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"Yes, grandfather."
 
"Yes, grandfather."
   
Towards the old aged grandfather's Duke Fahrengart's words, the little girl nodded and replied with a dignified voice.
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Towards the old aged grandfather's, Duke Fahrengart's words, the little girl nodded and replied with a dignified voice.
   
 
She had auburn colored pupils blessed with strong light and beautiful eyebrows that were sharply angled.
 
She had auburn colored pupils blessed with strong light and beautiful eyebrows that were sharply angled.
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Her soft breasts were touching and rubbing on the iron fence. Her recent worries were that compared to the other girls at the same age, her breasts were developing too much.
 
Her soft breasts were touching and rubbing on the iron fence. Her recent worries were that compared to the other girls at the same age, her breasts were developing too much.
   
("Really.....Things like breasts just posses as a nuisance to swinging a sword.)
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("Really...Things like breasts just posses as a nuisance to swinging a sword.)
   
Regarding this topic, the girls around her were completely jealous, however—
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Regarding this topic, the girls around her were completely jealous, however...
   
 
For Ellis, who had totally no interest regarding love affairs, having huge breasts was simply an obstruction.
 
For Ellis, who had totally no interest regarding love affairs, having huge breasts was simply an obstruction.
   
("......Something like love is pointless, I will become a knight. A splendid knight just like my esteemed sister.")
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("...Something like love is pointless, I will become a knight. A splendid knight just like my esteemed sister.")
   
 
Ellis strongly closed her fist, at that moment.
 
Ellis strongly closed her fist, at that moment.
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Having long black hair that extended to her hips, she had the foreign-styled attire with a large slit inserted at the edge of the pants.
 
Having long black hair that extended to her hips, she had the foreign-styled attire with a large slit inserted at the edge of the pants.
   
Although having youthful features, she was so beautiful that even Ellis, despite being of the same gender, was taken back.
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Although having youthful features, she was so beautiful that even Ellis, despite being of the same gender, was taken aback.
   
 
In her hands lay, contrary to her lovely appearance, an ominous darkness-colored sword.
 
In her hands lay, contrary to her lovely appearance, an ominous darkness-colored sword.
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"Ren Ashbell, an independent elementalist."
 
"Ren Ashbell, an independent elementalist."
   
"Independent........not belonging to any country or organization. Is that what you're implying?"
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"Independent... not belonging to any country or organization. Is that what you're implying?"
   
 
"Yeah. It seems like there was the influence of a powerful person. It also seems like she's the same age as you, 13 years old."
 
"Yeah. It seems like there was the influence of a powerful person. It also seems like she's the same age as you, 13 years old."
   
"......."
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"..."
   
 
Ellis bit her lips. Although having the same age, the fact that the girl was participating in the Blade Dance, was truly mortifying.
 
Ellis bit her lips. Although having the same age, the fact that the girl was participating in the Blade Dance, was truly mortifying.
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And then, the bell signaling the start of the match was rang.
 
And then, the bell signaling the start of the match was rang.
   
The greatest kagura offered to the Five Great Elemental Lords— the Blade Dance had begun.
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The greatest kagura offered to the Five Great Elemental Lords, the Blade Dance, had begun.
   
Immediately Velsaria Eva's armor activated— and instantly shifted into battle form.
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Immediately Velsaria Eva's armor activated and instantly shifted into battle form.
   
 
Sparkling particles of light constructed her composite armor. From both shoulders large twin-main cannons emerged.
 
Sparkling particles of light constructed her composite armor. From both shoulders large twin-main cannons emerged.
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That truly was the impregnable fortress that reigned over the lands.
 
That truly was the impregnable fortress that reigned over the lands.
   
Velsaria Eva's elemental waffe —Silent Fortress.
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Velsaria Eva's elemental waffe, Silent Fortress.
   
 
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(.........What a contracted spirit. No, the one that should be praised is my esteemed sister, the one using it.)
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(...What a contracted spirit. No, the one that should be praised is my esteemed sister, the one using it.)
   
 
Velsaria's contracted spirit was an ancient sealed spirit that was sealed under a certain old castle.
 
Velsaria's contracted spirit was an ancient sealed spirit that was sealed under a certain old castle.
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Just thinking about the ability difference between her and her target, also being her sister, she succumbed to feelings of shame.
 
Just thinking about the ability difference between her and her target, also being her sister, she succumbed to feelings of shame.
   
(W-Will I be able to catch up to my esteemed sister.......)
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(W... Will I be able to catch up to my esteemed sister...)
   
Velsaria swung her hand up, —the main cannons on both her shoulders fired once.
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Velsaria swung her hand up, the main cannons on both her shoulders fired once.
   
She did not like a refined blade dance. She would always blast her utmost maximum firepower at her oncoming opponent—it was an extremely simple battle style.
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She did not like a refined blade dance. She would always blast her utmost maximum firepower at her oncoming opponent... it was an extremely simple battle style.
   
 
There was an ear-splitting thunderous sound. In the arena, countless of pillars of fire's rose up.
 
There was an ear-splitting thunderous sound. In the arena, countless of pillars of fire's rose up.
   
It was over— not only Ellis, but thousands of the audience were sure about it.
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It was over, not only Ellis, but thousands of the audience were sure about it.
   
 
But.
 
But.
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Ellis widely opened her eyes.
 
Ellis widely opened her eyes.
   
The cloud of dust cleared up and—
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The cloud of dust cleared up and...
   
 
That black-haired girl's figure wasn't there.
 
That black-haired girl's figure wasn't there.
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In that instant, a high-pitched metal-sound echoed.
 
In that instant, a high-pitched metal-sound echoed.
   
Before anyone knew —the girl had moved to in front of Velsaria.
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Before anyone knew, the girl had moved to in front of Velsaria.
   
 
The demon sword of the girl with fluttering black hair stabbed through the Silent Fortress's composite armor.
 
The demon sword of the girl with fluttering black hair stabbed through the Silent Fortress's composite armor.
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Silence arrived.
 
Silence arrived.
   
And then—
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And then...
   
 
When the audiences finally noticed the situation, a break of cheers arose from where they were.
 
When the audiences finally noticed the situation, a break of cheers arose from where they were.
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It was an unbelievable outcome. From the military based family, the Fahrengart Duke's knight was beaten by a young unnamed elementalist.
 
It was an unbelievable outcome. From the military based family, the Fahrengart Duke's knight was beaten by a young unnamed elementalist.
   
"......"
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"..."
   
 
While Ellis was bewildered, the black haired girl that has beaten Velsaria was bewitching.
 
While Ellis was bewildered, the black haired girl that has beaten Velsaria was bewitching.
   
The elementalist that has beaten her respected sister— by all right, was supposed to be someone hated.
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The elementalist that has beaten her respected sister, by all right, was supposed to be someone hated.
   
 
But, at that time what Ellis was embracing in her chest was a feeling opposite of hatred.
 
But, at that time what Ellis was embracing in her chest was a feeling opposite of hatred.
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She was 13 years old. Although the girl was of the same age, she had shown her overwhelming power.
 
She was 13 years old. Although the girl was of the same age, she had shown her overwhelming power.
   
(Someday I too, just like her—)
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(Someday I too, just like her...)
   
 
A faint bud of admiration eventually became Ellis' clear goal and was carved into her heart.
 
A faint bud of admiration eventually became Ellis' clear goal and was carved into her heart.
   
Together with the name the Strongest Blade Dancer— Ren Ashbell.
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Together with the name the Strongest Blade Dancer, Ren Ashbell.
 
   
 
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===References and Translation Notes===
 
===References and Translation Notes===
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