to you. The “power” that will change fate—that sword device that is. So flee while taking that with you. This castle will go down very soon, lady.”
   
 
The man said that while putting on a smile that didn't hold any of the insanity he'd shown till now.
 
The man said that while putting on a smile that didn't hold any of the insanity he'd shown till now.
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The girl picked up the sword silently.
 
The girl picked up the sword silently.
   
She embraced the sword which was too big for a young, small body like hers along with the sheath.
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She embraced the sword which was too big for a young small body like hers along with the sheath.
   
 
After the youth smiled fearlessly seeing that, he turned around and walked into the castle.
 
After the youth smiled fearlessly seeing that, he turned around and walked into the castle.
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What was there was a devil that was destroying the Empire that was known as the absolute undefeated myth.
 
What was there was a devil that was destroying the Empire that was known as the absolute undefeated myth.
   
It flew in many directions in the sky where there were sparks. A single grey coloured Dragon that was wreaking havoc by destroying Drag-Rides that belonged to the Empire one after another.
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It flew in many directions at the sky where there were sparks. A single grey coloured Dragon that was causing havoc by destroying Drag-Rides that belonged to the Empire one after another.
   
 
It was a giant jet-black Drag-Ride that had the same colour as the sky.
 
It was a giant jet-black Drag-Ride that had the same colour as the sky.
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That’s why, the girl wished to live on until she found the answer.
 
That’s why, the girl wished to live on until she found the answer.
   
Even as the hot wind that came from inside the castle became violent, and caused the sparks that were falling down on the courtyard to swirl.
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Even the hot wind that came from inside the castle became violent, and caused the sparks that were falling down on the courtyard to swirl.
   
 
“…………”
 
“…………”
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