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===Part 7===
 
===Part 7===
   
Having obtained the herbs necessary for cooking medicinal porridge, Est walked over to the vegetable garden belonging to the Academy.
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Having obtained the herbs necessary for cooking medicinal porridge, Est walked over to the vegtable garden belonging to the Academy.
   
 
Rinslet had taught her the Laurenfrost family's folk remedy for flu. In order to put this remedy into action, a certain vegetable was needed.
 
Rinslet had taught her the Laurenfrost family's folk remedy for flu. In order to put this remedy into action, a certain vegetable was needed.
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"—Looks like there is plenty."
 
"—Looks like there is plenty."
   
Stepping into the field, Est murmured expressionlessly.
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Stepping into the field, Est mumured expressionlessly.
   
 
Her eyes were fixated on the tall scallions growing in one corner of the field.
 
Her eyes were fixated on the tall scallions growing in one corner of the field.
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"I am the Demon Slayer. I have no need to plead to spirits of the land."
 
"I am the Demon Slayer. I have no need to plead to spirits of the land."
   
"Ah, wait up—"
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"Ah, wait up&mash;"
   
 
Before Fianna had the time to stop her, Est had already plucked the scallions out .
 
Before Fianna had the time to stop her, Est had already plucked the scallions out .
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Crowing, the four chickens ran towards Est.
 
Crowing, the four chickens ran towards Est.
   
All spirits in the Academy instinctively respected Est, the highest ranking spirit, but these chickens did not show the same behavior at all.
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All spirits in the Academy instinctively respected Est, the highest ranking spiirt, but these chickens did not show the same behavior at all.
   
 
"Kehhhhhhhhhhhh!"
 
"Kehhhhhhhhhhhh!"
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"Please give me the scallions—"
 
"Please give me the scallions—"
   
Hence, the deathmatch between the Demon Slayer and the Four Chicken Devas began.
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Hence, the deathmatch between the Demon Slayer and the Four Chicken Devas begain.
   
 
===Part 8===
 
===Part 8===
   
"...Est has been gone for so long."
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"...Est is gone for so long."
   
 
Still staring at the ceiling, Kamito muttered quietly in bed.
 
Still staring at the ceiling, Kamito muttered quietly in bed.
   
No matter how safe it was within the Academy, for her to have taken so long, he could not help but worry.
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No matter how safe it was within the Academy, for her to have taken so long, he could not help but orry.
   
 
"Scarlet, I'm sorry to ask this of you, but could you check things out?"
 
"Scarlet, I'm sorry to ask this of you, but could you check things out?"

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