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===Part 1===
 
===Part 1===
   
After taking the magic stones from the two elementalists, belonging to the Knights of the Dragon Emperor and the Sacred Spirit Knights respectively, Kamito met up with Ellis and the rest.
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After taking the «Magic Stones» from the two elementalists, belonging to the «Knights of the Dragon Emperor» and the «Sacred Spirit Knights» respectively, Kamito met up with Ellis and the rest.
   
 
The flying dragon elementalist instantly retreated as soon as she realized her teammate had been defeated.
 
The flying dragon elementalist instantly retreated as soon as she realized her teammate had been defeated.
   
Including Muir Alenstarl who had forfeited voluntarily, Kamito's team had now obtained three magic stones.
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Including Muir Alenstarl who had forfeited voluntarily, Kamito's team had now obtained three «Magic Stones».
   
 
Fenrir was used to take the injured Kamito and Fianna over to a nearby shrine. A large piece of cloth was laid on the floor while Kamito lay on it, with a healing stone resting on top of his broken arm.
 
Fenrir was used to take the injured Kamito and Fianna over to a nearby shrine. A large piece of cloth was laid on the floor while Kamito lay on it, with a healing stone resting on top of his broken arm.
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Regarding the demon sword of darkness she was carrying.
 
Regarding the demon sword of darkness she was carrying.
   
Why would Fianna be holding on to the Vorpal Sword—
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Why would Fianna be holding on to the «Vorpal Sword»—
   
 
"Ooh, mmm..."
 
"Ooh, mmm..."
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...This was hardly surprising. What Fianna revealed was completely shocking.
 
...This was hardly surprising. What Fianna revealed was completely shocking.
   
Rubia Elstein—Claire's elder sister by blood, the Calamity Queen who had betrayed the Elemental Lords.
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Rubia Elstein—Claire's elder sister by blood, the «Calamity Queen» who had betrayed the Elemental Lords.
   
 
She was the true identity of the fake Ren Ashbell.
 
She was the true identity of the fake Ren Ashbell.
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Kamito knew how much effort she had invested in order to see her older sister again.
 
Kamito knew how much effort she had invested in order to see her older sister again.
   
The kind of thoughts, feelings and determination she embraced to participate in this current Blade Dance.
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The kind of thoughts, feelings and determination she embraced to participate in this current «Blade Dance».
   
 
Surely, she must have suffered an unimaginably heavy blow.
 
Surely, she must have suffered an unimaginably heavy blow.
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Kamito silently clenched his trembling fist.
 
Kamito silently clenched his trembling fist.
   
"But why would Claire's older sister steal Ren Ashbell's identity to participate in this blade dance festival?"
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"But why would Claire's older sister steal «Ren Ashbell»'s identity to participate in this blade dance festival?"
   
 
"I don't know what her intentions are either."
 
"I don't know what her intentions are either."
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Ellis inquired with puzzlement but Fianna could only shake her head.
 
Ellis inquired with puzzlement but Fianna could only shake her head.
   
"However, the reason why she took Claire away was obvious. In order to make her the Darkness Queen. —For making Kamito-kun awaken as the Demon King."
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"However, the reason why she took Claire away was obvious. In order to make her the «Darkness Queen». —For making Kamito-kun awaken as the «Demon King»."
   
 
"...!?"
 
"...!?"
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—Throb. Kamito's head began to hurt again.
 
—Throb. Kamito's head began to hurt again.
   
The Demon King—the successor to the Darkness Elemental Lord whose existence had been purged from proper history.
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The «Demon King»—the successor to the «Darkness Elemental Lord» whose existence had been purged from proper history.
   
 
Like Rubia, Restia also wanted Kamito awaken as the Demon King.
 
Like Rubia, Restia also wanted Kamito awaken as the Demon King.
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(...What on earth is the reason?)
 
(...What on earth is the reason?)
   
What relation did this have with her Wish three years ago—?
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What relation did this have with her «Wish» three years ago—?
   
 
Kamito looked at the demon sword Fianna handed over.
 
Kamito looked at the demon sword Fianna handed over.
   
The Vorpal Sword was apparently entrusted to Fianna by Claire just before she was taken away.
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The «Vorpal Sword» was apparently entrusted to Fianna by Claire just before she was taken away.
   
 
As for why Claire was in possession of this sword—What had transpired was unclear.
 
As for why Claire was in possession of this sword—What had transpired was unclear.
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Even when Kamito tried infusing a small amount of divine power into it, there was no reaction. Given this kind of state, even if Restia could return to human form, she could not be used as an elemental waffe.
 
Even when Kamito tried infusing a small amount of divine power into it, there was no reaction. Given this kind of state, even if Restia could return to human form, she could not be used as an elemental waffe.
   
Kamito had clearly been searching for her throughout these three years, but now that he finally retrieved her, there was no sense of reality. The current Vorpal Sword was merely a symbolic representation in the form of a sword.
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Kamito had clearly been searching for her throughout these three years, but now that he finally retrieved her, there was no sense of reality. The current «Vorpal Sword» was merely a symbolic representation in the form of a sword.
   
 
"We must hurry to save Claire!"
 
"We must hurry to save Claire!"
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Suppressing his anxious emotions, Kamito asked calmly.
 
Suppressing his anxious emotions, Kamito asked calmly.
   
The abandoned city Megidoa was a very vast place. And covered by the sea of trees, the ruins were like a labyrinth. Searching randomly would only prove fruitless.
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The «Abandoned City Megidoa» was a very vast place. And covered by the sea of trees, the ruins were like a labyrinth. Searching randomly would only prove fruitless.
   
 
"Although this is only my speculation..."
 
"Although this is only my speculation..."
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Fianna nodded as she said.
 
Fianna nodded as she said.
   
"Rubia-sama will surely perform the ritual for making Claire the Darkness Queen here in this abandoned city. In order to conduct such a large scale ritual, naturally a place with powerful leylines would be selected. Thinking back, when I was captured by Sjora Kahn, she also chose an ancient shrine with powerful leylines, right?"
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"Rubia-sama will surely perform the ritual for making Claire the «Darkness Queen» here in this «Abandoned City». In order to conduct such a large scale ritual, naturally a place with powerful leylines would be selected. Thinking back, when I was captured by Sjora Kahn, she also chose an ancient shrine with powerful leylines, right?"
   
"But aren't the leylines in this abandoned city unusable?"
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"But aren't the leylines in this «Abandoned City» unusable?"
   
"Yeah. Indeed the leylines in this abandoned city have become broken and fragmented due to the past Spirit War. But exactly because of that, it is difficult to find areas where the leylines remain intact."
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"Yeah. Indeed the leylines in this «Abandoned City» have become broken and fragmented due to the past «Spirit War». But exactly because of that, it is difficult to find areas where the leylines remain intact."
   
 
"...I see."
 
"...I see."
   
If a piece of land contained many leylines, there would be too many choices for performing rituals and very hard to narrow down. However, within this abandoned city, eligible locations were very rare.
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If a piece of land contained many leylines, there would be too many choices for performing rituals and very hard to narrow down. However, within this «Abandoned City», eligible locations were very rare.
   
In other words, all they need to find was a place where leylines gathered and very likely it would be the place where the ritual for making Claire the Darkness Queen would be held—Essentially that.
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In other words, all they need to find was a place where leylines gathered and very likely it would be the place where the ritual for making Claire the «Darkness Queen» would be held—Essentially that.
   
"Although I can't use Clairvoyance at Princess Linfa's high level, I can still use it to find leylines."
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"Although I can't use «Clairvoyance» at Princess Linfa's high level, I can still use it to find leylines."
   
 
Fianna turned towards Rinslet.
 
Fianna turned towards Rinslet.
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Appearing before Kamito and the girls' eyes was a massive water basin for rituals.
 
Appearing before Kamito and the girls' eyes was a massive water basin for rituals.
   
"—''Create water''!"
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"—«Create Water»!"
   
 
Rinslet placed her hand on the basin and used magic to fill it with purified water.
 
Rinslet placed her hand on the basin and used magic to fill it with purified water.
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Reacting to the solemn spell, the jewels floating on the water surface began to spin rapidly.
 
Reacting to the solemn spell, the jewels floating on the water surface began to spin rapidly.
   
Treating this much smaller water basin as the abandoned city, the jewels began to seek out locations where leylines flowed.
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Treating this much smaller water basin as the «Abandoned City», the jewels began to seek out locations where leylines flowed.
   
 
"How is it?"
 
"How is it?"
   
"Please wait a moment... The spirit seals' interference makes things hard to read."
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"Please wait a moment... The «Spirit Seals»'s interference makes things hard to read."
   
 
Sweat appeared on Fianna's forehead.
 
Sweat appeared on Fianna's forehead.
   
(...The spirit seals are interfering with each other huh.)
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(...The «Spirit Seals» are interfering with each other huh.)
   
 
Kamito glanced at Fianna's right hand.
 
Kamito glanced at Fianna's right hand.
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The fire spirit seal Claire had entrusted her was carved right there.
 
The fire spirit seal Claire had entrusted her was carved right there.
   
Using the Covenant exchanged between royalty and nobility, Claire had transferred Scarlet's spirit contract to Fianna. Hence, Fianna was currently in a very unstable state for an elementalist, that of dual contracts.
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Using the «Covenant» exchanged between royalty and nobility, Claire had transferred «Scarlet»'s spirit contract to Fianna. Hence, Fianna was currently in a very unstable state for an elementalist, that of dual contracts.
   
 
"There are no active leylines nearby... Probably, much farther away..."
 
"There are no active leylines nearby... Probably, much farther away..."
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"...No doubt about it, this is Scarlet's will."
 
"...No doubt about it, this is Scarlet's will."
   
Fianna explained as she looked at the glowing spirit seal on her right hand.
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Fianna explained as she looked at the glowing «Spirit Seal» on her right hand.
   
 
"Even after the spirit seal has been transferred, Scarlet still seems to maintain some connection to Claire, the original master."
 
"Even after the spirit seal has been transferred, Scarlet still seems to maintain some connection to Claire, the original master."
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Ellis asked.
 
Ellis asked.
   
"This is the most eastern end of the abandoned city. Uh, the distance from here is—"
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"This is the most eastern end of the «Abandoned City». Uh, the distance from here is—"
   
 
Fianna swiftly calculated the relative distance between the flame and the jewels.
 
Fianna swiftly calculated the relative distance between the flame and the jewels.
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Kamito muttered with a solemn expression.
 
Kamito muttered with a solemn expression.
   
Fianna's conclusion was ultimately just a theoretical shortest distance in a straight line. But in actual fact, the abandoned city was a labyrinth with a sea of trees growing all over the ruins. Along the way, they could be attacked by Forsaken Spirits and might even come into conflict with other teams.
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Fianna's conclusion was ultimately just a theoretical shortest distance in a straight line. But in actual fact, the abandoned city was a labyrinth with a sea of trees growing all over the ruins. Along the way, they could be attacked by «Forsaken Spirits» and might even come into conflict with other teams.
   
 
Although Ellis could use wind magic to fly in the air, flying continuously for hours was not possible. And alone, she could not get Claire back from Rubia's clutches.
 
Although Ellis could use wind magic to fly in the air, flying continuously for hours was not possible. And alone, she could not get Claire back from Rubia's clutches.
   
"We must get Claire back before the Darkness Queen ritual is completed..."
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"We must get Claire back before the «Darkness Queen» ritual is completed..."
   
 
Just as the entire atmosphere within the shrine was weighed down by a gloomy solemnity—
 
Just as the entire atmosphere within the shrine was weighed down by a gloomy solemnity—
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Claire shook her head and pleaded.
 
Claire shook her head and pleaded.
   
"Scarlet is my precious friend."
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"«Scarlet» is my precious friend."
   
 
"Shut up! You're the younger sister of the traitor who shamed the Empire!"
 
"Shut up! You're the younger sister of the traitor who shamed the Empire!"
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"I can sense exceptional talent from this girl. Wrecking the opportunity here would be quite a shame. If she went to study at my Academy, I'm certain she will become an excellent elementalist."
 
"I can sense exceptional talent from this girl. Wrecking the opportunity here would be quite a shame. If she went to study at my Academy, I'm certain she will become an excellent elementalist."
   
"Th-This is no joking matter! This girl is the younger sister of that Calamity Queen!"
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"Th-This is no joking matter! This girl is the younger sister of that «Calamity Queen»!"
   
"...So what? Are you objecting to my decision, one made by the Dusk Witch?"
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"...So what? Are you objecting to my decision, one made by the «Dusk Witch»?"
   
 
With eyes as sharp as an eagle's, she glared at the officer.
 
With eyes as sharp as an eagle's, she glared at the officer.
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Once the officer and the soldiers had left, she bowed her head and looked down at Claire.
 
Once the officer and the soldiers had left, she bowed her head and looked down at Claire.
   
Even someone as ignorant in worldly affairs as Claire would have heard of the Dusk Witch's title.
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Even someone as ignorant in worldly affairs as Claire would have heard of the «Dusk Witch»'s title.
   
Served by a powerful demon spirit, reputed to have vanquished even archdemon-class spirits, the continent's strongest elementalist.
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Served by a powerful demon spirit, reputed to have vanquished even Archdemon-class spirits, the continent's strongest elementalist.
   
 
"Stand up, Elstein lass."
 
"Stand up, Elstein lass."
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Young Claire was faced with a choice.
 
Young Claire was faced with a choice.
   
At that point in time, it was still possible for Claire to hand over Scarlet to the imperial family, move away to another place to hide her identity and live the rest of her life as an ordinary girl.
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At that point in time, it was still possible for Claire to hand over «Scarlet» to the imperial family, move away to another place to hide her identity and live the rest of her life as an ordinary girl.
   
 
As for her other choice, a cruel fate undoubtedly awaited her.
 
As for her other choice, a cruel fate undoubtedly awaited her.
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However, that was merely the beginning of Claire's trials.
 
However, that was merely the beginning of Claire's trials.
   
"...Did you know? That girl is the younger sister of the Calamity Queen."
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"...Did you know? That girl is the younger sister of the «Calamity Queen»."
   
 
"Woah! Why would such a scary child be in the same academy as us?"
 
"Woah! Why would such a scary child be in the same academy as us?"
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"I-I'm sorry, but..."
 
"I-I'm sorry, but..."
   
"So, how about we destroy this spirit seal for you?"
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"So, how about we destroy this «Spirit Seal» for you?"
   
 
"N-No, don't...!"
 
"N-No, don't...!"
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"That's right, I'll become stronger... Much much stronger, stronger than anyone else..."
 
"That's right, I'll become stronger... Much much stronger, stronger than anyone else..."
   
Strong enough to obtain victory in the Blade Dance, to meet up with her older sister again.
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Strong enough to obtain victory in the «Blade Dance», to meet up with her older sister again.
   
 
...Then on that day, three years ago, Claire met ''her''.
 
...Then on that day, three years ago, Claire met ''her''.
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Rather, it did not really count as meeting for Claire simply idolized her from afar.
 
Rather, it did not really count as meeting for Claire simply idolized her from afar.
   
The Strongest Blade Dancer—Ren Ashbell.
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The «Strongest Blade Dancer»—Ren Ashbell.
   
 
An otherworldly beauty, roughly the same age as her.
 
An otherworldly beauty, roughly the same age as her.
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Claire gripped the long hem that dangled all the way down to the floor.
 
Claire gripped the long hem that dangled all the way down to the floor.
   
She was currently dressed in high-ranking ritual attire that only Queens wore.
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She was currently dressed in high-ranking ritual attire that only «Queens» wore.
   
 
Her twintails had been untied and carefully combed. A golden jeweled crown had been placed upon her head.
 
Her twintails had been untied and carefully combed. A golden jeweled crown had been placed upon her head.
   
The last time she ever dressed like this was back when she was invited to participate in the Grand Spirit Festival at the imperial capital during her childhood.
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The last time she ever dressed like this was back when she was invited to participate in the «Grand Spirit Festival» at the imperial capital during her childhood.
   
(...Nee-sama mentioned she was going to make me the Darkness Queen for serving the Demon King.)
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(...Nee-sama mentioned she was going to make me the «Darkness Queen» for serving the «Demon King».)
   
 
—In that case, this ritual attire must be part of the preparations.
 
—In that case, this ritual attire must be part of the preparations.
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Just as Claire bent over to decipher the spell—
 
Just as Claire bent over to decipher the spell—
   
"I constructed this barrier. No one can dispel it other than Queens equal in rank to me."
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"I constructed this barrier. No one can dispel it other than «Queens» equal in rank to me."
   
 
The gates to the room were slowly being pushed open.
 
The gates to the room were slowly being pushed open.
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Next—
 
Next—
   
"...Nee-sama, why did you betray the Elemental Lords?"
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"...Nee-sama, why did you betray the «Elemental Lords»?"
   
 
Claire asked as she stared straight into the eyes behind the mask.
 
Claire asked as she stared straight into the eyes behind the mask.
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Hearing her sister's unexpected reply, Claire became confused.
 
Hearing her sister's unexpected reply, Claire became confused.
   
"Indeed, to save this world, I must vanquish—Those Elemental Lords."
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"Indeed, to save this world, I must vanquish—Those «Elemental Lords»."
   
 
"—Are you serious, Nee-sama?"
 
"—Are you serious, Nee-sama?"
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Has she gone mad, driven by a sense of vengeance—?
 
Has she gone mad, driven by a sense of vengeance—?
   
"Without the grace and blessings of the Five Great Elemental Lords, the people living on this continent cannot start fires, cultivate the land, or even benefit from wind and water!"
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"Without the grace and blessings of the «Five Great Elemental Lords», the people living on this continent cannot start fires, cultivate the land, or even benefit from wind and water!"
   
 
"—Indeed. Hence, this world must be destroyed once."
 
"—Indeed. Hence, this world must be destroyed once."
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Those eyes, the same color as Claire's, what on earth have they seen—
 
Those eyes, the same color as Claire's, what on earth have they seen—
   
"Standing on equal footing with the Elemental Lords is the power of the Demon King—So long as that power is obtained, destroying the Elemental Lords is not impossible."
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"Standing on equal footing with the «Elemental Lords» is the power of the «Demon King»—So long as that power is obtained, destroying the «Elemental Lords» is not impossible."
   
 
"B-But in that case, many spirits will be destroyed!"
 
"B-But in that case, many spirits will be destroyed!"
   
The Elemental Lords were not only powerful spirits but also beings who ruled spirits of the natural world.
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The «Elemental Lords» were not only powerful spirits but also beings who ruled spirits of the natural world.
   
 
Destroying them meant that the power of spirits would disappear completely from the entire continent.
 
Destroying them meant that the power of spirits would disappear completely from the entire continent.

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