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When the princess maidens bowed, Kamito stole a glance of their bare breasts underneath the garment and his heart throbbed.
 
When the princess maidens bowed, Kamito stole a glance of their bare breasts underneath the garment and his heart throbbed.
   
Looking closely, the ceremonial garments they were wearing were equivalent to being half-naked.
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Looking closely, the ceremonial garments they were wearing was equivalent to being half-naked.
   
 
The opening above the breasts was large and at the hem of skirts, a slight amount of youthful skin was peeking out.
 
The opening above the breasts was large and at the hem of skirts, a slight amount of youthful skin was peeking out.
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The smiling Carol asked and Kamito averted his eyes.
 
The smiling Carol asked and Kamito averted his eyes.
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===Part 4===
 
===Part 4===

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