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Kamito dropped his shoulders and sighed in resignation. |
Kamito dropped his shoulders and sighed in resignation. |
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− | Claire's room was on the second floor of the aristocrat residence |
+ | Claire's room was on the second floor of the aristocrat residence like female dormitory. |
"Don't make too much noise, because the dormitory secretary is super scary." |
"Don't make too much noise, because the dormitory secretary is super scary." |
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No matter how rough her personality was, Claire was a girl. |
No matter how rough her personality was, Claire was a girl. |
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− | In addition, she was an outstandingly, pitifully beautiful girl; even Kamito could not help but admit that. |
+ | In addition, she was an outstandingly, pitifully, beautiful girl; even Kamito could not help but admit that. |
As expected, when he entered the room, he grew tense. |
As expected, when he entered the room, he grew tense. |
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'The Count And The Naughty Princess', 'Tease Me More, Master!', 'The Princess Abducted By Pirates'... Indeed these are what teenage girls like. There were ten-odd such romance novels, which were intended for teenagers. |
'The Count And The Naughty Princess', 'Tease Me More, Master!', 'The Princess Abducted By Pirates'... Indeed these are what teenage girls like. There were ten-odd such romance novels, which were intended for teenagers. |
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− | "Hmm, so you like this kind of stuff. That was a little unexpected." |
+ | "Hmm, so, you like this kind of stuff. That was a little unexpected." |
− | "... |
+ | "...Id... Don't look!" |
<nowiki>*</nowiki>Bofun.* |
<nowiki>*</nowiki>Bofun.* |
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She was—not nude. |
She was—not nude. |
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− | She was nude |
+ | She was nude but she was not exactly nude. |
Transparent jelly-like water was twining itself slimily around her smooth, bare body! |
Transparent jelly-like water was twining itself slimily around her smooth, bare body! |
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"Ah... Hyaa... don't...do... that..." |
"Ah... Hyaa... don't...do... that..." |
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− | It seemed that the water spirit of the spirit device went wild. Claire was frantically trying to control it |
+ | It seemed that the water spirit of the spirit device went wild. Claire was frantically trying to control it but there was no way she could do it in that condition. |
"Hold on, I'll help you right now!" |
"Hold on, I'll help you right now!" |
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In Claire's hand, an earnest flaming ball of spirit magic was born. |
In Claire's hand, an earnest flaming ball of spirit magic was born. |
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− | "Wa...Wait, calm down. You're mistaken, this is a mistake, if I explain |
+ | "Wa...Wait, calm down. You're mistaken, this is a mistake, if I explain you'll—" |
"Shut up! T...Turn into cinders, you pervert—!" |
"Shut up! T...Turn into cinders, you pervert—!" |