Editing Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:BR SS Extra.2

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...Exactly like chickens. They looked identical to chickens no matter how you viewed them. Except that their beaks were especially gigantic, and they had horns as well, plus even two heads each. But their oppressive presence felt as though they far surpassed other high-ranked spirits.
 
...Exactly like chickens. They looked identical to chickens no matter how you viewed them. Except that their beaks were especially gigantic, and they had horns as well, plus even two heads each. But their oppressive presence felt as though they far surpassed other high-ranked spirits.
   
"Those are..."
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"These are..."
   
"Those are the Four Chicken Devas, the fierce bird spirits that rule this area!"
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"These are the Four Chicken Devas, the fierce bird spirits that rule this area!
   
 
In shock, Fianna explained in a trembling voice.
 
In shock, Fianna explained in a trembling voice.
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"Phew..."
 
"Phew..."
   
Kamito finally closed his eyes in relief, but his relief was short-lived...
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Kamito finally closed his eys in relief, but his relief was short-lived...
   
 
Thud.
 
Thud.

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