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Therefore, Lux was able to lead a peaceful school life for now, but––
 
Therefore, Lux was able to lead a peaceful school life for now, but––
   
“But you know, Lux-kun. Many students’ complaints towards you have now gathered at my place.”
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“But you know, Lux-kun. Many students’ complaints towards you have gathered now at my place.”
   
 
“Eh…?”
 
“Eh…?”
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Relie, not answering his question, showed a smile all over her face.
 
Relie, not answering his question, showed a smile all over her face.
   
“The game’s time is one hour from now. I leave this request form to you; so you won’t have to hear orders from anyone if you manage to hold onto it until the time limit. Ah, you are all prohibited from using Drag-Rides, so you must not let the young ladies hurt themselves as much as possible, okay?”
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“The game’s time is one hour from now. I leave this request form to you; so you won’t have to hear orders from anyone if you manage to hold on until the time limit. Ah, you are all prohibited from using Drag-Rides, so you must not let the young ladies hurt themselves as much as possible, okay?”
   
 
“P-Please, wait a minute!? To suddenly say that––”
 
“P-Please, wait a minute!? To suddenly say that––”
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''No matter how you put it, it’s unreasonable.''
 
''No matter how you put it, it’s unreasonable.''
   
When Lux was going to rebut so, a sound like that of the ground rumbling could be heard outside of the Principal's room.
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When Lux was going to rebut so, a sound like that of the ground rumbling could be heard outside of the Principal room.
   
“Oh my? Everybody seems to have come over at once. If you don’t run away quickly, you’ll be caught immediately.”
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“Oh my? Everybody seemed to have come over at once. If you don’t run away quickly, you’ll be caught immediately.”
   
 
“What are you thinking, really!”
 
“What are you thinking, really!”
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Thus, the “Lux contest” which was Principal Relie’s plan started.
 
Thus, the “Lux contest” which was Principal Relie’s plan started.
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===Part 3===
 
===Part 3===
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Since it seemed to be a violation of the rules to leave the school premises, danger always remained.
 
Since it seemed to be a violation of the rules to leave the school premises, danger always remained.
   
“Haa… haa…!”
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“Haa…, haa…!”
   
 
It was good that he somehow escaped from the predicament, but as expected he was out of breath.
 
It was good that he somehow escaped from the predicament, but as expected he was out of breath.
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The girl, who was the New Kingdom Princess and a genius engineer of Drag-Rides, looked at Lux who entered and showed a sweet smile.
 
The girl, who was the New Kingdom Princess and a genius engineer of Drag-Rides, looked at Lux who entered and showed a sweet smile.
   
“Errr… um”
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“Errr…, um”
   
 
“Don’t be so scared. You want help, right? You can hide here for a while if you want.”
 
“Don’t be so scared. You want help, right? You can hide here for a while if you want.”
   
Lisha said so and once again moved her gaze to the work unit.
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Lisha said so and once again moved her look to the work unit.
   
 
“T-Thank you. Then, I will accept your offer.”
 
“T-Thank you. Then, I will accept your offer.”
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Gashii!
 
Gashii!
   
The moment when Lux cocked his head in puzzlement, the Drag-Ride which was on the work unit changed into the shape of a huge arm and grappled hold of his body.
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The moment when Lux cocked his head in puzzlement, the Drag-Ride which was on the work unit changed into the shape of a huge arm and grappled hold his body.
   
 
As Lux stared in wonder at the unexpected occurrence,
 
As Lux stared in wonder at the unexpected occurrence,
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“Well, yes. It didn’t feel like I could catch you by squarely running after you. I used a technique still under study where I can operate a Drag-Ride to some extent without equipping it.”
 
“Well, yes. It didn’t feel like I could catch you by squarely running after you. I used a technique still under study where I can operate a Drag-Ride to some extent without equipping it.”
   
“Wasn’t the use of Drag-Rides prohibited in the rules of this event?”
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“Wasn’t the use of Drag-Rides prohibited in the rules of this time?”
   
 
“Yes. Like I said, I’m not wearing it, look.”
 
“Yes. Like I said, I’m not wearing it, look.”
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As Lux said so, trying to persuade her,
 
As Lux said so, trying to persuade her,
   
“I-It isn’t really like that. I may not look like it, but e-even I’m usually holding back myself… Besides, there are also things to consider in the future, and I can’t hand you to other people––”
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“I-It isn’t really like that. I may not look like this, but e-even I’m usually holding back myself… Besides, there are also things to consider in the future, and I can’t hand you to other people––”
   
 
Lisha who blushed bashfully twined the fingers of both her hands and muttered so.
 
Lisha who blushed bashfully twined the fingers of both her hands and muttered so.
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About the fact that Philphie was bending his joints behind him to the extreme, as she grasped Lux's wrist when he tried to run through her.
 
About the fact that Philphie was bending his joints behind him to the extreme, as she grasped Lux's wrist when he tried to run through her.
   
Furthermore, she quickly took his remaining arm with her other hand and entangled one of her legs around Lux’s legs.
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Furthermore, she quickly took his remaining arm with her other hand and entangled one of her leg around Lux’s legs.
   
 
Lux’s movement was completely sealed in an instant.
 
Lux’s movement was completely sealed in an instant.
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Rather, it was a movement which could be said to be loose, and yet Lux could not avoid it at all.
 
Rather, it was a movement which could be said to be loose, and yet Lux could not avoid it at all.
   
Fluent movements without any waste at all, like a feather fluttering about in running water or in midair.
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Fluent movements without any waste at all, like a feather fluttering about in running water or midair.
   
 
With her beautiful taijutsu, she easily caught Lux.
 
With her beautiful taijutsu, she easily caught Lux.
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''However, aside from her refined taijutsu, is this superhuman strength a talent?''
 
''However, aside from her refined taijutsu, is this superhuman strength a talent?''
   
Even though he did not feel that she put in that much power, he could not move at all.
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Even though he did not feel that she did not put that much power, he could not move at all.
   
 
Like the power difference between an adult and a child.
 
Like the power difference between an adult and a child.
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“Ah, the request…”
 
“Ah, the request…”
   
At that instant, a red request form fell to the floor from Lux’s chest.
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At that instant, a red request felt to the floor from Lux’s chest.
   
 
When Philphie stretched out her hand to pick it up at once––
 
When Philphie stretched out her hand to pick it up at once––
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“Sorry. Philphie!”
 
“Sorry. Philphie!”
   
As he quickly collected the request with that momentum, Lux ran through the shadow of the Machine Dragon Hangar.
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As he quickly collected the request with the momentum, Lux ran through the shadow of the Machine Dragon Hangar.
   
“Haa, haa… It’s becoming gradually hard...!”
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“Haa, haa… It’s becoming gradually hard..!”
   
 
Although he somehow managed to escape from Philphie, Lux’s stamina was already at his limit.
 
Although he somehow managed to escape from Philphie, Lux’s stamina was already at his limit.
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While hiding from the female students still looking for him, he headed to the waiting room of the practice field.
 
While hiding from the female students still looking for him, he headed to the waiting room of the practice field.
   
(Wait –– if it’s now when lessons are over, there should be no one here!)
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(Wait –– if it’s now when lessons are over, there should be no one!)
   
Lux thought so and crept into the waiting room.
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Lux thought so and crept in the waiting room.
   
 
As expected, there was no one in that wide space.
 
As expected, there was no one in that wide space.
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Lux promptly stopped his breath and erased his presence.
 
Lux promptly stopped his breath and erased his presence.
   
He wondered whether it was some kind of mistake that a female student came here now, but––
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He wondered whether it was some kind of mistake that a female student came here now, but––,
   
 
“Haa, it became really unpleasant, eh. Even though now is a rare chance to catch Lux-kun––”
 
“Haa, it became really unpleasant, eh. Even though now is a rare chance to catch Lux-kun––”
   
“Ahaha. Well, it can’t be helped; the Drag-Ride’s repair is over, so I have to properly test it––”
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“Ahaha. Well, it can’t be helped; the Drag-Ride’s repair is over, so I have to properly to test it––”
   
 
Judging from the voices, there were about five or six people who came over.
 
Judging from the voices, there were about five or six people who came over.
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There were familiar female students of the “Knight Squadron” and probably unfamiliar third-year members.
 
There were familiar female students of the “Knight Squadron” and probably unfamiliar third-year members.
   
All of them took off their uniforms and were joking with each other in their underwear.
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All of them took off their uniforms and were joking with each other in underwear.
   
 
(…W-What is it!? Why are they already getting dressed up!?)
 
(…W-What is it!? Why are they already getting dressed up!?)
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Moreover, Lux who was the only male student had not officially joined the “Knight Squadron” yet.
 
Moreover, Lux who was the only male student had not officially joined the “Knight Squadron” yet.
   
Now when only the members of the “Knight Squadron” used the waiting room after school, it was inevitable that it became so.
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Now when only the members of the “Knight Squadron” use the waiting room after school, it was inevitable that it became so.
   
 
(W-What to do…!? I can’t go out from here…!)
 
(W-What to do…!? I can’t go out from here…!)
   
If there is any student who comes to this side of the compartment on a whim––
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If there is any student who comes on this side of the compartment on a whim––
   
“––Speaking of which, that boy from the rumor. Was he called Lux Acadia? Is it really all right to let him attend this academy?”
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“––Speaking of which, that boy of the rumor. Was he called Lux Acadia? Is it really all right to let him attend this academy?”
   
 
He suddenly heard such a voice of a female student who seemed to be a third-year student.
 
He suddenly heard such a voice of a female student who seemed to be a third-year student.
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Though there was no anger or displeasure, her tone of voice was tinged with caution.
 
Though there was no anger or displeasure, her tone of voice was tinged with caution.
   
They received tyranny and discrimination from the Old Empire only just five years ago, so for a third-year student who did not know Lux well, they were reasonable words, but––
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They received tyranny and discrimination from the Old Empire just only five years ago, so for a third-year student who did not know Lux well, they were reasonable words, but––
   
 
“Hmm. When trying to speak to him, he’s a really humble and good person. Also as a Drag-Knight, he’s pretty amazing––”
 
“Hmm. When trying to speak to him, he’s a really humble and good person. Also as a Drag-Knight, he’s pretty amazing––”
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“Yes, besides precisely because he is a former Prince, he also has a cute face––”
 
“Yes, besides precisely because he is a former Prince, he also has a cute face––”
   
“Hmm. But, isn’t there any worry of him being a pervert and a peeping tom? Like he looked at you with indecent eyes. After all –– most of the “men” are such creatures, right?”
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“Hmm. But, isn’t there any worry of him being a pervert and peeping tom? Like he looked at you with indecent eyes. After all –– most of the “men” are such creatures, right?”
   
 
To the words praising Lux, the voice of another girl who seemed to be a third-year student rebutted.
 
To the words praising Lux, the voice of another girl who seemed to be a third-year student rebutted.
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“Ah, Krulcifer-san. Good morning.”
 
“Ah, Krulcifer-san. Good morning.”
   
To the bright voice emitted by a female student who was changing her clothes, Lux’s body froze in surprise.
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To a bright voice emitted by a female student who was changing her clothes, Lux’s body froze in surprise.
   
 
Krulcifer Einvolk.
 
Krulcifer Einvolk.
   
A foreign student of the academy and the daughter of an earl of Ymir, a large and religious country to the North.
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A foreign student of the academy and daughter of an earl of Ymir, a large and religious country of the North.
   
 
A mysterious girl with perfect beauty and ability.
 
A mysterious girl with perfect beauty and ability.
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The eyes of the girl who came to the other side of the compartment and Lux’s met.
 
The eyes of the girl who came to the other side of the compartment and Lux’s met.
   
It was Krulcifer who had already taken off the top and bottom of her uniform, and was in her underwear.
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It was Krulcifer who had already taken off the top and bottom of her uniform, and was in underwear.
   
 
“…!?”
 
“…!?”
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Bewitching snow-like skin and a sweet fragrance of perfume slightly drifting.
 
Bewitching snow-like skin and a sweet fragrance of perfume slightly drifting.
   
Krulcifer’s appearance in her underwear that he saw for the first time was preposterously attractive and beautiful.
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Krulcifer’s appearance in underwear that he saw for the first time was preposterously attractive and beautiful.
   
 
But,
 
But,
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At this rate, Lux would be handed over as a peeping tom and expelled from the academy.
 
At this rate, Lux would be handed over as a peeping tom and expelled from the academy.
   
Inside a cage as a criminal who betrayed the girls’ trusts––
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Inside a cage as a criminal who betrayed the girls’ trust––
   
“Krulcifer-san. What’s wrong? Is something the matter?”
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“Krulcifer-san. What’s wrong? Is something the matter?”
   
 
When such despair floated across his mind, he heard the voice of a female student from the other side of the compartment.
 
When such despair floated across his mind, he heard the voice of a female student from the other side of the compartment.
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“I didn’t say thank you in that sense, um––”
 
“I didn’t say thank you in that sense, um––”
   
“Oh my! Didn’t you have any interest in my naked body? Considering that, you seemed to be looking fairly thoroughly though.”
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“Oh my! Didn’t you have any interest in my naked body? Considering that, you seemed to be fairly looking thoroughly though.”
   
Krulcifer coiled herself with a sweet voice as to feel even composure.
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Krulcifer coiled herself with sweet voice as to feel even composure.
   
 
(S-She noticed my eyes…!?)
 
(S-She noticed my eyes…!?)
   
“ah, uh… errr –– I’m sorry.”
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“ah, uh…, errr –– I’m sorry.”
   
 
As Lux, not being able to endure it, apologized, Krulcifer suddenly returned a serious face,
 
As Lux, not being able to endure it, apologized, Krulcifer suddenly returned a serious face,
   
“It looks like I pushed the teasing a little too far. It’s a bad habit of mine.”
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“It looks like I pushed the teasing a little far. It’s a bad habit of mine.”
   
 
As to let Lux calm down, she softly put her index finger at the seat next to her.
 
As to let Lux calm down, she softly put her index finger at the seat next to her.
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“––But, you should be a little more careful. You’re at present the only boy in this academy after all.”
 
“––But, you should be a little more careful. You’re at present the only boy in this academy after all.”
   
“I’m reflecting on it…”
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“I’m reflecting (on it)…”
   
Seeing Lux hanging his head, Krulcifer happily muttered “Then, it’s fine”.
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Seeing Lux hanging his head, Krulcifer happily muttered “then, it’s fine”.
   
 
Then, she closed the book she was reading and turned her gaze to Lux beside her.
 
Then, she closed the book she was reading and turned her gaze to Lux beside her.
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When Lux lay down on the desk, Krulcifer chuckled.
 
When Lux lay down on the desk, Krulcifer chuckled.
   
“Haven’t you lost that request? It wouldn’t be a laughing matter if it was inadvertently taken.”
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“Haven’t you lost that request? It wouldn’t a laughable matter if it was inadvertently taken.”
   
 
“Ah, that’s also true. I’ll check whether I properly have it––”
 
“Ah, that’s also true. I’ll check whether I properly have it––”
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To confirm it, Lux took out the special request from his pocket and put it on the table.
 
To confirm it, Lux took out the special request from his pocket and put it on the table.
   
The request on which a blank space, where the winner who became a client would write, remained safe without being taken by anyone.
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The request in which a blank space, where the winner who became a client would write, remained was safe without being taken by anyone.
   
 
“Really, thank you very much. Krulcifer-san”
 
“Really, thank you very much. Krulcifer-san”
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“Eh?”
 
“Eh?”
   
<nowiki>*</nowiki>Bang*! The waiting room’s door opened vigorously.
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*Bang*! The waiting room’s door opened vigorously.
   
 
“I found you at last, Lux! Now, quickly hand that request to me––!”
 
“I found you at last, Lux! Now, quickly hand that request to me––!”
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“With that said, I will have you listen to what I say for one week. I'll count on you.”
 
“With that said, I will have you listen to what I say for one week. I'll count on you.”
   
“Ah… please treat me well.”
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“Ah…, please treat me well.”
   
 
With a countenance as if his soul came out, Lux somehow answered.
 
With a countenance as if his soul came out, Lux somehow answered.
   
Immediately after, the surrounding female students got excited and showed various reactions such as “Congratulations!”, “As expected of you”, “To think that even Krulcifer-san was aiming for him––”
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Immediately after, the surrounding female students got excited and showed various reactions such as “congratulations!”, “as expected of you”, “to think that even Krulcifer-san was aiming for him––”
   
 
While the cheers of the female students surrounded the two of them, Krulcifer turned around to Lux.
 
While the cheers of the female students surrounded the two of them, Krulcifer turned around to Lux.
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“––Eh?”
 
“––Eh?”
   
It was not only Lux, the person concerned, who stiffened.
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It was not only Lux, the person concerned who stiffened.
   
<nowiki>*</nowiki>shiiii*……
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*shiiii*……
   
 
The atmosphere of the waiting room fell silent; after several seconds, it became a big commotion again and exploded.
 
The atmosphere of the waiting room fell silent; after several seconds, it became a big commotion again and exploded.
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Soon after high-pitched screams resounded, the female students who happened to be present raised their voices unanimously.
 
Soon after high-pitched screams resounded, the female students who happened to be present raised their voices unanimously.
   
“It’s amazing! Even such a request can be done, eh” “What should we do? With Krulcifer-san as an opponent, it doesn’t seem like we can win––” “Wait. If you think conversely, can’t it be said that it was an unprecedented?” “Yes, let’s hope for a next contest!”
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“It’s amazing! Even such a request can be done, eh” “What should we do? With Krulcifer-san as opponent, it doesn’t seem like we can win––” “Wait. If you think conversely, can’t it be said that it was an unprecedented?” “Yes, let’s hope for a next contest!”
   
 
While such words flew about among the girls,
 
While such words flew about among the girls,
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As she whispered so to the panicked Lux, Krulcifer left the waiting room.
 
As she whispered so to the panicked Lux, Krulcifer left the waiting room.
   
“Eh… wait!? Krulcifer-san?”
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“Eh…, wait!? Krulcifer-san?”
   
 
“Hey, Lux!? What is the meaning of this?! Even though you already have me––”
 
“Hey, Lux!? What is the meaning of this?! Even though you already have me––”
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For some reason, Lisha flared up at him with teary eyes, but honestly, Lux did not understand it either.
 
For some reason, Lisha flared up at him with teary eyes, but honestly, Lux did not understand it either.
   
“Errr… I don’t understand, either.”
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“Errr…, I don’t understand, either.”
   
 
While defending himself as he was troubled, Lux was thinking in the corner of his head.
 
While defending himself as he was troubled, Lux was thinking in the corner of his head.
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『––I’ll give you the details later.』
 
『––I’ll give you the details later.』
   
Krulcifer’s last words which she had said when leaving remained in Lux’s ears for a while.<noinclude>
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Krulcifer’s last words which she had said when leaving remained in Lux’s ears for a while.
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