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With that sound, Kamito finally regained his senses.
 
With that sound, Kamito finally regained his senses.
   
"Ah—Err...," Kamito stumbled over his words.
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"Ah— Err...," Kamito stumbled over his words.
   
 
He tore his gaze from the naked girl who was still standing motionlessly.
 
He tore his gaze from the naked girl who was still standing motionlessly.
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Kamito screamed out; at the same time, the whip swung downwards towards his feet, causing a violent spark to slam onto the ground. Rising from the ground, the whip immediately sprang in the direction of the woods, causing more trees to be cut down.
 
Kamito screamed out; at the same time, the whip swung downwards towards his feet, causing a violent spark to slam onto the ground. Rising from the ground, the whip immediately sprang in the direction of the woods, causing more trees to be cut down.
   
Fortunately among all the unluckiness Kamito was experiencing, the girl—Claire's- aim was quite bad.
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Fortunately among all the unluckiness Kamito was experiencing, the girl— Claire's- aim was quite bad.
   
 
This stands to reason though, as one hand was hiding her chest from being seen. In order to conceal her most important part she had squatted in the pond. However, considering how well she was able to handle her whip in such a position, she should normally be quite skilled at using it.
 
This stands to reason though, as one hand was hiding her chest from being seen. In order to conceal her most important part she had squatted in the pond. However, considering how well she was able to handle her whip in such a position, she should normally be quite skilled at using it.
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"...eh?" Instantly, Claire's facial expression froze. And— "Kyaaaaaaaaaah!"
 
"...eh?" Instantly, Claire's facial expression froze. And— "Kyaaaaaaaaaah!"
   
Blushing deeply and screaming in a strangely cute voice—she quickly hid her chest with both of her hands.
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Blushing deeply and screaming in a strangely cute voice— she quickly hid her chest with both of her hands.
   
 
"Ah, idiot!" Kamito involuntarily exclaimed.
 
"Ah, idiot!" Kamito involuntarily exclaimed.
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Kamito slowly woke into consciousness, the forest unfolding before his eyes.
 
Kamito slowly woke into consciousness, the forest unfolding before his eyes.
   
He tried to get up—suddenly, he realized that something was coiled around his neck.
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He tried to get up— suddenly, he realized that something was coiled around his neck.
   
 
It was a leather black whip commonly used for torturing. ''What is this thing'', Kamito thought as he tried to take the whip off.
 
It was a leather black whip commonly used for torturing. ''What is this thing'', Kamito thought as he tried to take the whip off.
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Claire blushed, suddenly turned back around and briskly walked in the direction she had indicated earlier.
 
Claire blushed, suddenly turned back around and briskly walked in the direction she had indicated earlier.
   
Claire Rouge—obviously the name is a pseudonym.
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Claire Rouge —— obviously the name is a pseudonym.
   
 
Most of the students attending the Areishia Spirit Academy were the young ladies of noble families who have been trained as potential elementalists since childhood. However well-versed he was in the noble families, Kamito had never heard of the Rouge family. Claire was hiding her noble family name. She must have some reason to do so, but Kamito had no intention to delve deeper.
 
Most of the students attending the Areishia Spirit Academy were the young ladies of noble families who have been trained as potential elementalists since childhood. However well-versed he was in the noble families, Kamito had never heard of the Rouge family. Claire was hiding her noble family name. She must have some reason to do so, but Kamito had no intention to delve deeper.
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Claire shook off Kamito's hand that was grabbing her wrist. "No, you escape yourself. I will absolutely make this spirit mine."
 
Claire shook off Kamito's hand that was grabbing her wrist. "No, you escape yourself. I will absolutely make this spirit mine."
   
"You, for what reason—do you need a strong spirit that badly?"
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"You, for what reason— do you need a strong spirit that badly?"
   
 
".....You will never understand." Claire averted her eyes.
 
".....You will never understand." Claire averted her eyes.
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Violent sparks scattered once again. Claire struck hard at the ground with her leather whip, slowly pressing forward against the sword spirit. It looked like the leather whip was not meant for battle, rather for signaling instructions to the spirit.
 
Violent sparks scattered once again. Claire struck hard at the ground with her leather whip, slowly pressing forward against the sword spirit. It looked like the leather whip was not meant for battle, rather for signaling instructions to the spirit.
   
At the fierce attacks of Scarlet, the spirit sword's movement stopped—At that instant,
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At the fierce attacks of Scarlet, the spirit sword's movement stopped— At that instant,
   
 
"Eat this—''Searing Fireball''!"
 
"Eat this—''Searing Fireball''!"
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In his right hand which had been stabbed by the spirit sword-instead of a wound, an emblem of two swords crossing each other had been engraved upon it.
 
In his right hand which had been stabbed by the spirit sword-instead of a wound, an emblem of two swords crossing each other had been engraved upon it.
   
It was the proof of the spirit contract—the spirit seal.
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It was the proof of the spirit contract — the spirit seal.
   
 
''Aah, I did it...'' Kamito murmured as he stared at the carved seal on the back of his hand.
 
''Aah, I did it...'' Kamito murmured as he stared at the carved seal on the back of his hand.

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