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===Part 1===
 
===Part 1===
   
—The first night of the Blade Dance final round had arrived.
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—The first night of the «Blade Dance» final round had arrived.
   
After defeating Muir Alenstarl's militarized spirit Valaraukar, Kamito and his entourage left the center of the abandoned city and took refuge at the historical ruins of a shrine to rest.
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After defeating Muir Alenstarl's militarized spirit «Valaraukar», Kamito and his entourage left the center of the «Abandoned City» and took refuge at the historical ruins of a shrine to rest.
   
 
The fire spirit crystal they placed on the ground glowed red, illuminating the pitch black darkness in the shrine. A simple hearth was built using stones nearby and a pot bubbled as soup boiled inside it.
 
The fire spirit crystal they placed on the ground glowed red, illuminating the pitch black darkness in the shrine. A simple hearth was built using stones nearby and a pot bubbled as soup boiled inside it.
   
"...Night time in Astral Zero is really cold after all."
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"...Night time in «Astral Zero» is really cold after all."
   
 
Sitting on Kamito's right, Ellis shivered.
 
Sitting on Kamito's right, Ellis shivered.
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"...Yeah. It really did not feel that cold during the preliminary round."
 
"...Yeah. It really did not feel that cold during the preliminary round."
   
"That was thanks to Her Highness the imperial princess' Barrier."
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"That was thanks to Her Highness the imperial princess' «Barrier»."
   
 
Sitting on Kamito's left, Rinslet replied.
 
Sitting on Kamito's left, Rinslet replied.
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Despite being a highborn daughter hailing from the Empire's elite nobles, the aproned look suited her unexpectedly well.
 
Despite being a highborn daughter hailing from the Empire's elite nobles, the aproned look suited her unexpectedly well.
   
"It is possible to set up a barrier of wind, but divine power will involuntarily spread out and easily attract swarms of Forsaken Spirits. Furthermore, it would be best to conserve energy for now."
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"It is possible to set up a barrier of wind, but divine power will involuntarily spread out and easily attract swarms of «Forsaken Spirits». Furthermore, it would be best to conserve energy for now."
   
Ellis nodded honestly. After all, she had exhausted her strength in the consecutive battles against Lily Flame and Valaraukar.
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Ellis nodded honestly. After all, she had exhausted her strength in the consecutive battles against Lily Flame and «Valaraukar».
   
 
Similarly, having exhibited norm-defying power for Kamito's sake, Est was now in deep slumber in sword form. Resting against the wall, she was probably not going to wake up for quite a while.
 
Similarly, having exhibited norm-defying power for Kamito's sake, Est was now in deep slumber in sword form. Resting against the wall, she was probably not going to wake up for quite a while.
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"Your demon wind spirit should be quite warm to hug. Claire frequently uses Scarlet as a body pillow."
 
"Your demon wind spirit should be quite warm to hug. Claire frequently uses Scarlet as a body pillow."
   
"...But Simorgh's face is kind of scary."
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"...But «Simorgh»'s face is kind of scary."
   
 
"Well, well, indeed it is an intrepid face."
 
"Well, well, indeed it is an intrepid face."
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Dressed in a military uniform, her petite body was sitting with her knees drawn up to her chest.
 
Dressed in a military uniform, her petite body was sitting with her knees drawn up to her chest.
   
Muir Alenstarl—the Instructional School's second ranked combatant.
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Muir Alenstarl—the «Instructional School»'s second ranked combatant.
   
The extraordinary Monster—specialized in mass destruction.
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The extraordinary «Monster»—specialized in mass destruction.
   
 
Like a small animal that was wary of humans, she kept a delicate distance away from Kamito's group.
 
Like a small animal that was wary of humans, she kept a delicate distance away from Kamito's group.
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Ellis and Rinslet raised their voices at the same time.
 
Ellis and Rinslet raised their voices at the same time.
   
"Kamito, I still think we should take away her magic stone."
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"Kamito, I still think we should take away her «Magic Stone»."
   
 
"Seconded. She is far too dangerous!"
 
"Seconded. She is far too dangerous!"
   
Indeed, after fighting Valaraukar—
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Indeed, after fighting «Valaraukar»—
   
Kamito had decided explicitly not to take away Muir's magic stone.
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Kamito had decided explicitly not to take away Muir's «Magic Stone».
   
In a blade dance, taking the loser's magic stone was the winner's legitimate right. In fact, Kamito's decision could be said to contravene the spirit of the Blade Dance held by the Elemental Lords.
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In a blade dance, taking the loser's «Magic Stone» was the winner's legitimate right. In fact, Kamito's decision could be said to contravene the spirit of the «Blade Dance» held by the «Elemental Lords».
   
Naturally, Ellis and Rinslet were likewise opposed to Kamito's decision. Even so, Kamito did not take Muir's magic stone because he wanted to have a good chat with her after four years of separation.
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Naturally, Ellis and Rinslet were likewise opposed to Kamito's decision. Even so, Kamito did not take Muir's «Magic Stone» because he wanted to have a good chat with her after four years of separation.
   
 
(Also...)
 
(Also...)
   
On the day the Instructional School was attacked by the unidentified archdemon...
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On the day the «Instructional School» was attacked by the unidentified archdemon...
   
 
Kamito felt quite guilty about leaving young Muir behind alone.
 
Kamito felt quite guilty about leaving young Muir behind alone.
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"Muir is not an ordinary elementalist. Having lost her militarized spirit, she can't do anything."
 
"Muir is not an ordinary elementalist. Having lost her militarized spirit, she can't do anything."
   
In actual fact, Muir was not even capable of using a contracted spirit. The special power she was born with—the Jester's Vise, caused spirits to go berserk until their very being was consumed to nothing.
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In actual fact, Muir was not even capable of using a contracted spirit. The special power she was born with—the «Jester's Vise», caused spirits to go berserk until their very being was consumed to nothing.
   
 
"Ara, even without a contracted spirit, killing you Onee-chans is still very easy."
 
"Ara, even without a contracted spirit, killing you Onee-chans is still very easy."
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She simply had no concept of good and evil.
 
She simply had no concept of good and evil.
   
This was a common trait in the orphans raised by the Instructional School.
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This was a common trait in the orphans raised by the «Instructional School».
   
 
(...Before meeting Restia, I was the same too.)
 
(...Before meeting Restia, I was the same too.)
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"...You really know how to make everything."
 
"...You really know how to make everything."
   
"I made preparations in advance before the finals began. Besides, Fenrir's alternate dimension is even able to keep the fish fresh."
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"I made preparations in advance before the finals began. Besides, «Fenrir»'s alternate dimension is even able to keep the fish fresh."
   
 
Sitting by her obediently, Fenrir barked happily when it heard words of praise from her.
 
Sitting by her obediently, Fenrir barked happily when it heard words of praise from her.
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"You just used a militarized spirit of that level. You can't possibly be not hungry."
 
"You just used a militarized spirit of that level. You can't possibly be not hungry."
   
"Trained combatants from the Instructional School can execute combat missions continuously for a week without eating."
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"Trained combatants from the «Instructional School» can execute combat missions continuously for a week without eating."
   
 
"...That's true. However, now is not the same kind of situation."
 
"...That's true. However, now is not the same kind of situation."
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Kamito asked directly.
 
Kamito asked directly.
   
Ever since their first encounter at the Instructional School, Muir had been addressing Kamito as Onii-sama.
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Ever since their first encounter at the «Instructional School», Muir had been addressing Kamito as Onii-sama.
   
 
He had asked many times in the past and each time her answer was the same.
 
He had asked many times in the past and each time her answer was the same.
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"On that day?"
 
"On that day?"
   
"Four years ago. After the Instructional School was wrecked by the archdemon of flame... By the way, you fought the archdemon directly, didn't you, Muir?"
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"Four years ago. After the «Instructional School» was wrecked by the archdemon of flame... By the way, you fought the archdemon directly, didn't you, Muir?"
   
 
"Yeah, fought—and lost."
 
"Yeah, fought—and lost."
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As if completely unconcerned with her defeat, Muir nodded calmly.
 
As if completely unconcerned with her defeat, Muir nodded calmly.
   
The archdemon who only needed half a day to destroy the Instructional School, an organization in command of the strongest combat skills. Back then, Muir was obviously no match because she had level restrictions on the spirits she was authorized to employ.
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The archdemon who only needed half a day to destroy the «Instructional School», an organization in command of the strongest combat skills. Back then, Muir was obviously no match because she had level restrictions on the spirits she was authorized to employ.
   
"Not long after that, the Empire sent the Numbers to investigate. Many people were captured, but Muir had already escaped long before then—"
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"Not long after that, the Empire sent the «Numbers» to investigate. Many people were captured but Muir had already escaped long before then—"
   
Henceforth, she wandered around until she came into contact with Murders on a certain street.
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Henceforth, she wandered around until she came into contact with «Murders» on a certain street.
   
 
There, she was hired as a professional assassin and began living in the underground circuit.
 
There, she was hired as a professional assassin and began living in the underground circuit.
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(...Just like me.)
 
(...Just like me.)
   
All the orphans who grew up in that facility knew no other way to survive. Let alone relying on relatives, even their family registry records<!--户籍 / family registry--> were nonexistent. Where Muir and Kamito's fates diverged was the fact that Kamito's first assassination target was the Dusk Witch.
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All the orphans who grew up in that facility knew no other way to surive. Let alone relying on relatives, even their family registry records<!--户籍 / family registry--> were nonexistent. Where Muir and Kamito's fates diverged was the fact that Kamito's first assassination target was the «Dusk Witch».
   
 
"...Next, meeting up with Lily happened two years later."
 
"...Next, meeting up with Lily happened two years later."
   
After making contact with Lily Flame using the intelligence network of the Murders, Lily introduced Muir to that woman named Cardinal. After that, Cardinal—
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After making contact with Lily Flame using the intelligence network of the «Murders», Lily introduced Muir to that woman named «Cardinal». After that, «Cardinal»—
   
"She is the one who now calls herself Ren Ashbell, the Strongest Blade Dancer."
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"She is the one who now calls herself Ren Ashbell, the «Strongest Blade Dancer»."
   
"Was she using the Murders network to gather orphans from the Instructional School?"
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"Was she using the «Murders» network to gather orphans from the «Instructional School»?"
   
Due to the Instructional School's collapse, the orphans who were left with nowhere to go were highly likely to make contact with Murders.
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Due to the «Instructional School»'s collapse, the orphans who were left with nowhere to go were highly likely to make contact with «Murders».
   
 
She probably put informants in place beforehand in anticipation of that.
 
She probably put informants in place beforehand in anticipation of that.
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That Jio Inzagi was most likely recruited in the same manner.
 
That Jio Inzagi was most likely recruited in the same manner.
   
"That woman told me I could meet Onii-sama as long as I entered the Blade Dance."
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"That woman told me I could meet Onii-sama as long as I entered the «Blade Dance»."
   
 
"She—Ren Ashbell, what is her goal?"
 
"She—Ren Ashbell, what is her goal?"
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"...I see."
 
"...I see."
   
...On further thought, it was true. Team Inferno's members did not share a common a goal. They were simply an alliance with aligned interests.
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...On further thought, it was true. «Team Inferno»'s members did not share a common a goal. They were simply an alliance with aligned interests.
   
 
"However, that woman did say—"
 
"However, that woman did say—"
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Kamito muttered to himself mentally.
 
Kamito muttered to himself mentally.
   
According to Fianna who was captured by Sjora Kahn once, Kamito was the current reincarnation of the Demon King who inherited the power of the Darkness Elemental Lord, Ren Ashdoll.
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According to Fianna who was captured by Sjora Kahn once, Kamito was the current reincarnation of the «Demon King» who inherited the power of the Darkness Elemental Lord, «Ren Ashdoll».
   
 
(...Within my body, is that kind of existence really present?)
 
(...Within my body, is that kind of existence really present?)
   
Ever since the Blade Dance started, he kept feeling something awakening within him.
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Ever since the «Blade Dance» started, he kept feeling something awakening within him.
   
 
Was he really recovering his power from three years ago gradually or was there more to it?
 
Was he really recovering his power from three years ago gradually or was there more to it?
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"..."
 
"..."
   
The special ability Muir was born with—the Jester's Vise.
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The special ability Muir was born with—the «Jester's Vise».
   
 
Spirits touched by her all descended into madness.
 
Spirits touched by her all descended into madness.
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"Since the world has rejected Muir, Muir will reject the world."
 
"Since the world has rejected Muir, Muir will reject the world."
   
Looking down upon the fire spirit spewing intense flames, she murmured.
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Looking down upon the fire spirit spewing intense flames. she murmured.
   
 
"But back then, only Onii-sama did not reject me."
 
"But back then, only Onii-sama did not reject me."
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"Back then?"
 
"Back then?"
   
"Yes. The day Onii-sama was brought to the Instructional School."
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"Yes. The day Onii-sama was brought to the «Instructional School»."
   
 
"...Sorry. I really—have no recollection of those times."
 
"...Sorry. I really—have no recollection of those times."
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Injuries could be cured using magic, but sleep was the best method to replenish depleted divine power.
 
Injuries could be cured using magic, but sleep was the best method to replenish depleted divine power.
   
"Is it really okay for you not to take Muir's magic stone?"
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"Is it really okay for you not to take Muir's «Magic Stone»?"
   
 
"Hmm?"
 
"Hmm?"
   
"Maybe while Onii-sama is sleeping, Muir will steal Onii-sama's magic stone?"
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"Maybe while Onii-sama is sleeping, Muir will steal Onii-sama's «Magic Stone»?"
   
 
"You're not going to do that, Muir."
 
"You're not going to do that, Muir."
   
Kamito then laid himself down on the ground. With Ellis' Simorgh keeping watch outside, surprise attacks from other teams should not be a worry.
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Kamito then laid himself down on the ground. With Ellis' «Simorgh» keeping watch outside, surprise attacks from other teams should not be a worry.
   
 
Looking up at the ceiling that was entangled with tree roots, Kamito spoke up.
 
Looking up at the ceiling that was entangled with tree roots, Kamito spoke up.
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"What is it? Onii-sama?"
 
"What is it? Onii-sama?"
   
"Say, once the Blade Dance is finished, do you want to return with me to the Empire?"
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"Say, once the «Blade Dance» is finished, do you want to return with me to the Empire?"
   
 
"...What do you mean?"
 
"...What do you mean?"
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"Very soon, the sun will be up."
 
"Very soon, the sun will be up."
   
The battle from last night was not that long ago. As they looked towards the center of the abandoned city, the flames released by Valaraukar were still burning intensely.
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The battle from last night was not that long ago. As they looked towards the center of the abandoned city, the flames released by «Valaraukar» were still burning intensely.
   
 
"By the way—"
 
"By the way—"
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"...Ah yes. Indeed, Claire was pretty much like that last year."
 
"...Ah yes. Indeed, Claire was pretty much like that last year."
   
Back when Velsaria was still the leader, the Sylphid Knights had engaged Claire in battle numerous times. Even after Ellis took over the Knights, they were often in opposition with Claire.
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Back when Velsaria was still the leader, the «Sylphid Knights» had engaged Claire in battle numerous times. Even after Ellis took over the Knights, they were often in opposition with Claire.
   
 
That said, Rinslet here would often interfere in those battles too.
 
That said, Rinslet here would often interfere in those battles too.
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Over there was a flying dragon, flapping its wings.
 
Over there was a flying dragon, flapping its wings.
   
"That's the flying dragon spirit from the Knights of the Dragon Emperor...!"
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"That's the flying dragon spirit from the «Knights of the Dragon Emperor»...!"
   
 
The flying dragon spirit seemed to be circling in the air as if searching for something, spitting fireballs at the ground.
 
The flying dragon spirit seemed to be circling in the air as if searching for something, spitting fireballs at the ground.
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Inside the shrine, Kamito's quiet breathing could be heard.
 
Inside the shrine, Kamito's quiet breathing could be heard.
   
He must have accumulated a great amount of fatigue from the two consecutive battles against Valaraukar. He was quite sound asleep.
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He must have accumulated a great amount of fatigue from the two consecutive battles against «Valaraukar». He was quite sound asleep.
   
 
Of course, as soon as Muir emitted any killing intent, he would probably wake up instantly.
 
Of course, as soon as Muir emitted any killing intent, he would probably wake up instantly.
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Even so, these words were very important to Muir.
 
Even so, these words were very important to Muir.
   
It brought a shred of solace to the Monster's broken-down heart.
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It brought a shred of solace to the «Monster»'s broken-down heart.
   
 
(...However, I'm sorry. Onii-sama.)
 
(...However, I'm sorry. Onii-sama.)
   
Having lived in darkness for so long, the Monster could no longer integrate herself into the world of sunlight.
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Having lived in darkness for so long, the «Monster» could no longer integrate herself into the world of sunlight.
   
Muir placed her magic stone by Kamito's pillow side.
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Muir placed her «Magic Stone» by Kamito's pillow side.
   
 
"—Goodbye, Onii-sama. I will be very happy the next time we play together again."
 
"—Goodbye, Onii-sama. I will be very happy the next time we play together again."
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Finally, a sad smile surfaced—
 
Finally, a sad smile surfaced—
   
Muir Alenstarl vanished from the front stage of the Blade Dance.
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Muir Alenstarl vanished from the front stage of the «Blade Dance».
   
   

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