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===Part 1===
 
===Part 1===
   
—Four years ago, the Divine Ritual Institute's supreme council selected Duke Elstein's eldest daughter, Rubia Elstein, to succeed the position of the Fire Elemental Lord's Queen.
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—Four years ago, the «Divine Ritual Institute»
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's supreme council selected Duke Elstein's eldest daughter, Rubia Elstein, to succeed the position of the Fire Elemental Lord's «Queen».
   
The previous Queen had already passed the age of twenty-five and her ability to commune with spirits was beginning to wane. Although her age still qualified for an incumbent elementalist, the Fire Elemental Lord desired to be served by young girls.
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The previous Queen had already passed the age of twenty-five and her ability to commune with spirits was beginning to wane. Although her age still qualified for an incumbent elementalist, the «Fire Elemental Lord» desired to be served by young girls.
   
 
Back then, Rubia was just a young maiden who had just reached the age of fifteen. However, no one objected to her being chosen.
 
Back then, Rubia was just a young maiden who had just reached the age of fifteen. However, no one objected to her being chosen.
   
The prestigious House of Elstein had produced many Fire Queens in the past. Given that her talent was already flourishing and bearing fruit, it was only natural for Rubia to be selected.
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The prestigious House of Elstein had produced many «Fire Queens» in the past. Given that her talent was already flourishing and bearing fruit, it was only natural for Rubia to be selected.
   
The populace offered their blessings to the new Queen. In turn, the young Rubia responded to the people's expectations and devoted all of her attention to serving the elemental lord.
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The populace offered their blessings to the new «Queen». In turn, the young Rubia responded to the people's expectations and devoted all of her attention to serving the elemental lord.
   
Her kagura ritual dancing pleased the Elemental Lord, bringing happiness and fortune to the people on the continent.
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Her kagura ritual dancing pleased the «Elemental Lord», bringing happiness and fortune to the people on the continent.
   
 
That was what she once believed firmly.
 
That was what she once believed firmly.
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Rubia's voice trembled as she mocked herself.
 
Rubia's voice trembled as she mocked herself.
   
"Offering my kagura to the Elemental Lord without the slightest doubt, I prayed for fire's blessings to bring peace to the continent. I firmly believed that it could bring happiness to the people—"
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"Offering my kagura to the «Elemental Lord» without the slightest doubt, I prayed for fire's blessings to bring peace to the continent. I firmly believed that it could bring happiness to the people—"
   
 
"Nee-sama, you were the object of our admiration."
 
"Nee-sama, you were the object of our admiration."
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Claire sobbed as she spoke.
 
Claire sobbed as she spoke.
   
"Nee-sama, you were praised as the continent's most gentle Queen... I-I also resolved myself to become a princess maiden like you when I grew up, Nee-sama."
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"Nee-sama, you were praised as the continent's most gentle «Queen»... I-I also resolved myself to become a princess maiden like you when I grew up, Nee-sama."
   
"Rubia-sama was once the goal of all the princess maidens at the Divine Ritual Institute. Ever since Rubia-sama was selected as the Fire Queen, the power of flames was augmented and the populace was delivered from the hardships of cold winter—"
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"Rubia-sama was once the goal of all the princess maidens at the «Divine Ritual Institute». Ever since Rubia-sama was selected as the «Fire Queen», the power of flames was augmented and the populace was delivered from the hardships of cold winter—"
   
 
This time, it was Fianna's turn to speak.
 
This time, it was Fianna's turn to speak.
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Speaking of which, Rubia and Fianna had apparently been close friends during their time at the Divine Ritual Institute. Kamito suddenly recalled this fact.
 
Speaking of which, Rubia and Fianna had apparently been close friends during their time at the Divine Ritual Institute. Kamito suddenly recalled this fact.
   
"—Indeed, I once believed firmly. Those acts were for the people. The great Elemental Lord was a being who brought blessings to the people."
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"—Indeed, I once believed firmly. Those acts were for the people. The great «Elemental Lord» was a being who brought blessings to the people."
   
 
Rubia's prim and proper face was twisted in pain as she lamented in despair.
 
Rubia's prim and proper face was twisted in pain as she lamented in despair.
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Rubia bit her lip as though to suppress the rising anger in her heart.
 
Rubia bit her lip as though to suppress the rising anger in her heart.
   
"—Indeed, that particular day. It was roughly half a year after I became the Fire Queen. A small town on the Empire's border was obliterated from the land."
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"—Indeed, that particular day. It was roughly half a year after I became the «Fire Queen». A small town on the Empire's border was obliterated from the land."
   
 
"...!?"
 
"...!?"
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Claire shook her head in denial.
 
Claire shook her head in denial.
   
"...Back then, it was only thanks to your nonstop prayers, carried out with neither sleep nor rest, that the Fire Elemental Lord's wrath was pacified—"
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"...Back then, it was only thanks to your nonstop prayers, carried out with neither sleep nor rest, that the «Fire Elemental Lord»'s wrath was pacified—"
   
 
"Umm, could you pause right there?"
 
"Umm, could you pause right there?"
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Fianna also cocked her head in puzzlement.
 
Fianna also cocked her head in puzzlement.
   
"Four years ago, I was still in the Instructional School. The children who grew up there are not taught anything unrelated to their missions."
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"Four years ago, I was still in the «Instructional School». The children who grew up there are not taught anything unrelated to their missions."
   
 
Even though Kamito had acquired basic knowledge from Restia's education, he was still completely ignorant of events that happened outside the facility at the time. Hence, he had never heard of the incident known as the disaster of Dylus.
 
Even though Kamito had acquired basic knowledge from Restia's education, he was still completely ignorant of events that happened outside the facility at the time. Hence, he had never heard of the incident known as the disaster of Dylus.
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Claire shrugged and spoke quietly.
 
Claire shrugged and spoke quietly.
   
"The disaster of Dylus refers to the incident where the little town of Dylus on the border of the Ordesia Empire was obliterated from the land because they angered the Fire Elemental Lord."
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"The disaster of Dylus refers to the incident where the little town of Dylus on the border of the Ordesia Empire was obliterated from the land because they angered the «Fire Elemental Lord»."
   
 
"Obliterated?"
 
"Obliterated?"
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Kamito was dumbfounded.
 
Kamito was dumbfounded.
   
Throughout the entirety of history, there had been multiple instances of monumental disasters caused by the Elemental Lords.
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Throughout the entirety of history, there had been multiple instances of monumental disasters caused by the «Elemental Lords».
   
 
Storms, severe earthquakes, river floods, volcanic eruptions—These monumental natural disasters, recorded in the continent's history, were essentially all caused by incurring the elemental lords' wrath.
 
Storms, severe earthquakes, river floods, volcanic eruptions—These monumental natural disasters, recorded in the continent's history, were essentially all caused by incurring the elemental lords' wrath.
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Claire raised her voice to object.
 
Claire raised her voice to object.
   
"At the time, Nee-sama, your prayers did manage to reach the Elemental Lord. Everyone said that you pacified the disaster of Sidonia—"
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"At the time, Nee-sama, your prayers did manage to reach the «Elemental Lord». Everyone said that you pacified the disaster of Sidonia—"
   
 
"...Indeed. At the time, ''I saved that town''."
 
"...Indeed. At the time, ''I saved that town''."
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Her voice trembled. Then the sound of gritted teeth was heard.
 
Her voice trembled. Then the sound of gritted teeth was heard.
   
"The people of Dylus did not blame me. They even thanked me. They thanked me, the one who could do nothing about the town that was engulfed by flames. Everything went according to the Elemental Lord's wishes. This was all their own fault for incurring the elemental lord's wrath—!"
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"The people of Dylus did not blame me. They even thanked me. They thanked me, the one who could do nothing about the town that was engulfed by flames. Everything went according to the «Elemental Lord»'s wishes. This was all their own fault for incurring the elemental lord's wrath—!"
   
 
Crying out with erupting emotion, Rubia hammered a stone pillar with her fists.
 
Crying out with erupting emotion, Rubia hammered a stone pillar with her fists.
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Kamito muttered in his heart.
 
Kamito muttered in his heart.
   
In the human realm where everything borrowed the power of the spirits, the judgment of the Elemental Lords, the rulers of Astral Zero, was absolute. People were not permitted to harbor the slightest doubt.
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In the human realm where everything borrowed the power of the spirits, the judgment of the «Elemental Lords», the rulers of Astral Zero, was absolute. People were not permitted to harbor the slightest doubt.
   
 
(However, back then, she...)
 
(However, back then, she...)
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—''Doubts formed in her mind''.
 
—''Doubts formed in her mind''.
   
As a Queen who served the elemental lord directly...
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As a «Queen» who served the elemental lord directly...
   
 
(Absolutely forbidden doubts were formed—)
 
(Absolutely forbidden doubts were formed—)
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===Part 2===
 
===Part 2===
   
After that, the Elemental Lord's judgment swept through various lands in the continent on several occasions.
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After that, the «Elemental Lord»'s judgment swept through various lands in the continent on several occasions.
   
 
Every time, Rubia would beg for mercy and prayed to appease his anger. But on each occasion, by the time her prayers finally went through, people had already lost all their possessions.
 
Every time, Rubia would beg for mercy and prayed to appease his anger. But on each occasion, by the time her prayers finally went through, people had already lost all their possessions.
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Fianna cried out in surprise.
 
Fianna cried out in surprise.
   
For her who was once a princess maiden at the Divine Ritual Institute, these words carried special significance.
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For her who was once a princess maiden at the «Divine Ritual Institute», these words carried special significance.
   
Even for the Queen who was chosen from among hundreds of princess maidens, wanting to meet the True Sanctuary's Elemental Lords was absolutely taboo.
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Even for the «Queen» who was chosen from among hundreds of princess maidens, wanting to meet the True Sanctuary's «Elemental Lords» was absolutely taboo.
   
Throughout the entirety of history, there did exist Queens who were admitted to a direct audience with the elemental lords, but they all died unnatural deaths without exception.
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Throughout the entirety of history, there did exist «Queens» who were admitted to a direct audience with the elemental lords, but they all died unnatural deaths without exception.
   
 
"Of course, I did not receive permission for a direct audience with the elemental lord. The supreme council imprisoned me for the crime of irreverence and that ended up causing more displeasure to the elemental lord."
 
"Of course, I did not receive permission for a direct audience with the elemental lord. The supreme council imprisoned me for the crime of irreverence and that ended up causing more displeasure to the elemental lord."
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During those days, filled with despair—
 
During those days, filled with despair—
   
The decisive event occurred, prompting her betrayal to become the Calamity Queen.
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The decisive event occurred, prompting her betrayal to become the «Calamity Queen».
   
 
"The elemental lord demanded ''a certain offering'' from me as the price to appease his anger."
 
"The elemental lord demanded ''a certain offering'' from me as the price to appease his anger."
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It was quite common for high-ranking spirits to demand offerings from humans.
 
It was quite common for high-ranking spirits to demand offerings from humans.
   
The Divine Ritual Institute's princess maidens made offerings of the dance performances they had learned. Elementalists offered their divine power to contracted spirits.
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The «Divine Ritual Institute»'s princess maidens made offerings of the dance performances they had learned. Elementalists offered their divine power to contracted spirits.
   
 
However, what exactly did the Fire Elemental Lord seek from Rubia—
 
However, what exactly did the Fire Elemental Lord seek from Rubia—
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Claire murmured in shock.
 
Claire murmured in shock.
   
"The Elemental Lord wanted my life?"
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"The «Elemental Lord» wanted my life?"
   
 
"This is impossible to believe, Rubia-sama."
 
"This is impossible to believe, Rubia-sama."
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Fianna instantly rejected it.
 
Fianna instantly rejected it.
   
(...Indeed, it was inconceivable for an Elemental Lord to demand a living person's life as a sacrifice.)
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(...Indeed, it was inconceivable for an «Elemental Lord» to demand a living person's life as a sacrifice.)
   
 
Spirits who demanded live sacrifices were rare indeed. This was fact.
 
Spirits who demanded live sacrifices were rare indeed. This was fact.
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However, those spirits that ruled over people through fear were successively defeated by human heroes over the generations.
 
However, those spirits that ruled over people through fear were successively defeated by human heroes over the generations.
   
It was possible for an evil spirit of the earth, but it was completely inconceivable for an Elemental Lord to demand this kind of offering as one of Astral Zero's exalted rulers.
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It was possible for an evil spirit of the earth, but it was completely inconceivable for an «Elemental Lord» to demand this kind of offering as one of Astral Zero's exalted rulers.
   
 
Nevertheless—
 
Nevertheless—
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Dim flames in her eyes, Rubia spoke.
 
Dim flames in her eyes, Rubia spoke.
   
"At first, I could not believe it either. I thought it was a test of loyalty for me, the one who had doubted the Elemental Lord's judgment. I regretted my suspicions and pleaded for absolution. I kept offering kagura dancing and prayers so that the demand for sacrifice would be withdrawn. Every night, until I fell unconscious to the ground, I kept at it nonstop, nonstop, nonstop..."
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"At first, I could not believe it either. I thought it was a test of loyalty for me, the one who had doubted the «Elemental Lord»'s judgment. I regretted my suspicions and pleaded for absolution. I kept offering kagura dancing and prayers so that the demand for sacrifice would be withdrawn. Every night, until I fell unconscious to the ground, I kept at it nonstop, nonstop, nonstop..."
   
 
However, those prayers were completely in vain.
 
However, those prayers were completely in vain.
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What the elemental lord sought was not Rubia's flame but the flame of her sister, Claire.
 
What the elemental lord sought was not Rubia's flame but the flame of her sister, Claire.
   
Next, the elemental lord's flames of wrath were stoked by the Queen's persistent pleas for mercy.
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Next, the elemental lord's flames of wrath were stoked by the «Queen»'s persistent pleas for mercy.
   
 
The flames of his wrath were directed towards the people of Ordesia. The elemental lord issued a decree that threatened to rain down destruction upon the imperial capital equivalent to Dylus' plight if the sacrifice was not offered.
 
The flames of his wrath were directed towards the people of Ordesia. The elemental lord issued a decree that threatened to rain down destruction upon the imperial capital equivalent to Dylus' plight if the sacrifice was not offered.
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"How... could..."
 
"How... could..."
   
"Even for an Elemental Lord, such an atrocity cannot possibly be accepted!"
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"Even for an «Elemental Lord», such an atrocity cannot possibly be accepted!"
   
 
Fianna objected sharply.
 
Fianna objected sharply.
   
"What did the Divine Ritual Institute's supreme council say?"
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"What did the «Divine Ritual Institute»'s supreme council say?"
   
"The elders completely ignored my appeals. Despite their doubts about the disastrous decree, they simply kept repeating that the Elemental Lord's will is absolute."
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"The elders completely ignored my appeals. Despite their doubts about the disastrous decree, they simply kept repeating that the «Elemental Lord»'s will is absolute."
   
 
Rubia gritted her teeth hard and shook her head.
 
Rubia gritted her teeth hard and shook her head.
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At daybreak as judgment loomed over the imperial capital.
 
At daybreak as judgment loomed over the imperial capital.
   
Rubia broke the Divine Ritual Institute's taboo and entered the deepest part of the shrine.
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Rubia broke the «Divine Ritual Institute»'s taboo and entered the deepest part of the shrine.
   
This was a place where even Queens were absolutely forbidden.
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This was a place where even «Queens» were absolutely forbidden.
   
Astral Zero's True Sanctuary.
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Astral Zero's «True Sanctuary».
   
 
She went before the guardian spirit that protected the True Sanctuary.
 
She went before the guardian spirit that protected the True Sanctuary.
   
It probably had not expected a Queen would break the taboo. Suffering a surprise attack, the guardian spirit was devoured and destroyed by the mystical flames of absolute zero before it noticed Rubia's intentions.
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It probably had not expected a «Queen» would break the taboo. Suffering a surprise attack, the guardian spirit was devoured and destroyed by the mystical flames of absolute zero before it noticed Rubia's intentions.
   
The one hindering her from gaining an audience with the Elemental Lord no longer existed.
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The one hindering her from gaining an audience with the «Elemental Lord» no longer existed.
   
In the first place, only Queens were permitted to step foot in the shrine. Stationed outside the shrine, the spirit knights could not notice what happened inside.
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In the first place, only «Queens» were permitted to step foot in the shrine. Stationed outside the shrine, the spirit knights could not notice what happened inside.
   
 
Passing through the endless corridor leading to the True Sanctuary, Rubia reached the deepest room.
 
Passing through the endless corridor leading to the True Sanctuary, Rubia reached the deepest room.
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Her entire body shuddered from terror.
 
Her entire body shuddered from terror.
   
This girl who was the Strongest Blade Dancer's imposter...
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This girl who was the «Strongest Blade Dancer»'s imposter...
   
 
Rather than anger, she was trembling from pure terror.
 
Rather than anger, she was trembling from pure terror.
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Kamito was the first to speak.
 
Kamito was the first to speak.
   
"At the True Sanctuary where the Elemental Lords reside, ''what did you see''?"
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"At the True Sanctuary where the «Elemental Lords» reside, ''what did you see''?"
   
 
Rubia—
 
Rubia—
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She instantly understood.
 
She instantly understood.
   
"...Th-That's right. You were the previous Blade Dance's—"
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"...Th-That's right. You were the previous «Blade Dance»'s—"
   
 
(...Come to think of it, Claire already knows.)
 
(...Come to think of it, Claire already knows.)
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Claire's gaze towards Kamito did not show any signs of reprimand. Although Kamito still had some doubts, he swept them aside for now—
 
Claire's gaze towards Kamito did not show any signs of reprimand. Although Kamito still had some doubts, he swept them aside for now—
   
(...I saw the Elemental Lords three years ago?)
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(...I saw the «Elemental Lords» three years ago?)
   
Having an audience with the Elemental Lords was an absolute taboo even for a Queen.
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Having an audience with the «Elemental Lords» was an absolute taboo even for a «Queen».
   
 
However, there was ''one and only one exception''.
 
However, there was ''one and only one exception''.
   
—Namely, the winner of the Blade Dance.
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—Namely, the winner of the «Blade Dance».
   
The elementalist who obtained victory throughout the brutal blade dances was rewarded with the chance to personally voice their Wish in front of the Elemental Lords ruling from the True Sanctuary.
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The elementalist who obtained victory throughout the brutal blade dances was rewarded with the chance to personally voice their «Wish» in front of the «Elemental Lords» ruling from the True Sanctuary.
   
 
(...!)
 
(...!)
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(Restia, you should know, right?)
 
(Restia, you should know, right?)
   
The true identity of that which had caused the Calamity Queen to despair.
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The true identity of that which had caused the «Calamity Queen» to despair.
   
 
"That day, what I saw was—"
 
"That day, what I saw was—"
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Covering her arm was an ominous seal that resembled a snake.
 
Covering her arm was an ominous seal that resembled a snake.
   
(That's a Cursed Armament Seal...!)
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(That's a cursed armament seal...!)
   
 
"...Looks like the final moment has arrived."
 
"...Looks like the final moment has arrived."

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