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—''The Demon King is already here''.
 
—''The Demon King is already here''.
   
Kamito soon understood the meaning behind Rubia's words.
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Kamito soon figured out the meaning behind Rubia's words.
   
 
"...So what the heck is that?"
 
"...So what the heck is that?"
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Kamito narrowed his eyes and asked Rubia.
 
Kamito narrowed his eyes and asked Rubia.
   
A crimson cloak in the color of blood with shoulder pads featuring countless spikes.
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A crimson overcoat in the color of blood with shoulder pads featuring countless spikes.
   
 
Pitch-black armor engraved with designs of demonic beasts. A staff shaped like intertwined snakes. Finally, there was an eerie skull mask whose eye sockets were fitted with crimson spirit crystals.
 
Pitch-black armor engraved with designs of demonic beasts. A staff shaped like intertwined snakes. Finally, there was an eerie skull mask whose eye sockets were fitted with crimson spirit crystals.
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Sighing, Kamito hung up his Academy uniform in the closet of this dust-covered room, changing into the pitch-black armor that was engraved with demonic beasts.
 
Sighing, Kamito hung up his Academy uniform in the closet of this dust-covered room, changing into the pitch-black armor that was engraved with demonic beasts.
   
He then put on the blood-red cloak and the spike-tipped boots.
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He then put on the blood-red overcoat and the spike-tipped boots.
   
 
Finally, he covered his face with the creepy skull mask.
 
Finally, he covered his face with the creepy skull mask.
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(I expected my view to be blocked, but visibility is surprisingly good...)
 
(I expected my view to be blocked, but visibility is surprisingly good...)
   
Spirit crystals glowing red had been installed into the skull's eyes and apparently enchanted with Night Vision magic allowing him to see clearly in dark conditions. Furthermore, the armor worn under the cloak also felt lighter than expected, not uncomfortable at all.
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Spirit crystals glowing red had been installed into the skull's eyes and apparently enchanted with Night Vision magic allowing him to see clearly in dark conditions. Furthermore, the armor worn under the overcoat also felt lighter than expected, not uncomfortable at all.
   
 
(...Next, I guess this is my "script.")
 
(...Next, I guess this is my "script.")
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Despite minor differences, the Demon King's image was essentially portrayed like this.
 
Despite minor differences, the Demon King's image was essentially portrayed like this.
   
"Indeed, he was frequently clad in that blood-red cloak. However, he neither wore that kind of skull mask nor spewed smoke—"
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"Indeed, he was frequently clad in that blood-red overcoat. However, he neither wore that kind of skull mask nor spewed smoke—"
   
 
Restia giggled on the bed.
 
Restia giggled on the bed.

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