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Hearing that, the princess maiden smiled gently and responded.
 
Hearing that, the princess maiden smiled gently and responded.
   
She was Rubia Elstein, both Claire's blood sister as well as the Divine Ritual Institute's premier princess maiden, the candidate for the Fire Elemental Lord's next Queen.
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She was Rubia Elstein, both Claire's blood sister as well as the Divine Ritual Institute's premer princess maiden, the candidate for the Fire Elemental Lord's next Queen.
   
 
Tasked with presiding over the final ceremony in this Great Festival of the Spirits, she was shouldering the most important mission.
 
Tasked with presiding over the final ceremony in this Great Festival of the Spirits, she was shouldering the most important mission.
   
"The bosom area of this ceremonial outfit is a little loose..."
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"The bosom area of this ceremonial outfit is slight loose..."
   
 
Looking down at the gap in front of her chest, Rubia sighed. The fact that her bust was slightly smaller than girls of similar age did cause this princess maiden, who could be called perfect in all respects, a slight sense of inferiority.
 
Looking down at the gap in front of her chest, Rubia sighed. The fact that her bust was slightly smaller than girls of similar age did cause this princess maiden, who could be called perfect in all respects, a slight sense of inferiority.
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"...You and I are merely traveling together due to a mission. Don't get in my way."
 
"...You and I are merely traveling together due to a mission. Don't get in my way."
   
Saying that, he prepared to start walking again.
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Sayng that, he prepared to start walking again.
   
 
"Okay, watch out or we'll get separated."
 
"Okay, watch out or we'll get separated."
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"...S-Stop joking around, I can eat by myself!"
 
"...S-Stop joking around, I can eat by myself!"
   
"That won't do. We won't look like a couple, right?"
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"That won't do. We won't look like couples, right?"
   
 
Restia glanced at the couple on the adjacent table.
 
Restia glanced at the couple on the adjacent table.
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===Part 8===
 
===Part 8===
   
Suddenly ripping through space, a massive berserk spirit appeared in the middle of the plaza.
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Suddenly ripping through space, a massive berserk spirit appeared in the middel of the plaza.
   
 
A giant beast of steel, all covered in sharp blades, commonly called the Beast of Gévaudan, it was a militarized spirit that had been deployed by the Ordesia Empire in older eras.
 
A giant beast of steel, all covered in sharp blades, commonly called the Beast of Gévaudan, it was a militarized spirit that had been deployed by the Ordesia Empire in older eras.
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Due to the dust cloud, his view was almost entirely blocked. However, he had already grasped the targets' locations.
 
Due to the dust cloud, his view was almost entirely blocked. However, he had already grasped the targets' locations.
   
Of the mini-shrines set up at the north, east, south, west corners of the portable shrine, two of them carried magic apparatus where the Demon King's spirits were sealed. All he needed to do was take the Demon King's spirits, he could ignore the other two.
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Of the mini-shrines set up at the north, east, south, west corners of the portable shrine, two of them carried magic apparatus where the Demon King's spirits were sealed. All he needed to do was take the Demon King's spirits and could ignore the other two.
   
 
Under the cover of darkness and the noisy commotion, Kamito jumped onto the edge of the giant portable shrine and ran to the north mini-shrine closest to him—
 
Under the cover of darkness and the noisy commotion, Kamito jumped onto the edge of the giant portable shrine and ran to the north mini-shrine closest to him—

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